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Sunday, August 15, 2004


   The third part.
Here is the concluding third part to my fanfic. Hope you like the ending!

---A Lady's Wrath
Elric walked over to the defeated Ruby...

"Do you admit defeat Ruby?" asked Elric, grinning.

"Yes..." said Ruby in reply.

"Hahahahaha... how interesting. Now I'll forgive you for this if you say that I'm a better fighter than you." said Elric, now laughing arrogantly. Elric had to punish those that dare to hurt his sweetheart.

"Elric, you are a superior fighter to me..." said Ruby emotionlessly, "NOT!" At that instant, Ruby suddenly became a mass of slithering vines, holding each of his six swords down firmly.

"WHAT?! What is the meaning of this?!" screamed Elric in disbelief. The loser Ruby in front of him is now nothing more than an illusion, covering a mass of vines controlled to look like the real Ruby.

"Over here big boy... hehehehehahahaha..." boomed Ruby's voice from behind. The storm of leaves that Ruby summoned was a distraction, a medium for which Ruby would hide in. Then from the swirling leaves, Ruby emerged and dashed towards the surprised Elric, lashing her whip out, catching Elric around the neck, knocking him on to his back.

"So, where's that laugh now huh? Not so tough now are we? Hmhahahahahaha... Do you admit defeat?" Ruby asked, pinning Elric down with her right foot.

"Y..yes..." Elric reluctantly said. His pride now was crushed.

"How dare you mock Elric like that?! I'll get you for this!" screamed Lillia, grabbing a nearby metal pipe.

"No Lillia! A loss is a loss. As a man of honour, I will accept this defeat. But be warned Ruby, the next time we meet again, it will be you that is going to be admitting defeat... Lillia, let's go..." said Elric, slowly getting up. Lillia helped Elric into his car, quickly driving away, trying to forget the embarassment faced here.

"Well that's that. Come along now Selena, I believe that pair of pants in waiting for me." Ruby, said, changing back into her normal clothes.

"Yes, let's go." Selena said with a smile, walking back to the mall for more shopping.

---The End

Well that's the end of my three part short story fanfic. All comments and criticisms are welcome!

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