Wednesday, June 21, 2006

Chapter 20 dual of the leaders
I stood in front of everyone after the fusion. ¨This fight doesn't need to go on. Ruki, I challenge you to a dual. If I win then you and your friends must leave, but if you win you can kill Sano," I said. (¨Sano-kun, what are you saying?"i asked Sano in our mind) (¨Like you said, I the leader of this group. If we should lose then I will sacrifice my life to spar all of yours,¨ he said) ¨Ï accept your challenge. Now let the fight begin!¨ Ruki yelled and dashed at me. ¨Alright," I said as I took my stance. As soon as Ruki was close it seemed like Sano-kun´s fighting ability took over. I was able to dodge the attack and counter her with a backhand. Ruki stumbled for a bit and then regained her balance. She once again charged at me and this time she made a bit of a stand. It was a fierce battle. We were moving with blinding speed and grace. On a few occasions we managed a hit on the other. ¨How long do you think this will go on? I have an anime contest to win in 15 minutes,¨ Uzimaki said. ¨ Soon. Ruki´s just baiting her,¨ Mino said. ¨Kimari-san, your sister did something to wake Sano-kun up. What was it?¨ Kira asked. ¨Do you promise not to get mad?¨ Kimari asked. ¨Yes. Now what did she do?¨ Kira asked impatiently. ¨She used her ´healing kiss´ to restore his energy,¨ he said. ¨WHHHHHHHAAAAAATTTT!?!?!?!?!?!¨ she screamed. Back at the battle, Ruki had caused trees to grow from the ground. She made a forest just so she could have an advantage. (¨Sano-kun, what do we do?¨ I asked Sano) (¨You leave that to me,¨ he answered.) ¨WILD FIRE RAIN!!¨ I shouted. I shoot two streams of fire into the air. They formed clouds as they gathered. After enough fire was condensed in the sky fire balls rained down and hit the trees. Ruki just leaped to another tree to avoid the attack..


This might end if I could attack her with some type of attack. ¨Hee hee. You did good keeping up. But its time to end it. Dragon art: Wood style!! Bring forth the foliage of the ground to my call. Blossoms of cherries swirl and surround. Extinguish the flames before me. Cherry Blossom chaos!!!¨ Ruki yelled. She summoned thousands upon thousands of cherry blossoms. She looked up at me with a smirk. ¨These blossoms have special properties. Instead of taking in carbon dioxide they absorb oxygen. And everyone knows that a fire needs oxygen to live. Now my blossoms ATTACK!!!¨ she ordered The blossoms rushed at me and surrounded me. I felt the power of fire start to leave me. (¨ÄAUUGGHHHH!!!!¨ Sano screamed in pain.) (¨Sano-kun, what's wrong?¨ I asked) ( ¨My strength is leaving me. I can take much more of this. I'll use the last of my power to keep the fusion up, but I won´t be able to fight,¨he said) (¨All right. I´ll end this,¨ I said) ¨This is not good. There has to be something I can do,¨ I said. Then I looked at my sword. That was it. I drew my sword and hurled it at Ruki. It went through her stomach. ¨Ugh,¨ she bent over. ¨This is not over yet. But for now you win. Mino, Jonuku, Uzimaki lets go,¨ Ruki said. Then in a breeze of cherry blossoms they all vanished. We de-fused and were with the group. ¨Sano-kun, are you alright?¨ Kimari asked Sano. ¨Not really. Look at my back,¨ he said. He took of his jacket and revealed it. On his back he had the ten elemental symbols scared on his back. When you connect the kanjis they make the symbol of the Phoenix we all wear. It would be a part of him forever. ¨ It dosen´t hurt as long as no one touches it,¨ he said. As soon as he said that Kira and Kagome walked up behind him and slapped his back. He screamed like a scared little girl. ¨THATS FOR KISSING MEIA-CHAN!¨ they yelled. ¨Come on we have to get back. They´ll be announcing the winner of the contest,¨ Marco pipped in.
We all rushed back as they were announcing the winner. ¨And the winner is ..... this is weird. We have a two way tie. Yuroto Sano and Onry Meia!!!¨ the announcer called. A light shined down on us. ¨Since this is the first ever tie you both must do a dare to the other,¨ he said ¨Yuroto-san, you first.¨ ¨OK.. Meia-san you have to fly like Setsuna from Negima,¨ He said. I nodded and sprouted wings. I took to the sky and did a few maneuvers. After I landed it was my turn. ¨Sano-kun you have to ether go phoenix form or kiss me, Kira, and Kagome,¨ I said with a smile. He automatically went Phoenix form. He didn´t want to kiss us. He is a nice guy. ¨That's all for today kids. Have a good summer,¨ the announcer said. As we walked home Sano had a serious look on his face. ¨What is it Sano-kun?¨ I asked. ¨Tomorrow we leave for the sacred stones. And we only have 2 months to find them. Since they have been scattered to the 4 winds we will all have to separate,¨ he said. ¨That's true,¨ I said. ¨Well then lets go enjoy this last night together,¨ Kira said. That night we all went to a club and partied till we dropped. The next day we all meet up at Kira´s house. I looked around for Sano but he wasen´t there. ¨You ready for this?¨ Oni-san asked. ¨Yes,¨"I said. ¨Then it is time we left.¨ Sano was up on the light post. He was wrapped in a cloak. This must have been what Sano looked like before he meet us. ¨The time has come for us to leave. We may be separate but our hearts will always be connected. Till then my friends farewell,¨ he said. He turned and was about to leave. ¨WAIT!¨ Kira yelled. He stopped and looked back. ¨Marco travailed Japan and found the locations of the stones. But they all have a seal that only that Phoenix can break,¨ she said. Then she handed out maps to our own individual stones. Then with a smile on her face she took off in her own way. I started of as well. And like Sano said, we may be separate but our hearts are connected. We will meet again.

