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Thursday, July 7, 2005


chapter 1: maiden of the water
on frece and thine's escape they find a maiden wading in the water.

frece: YOU THERE WHO R YOU?

maiden:*gasp**splash in to water*

thine: prince frece i here this is a enchanted lake my lord

frece: ENCHANTED?!

thine: yes my lord they say a maiden of great power lurks in these waters

frece:oh . .

(ean while on the other side of the lake a team of bandits working for the king fo elter r poised to attach the prince.)

bandit one: whan r we going to attach!!

bandit cheif: once the get close enoughf LUMIX!!*hits him on the head*

bandit two: cheif whos that in the water?

bandit chief: i dont know! SHOOT AT IT!!!

*arrows fly at the maiden*

maiden: *gasp**flys out of the water*GURR!! FOR DISRUPTING MY WATERS YOU WILL NEVER BE FORGIVEN!!GRRAAAAAAA!!!*water flys out**turns in to ice spikes*

all the bandits: AAAHHHHH!!

(prince frece and thine go check what happened)

frece: WHAT THE!! what happened here.

thine: the maiden did this!

frece. WHAA!! how could she do this!!

thine: they must have disterbed her water. the maiden controls all of the water in here and she cares dearly for everything in it.

frece: o.o oh so they . . disterbed her . . water . and . . she did this . . . to . . . . .them. . . *backs away from the water*

troop: commander thine!

thine: yes what is it troop!

troop: a massive ammount of troops r headed this way.

thine: PRINCE FRECE MY LORD WE NEED TO GET OUT OF HERE NOW!!

frece: lets go!!

not the best chapter but its ok^__^

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