Monday, January 1, 2007

   Crimson Bloody Roses Chapter 1
On a stormy night a man in his 20s was walking his girlfriend home from their date. As they walked, huddled under his big black umbrella down the muddy dirt road,she stopped and turned towards him. "Gabriel, i'v had a wonderful night,"
she said as she leaned agaist his chest. she pulled out a red rose,"Can we stop by the cemetery so I can put this rose on my mothers gravestone?" AS they walked Gabriel admired her long black hair that curled as it fell to her shouldersand her bright blue eyes.
"Sure Rose"said gabriel as they continued and headed towards the graveyard that her family owned. Once they reach the row of graves that her mothers grave was in they stopped. "Follow me."said Rose as she stepped out from underneth the umbrella and walked towards a small grey buliding with a streetlight attached to it.
he didn't have a flashlight with him and it was getting to dark to see clearly. Gabriel walked into the light of the streetlight and followed Rose's voice." Do you truily love me?"she asked him as she leaned against him.
"yes and i always will."he answered.
"Forever?"
"Allways."
As Gabriel looked down to kiss her he noticed Roses horror stricken face. He quickly spun around to see what was wrong. In the darkness he could make out three figiures. As one of the men steped into the light of the street light Gabriel could make out the details on the man's face. The only things abnormal about his face was his pircing red eyes and two glisining fang barely showing under his lips.
Rose stayed close behind Gabriel as the man drew closer. " Don't worry Rose I won't let theses guys hurt yo..." Gabriel never finished his sentence before two sharp fangs sank deep within the backside of his neck. Gabriel fell over on to the ground blood draining from his body.
The last things gabriel saw before falling unconcouis was Rose's face, pircing red eyes and two fang showing from under her lips,and a bloody red rose hit the ground in front of him.



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Sunday, December 31, 2006

Crimson Bloody Roses
this is an idea i had for a manga. I put the storys 1st chapter in written form.Here is an exert from the chapter. Hope you enjoy this little preveiw.



... Gabriel looked down at Rose's horror striken face. He spun around to see what was wrong. in the darkness Gabriel made out three dark figures. As one of the figures stepped into the dim light of the graveyards street light. He made out the details on the man's face. the only thing abnormal about the man was the two glisining fangs barely showing under the man's lips. Rose stode close behind Gabriel. "Don't worry i won't let these guys hurt yo...."Gabriel never finished his sentance befor two white fang sank deep within the backside of his neck. Gabriel fell to the ground the last thing he saw before falling unconcious was Rose's face, tears streaming down the side of her face and two bloody fangs from under her lips....


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