End of Order of the Phoenix


That´s all folks no more of the order of the phoenix. NAAAAAHHHH ;) This is just book one. Stay close for the Chronicles's Of the Elements: Search for the stones
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Tuesday, June 6, 2006

Chapter 19 Ki control and a ray of light
I was glowing red. "So, you still have some fight in you huh? Well then I'll have to fix that," Ruki said. I glared at her. "I'll fight you now," she said. Then two branches rose from the ground. She pulled them up and they became a pair of battle axes. She charged. I ducked and dodged her attacks. This was still a pretty one sided battle. I was worn down and in human form, while she was in full on dragon and fresh for a fight. "Well? Where's that Ki control you promised?" She asked slashing. "Right here. SOLOR FLARE!!!" I yelled. I backed up put my hands to my forehead and unleashed a bright light. "AAAAUUUGHHHH! MY EYES!!!!" she yelled. I ran in and punched her in the stomach. "I thought you couldn't hit a girl," she said. "Normally no I couldn't, but in a fight however there are no genders between the fighters," I clarified. Then I began to launch my counter attack. "Your good Yuroto, but how will you fair against all of us?" Ruki declared. "EVERYONE ATTACK!!!!!!" she yelled. "Bring it. Kage Bushino Jutsu!!!!(Art of the doppelganger)" I yelled. I created 9 clones in an instant. "Let's go boys!!!!" I ordered. And the fight was on.


After a good half hour my clones were gone. And I was fighting all my friends at once. "Come on guys! Snap out of it," I said. They couldn't hear me. They were brainwashed. That's when I decided to do my own Jutsu. I jumped up. I preformed some hand seals from Naruto. I finished it with the seal of the horse. "Sano-style: Ki control Jutsu!!!" I called. As soon as I landed I spread my arms. I unraveled a humongous amount of energy into the battle field. Then time slowed down. The secret to this jutsu is that by releasing my ki I can control anything it touches. Case in point, I stopped my friends. So while they were stopped I decided to get those seeds of my friends. I did several more hand seals and finished it with the seal of the Tiger. " Katon: Housenka no Jutsu! (Flame Type: Mythical Fire Flower Technique)" I yelled. I shout 5 small fire balls at my friends' necks. And since my jutsu was still in place they stopped. "Time in, Ki reverse!" I drew in my ki. Now that things were back to normal my fire balls were in full force. They hit each of my friends and hit the seeds. "AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" they all yelled. The seeds dropped off and burned.



"Huh what happened?" Kira asked. "Why is my head spinning?" Marco asked. "Man that was weird," kimari said. "Its like I've been in a fog," Kagome said. " Sano-kun, are you ok? You're bleeding badly," Meia asked. "Fenikkusu Kaihen," I called. I re-phoenixed and was still bleeding. "I'm fine. Let's just finish this before I bleed to death," I said. "I'll explain everything to you guys later. But for now lets get these guys," I said. "Alright," they all said. "Charge!!!!!!" I yelled. "Uzimaki, stop them," Ruki said. Uzimaki created a wall of ice in front of us. "Kira-san lets double team that wall," I said. "How? Fire can't melt it," She said. "Use the shinku hadoken and I'll handle the rest," I said. "Okay," she said. "SHINKU HADOKEN!!!!!" She yelled. I stood next to her. "KAMEHAMEHAAAAAAA!!" I yelled. We fired our energy blasts at the wall and destroyed it. "What?!?" Ruki yelled. I dropped to the ground. "SANO-CHAN!!" Kira yelled. "That's it. I'm spent. Kira-san take them down," I said weakly. Then all went black………. Then a light had shown. It pierced the dark hold around my body. Giving me strength. It was warm. I was regaining conciseness. I opened my eyes. Meia was over me with her lips on mine. …….WHAT?!?!?!?! She kissed me!! She actually kissed me?? "WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING?!?" I shouted. "It's the healing kiss. It rejuvenates the one I kiss," Meia said. "BUT STILL!!!!! DID YOU HAVE TO?!?!" I continued to shout. "It was the only way. Without you this team is as good as useless. We need you," she said. I started to blush. "Well, as this team's leader I suggest that we Phoenix fuse," I said. "Alright," Meia said. "Fenikkusu Kaihen!!" I called. A second later I was in Phoenix form. "Ready?" I asked. "Ready," she said. I took off my right gauntlet and handed it to her. She did the same. Then we put them on. "PHOENIX FUSION!!! FIRE AND LIGHT!!!" we called. Then the change began. Since I'm a guy this part would be kind of difficult to explain. 'Gozen everyone.' 'Meia-san, right on time.' 'What is it Sano-kun?' 'I writing a book on our past adventures and battles and I'm at the part where we first fuse. Since I'm a guy could you write down what happened?' 'Sure I could.' 'Thanks.' Hi everyone. It's nice to meet you. I'm Meia Onry: the light Phoenix. Now where did Sano-kun leave off? Oh there. Ok, so as he was saying or fusion had just begun. The first major change was we became a girl. And a pretty hot one if I do say so. Our new color was a dark pink. Hee hee now I see why Sano-kun didn't want to write this part. So our new weapon was a different type of sword then Sano-kun worked with. It had the ability to transform into a cross bow. Our new hair color was also a dark shade of pink. As well as our eyes. It was fun because the whole time Sano-kun and I were in the same head. And I could hear everything he thought. "What the hell is going on?!?! I'm turning into a girl!!!!" he said. All I could do was laugh at him. The fusion was now complete. All the others did was watch. "So who are you?" Ruki asked me. "My name is Kamekaji: Phoenix of the divine flame," I said.

End of chapter 19
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Thursday, June 1, 2006

Chapter 18 The mind is a fickle thing
Bam!!!!! Bam!!!!! They were good. The dragons were matching us blow for blow. I was fighting Jonuku, Marco and Kimari were fighting Uzimaki, Kira was going toe to toe with Mino, and Kagome and Meia were taking on Ruki. This could be bad. I thought. “You thinkin’ of helpin’ your friends? Don’t. Your fight is with me,” Jonuku said as he lunged at me. Marco just got slammed into the ground. Kimari ran over to help him but was cut short by a wall of ice. Uzimaki’s weapon was a zanbato. He was slashing at him. Kimari was blocking but was having problems. Kira was moving fast in her rapid falls assault. But she was still having problems. Mino was throwing shuriken at her and then closed in on her. Meia was shooting arrows of like a machine gun, but Ruki was dodging them and creating barriers of plants. Kagome was tied up in vines. This was bad. “Enough of this. I know what to do!” Ruki yelled. She walked up to the ensnared Kagome and planted something on her neck. “AAAAAAAAAAUUUUUUUUUGGGGGGGHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” she screamed. Then she fell silent. When she looked up her eyes were glazed over and she had a blank stare on her face. “Perfect,” Ruki said. “What is your purpose?” she asked Kagome. “To defeat the Phoenix,” she said coldly. “Kagome-chan, what’s wrong with you?!?” Kira yelled. Kagome was set free and dashed at her. Kagome was under some kind of mind control. She was attacking Kira. Then Ruki shot a seed like thing that hit Kira. “What’s th-! YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!” she screamed. Then she met the same fate as Kagome. Her eyes were also glazed over and served Ruki. “She’s taking us over one by one,” I said. “That was the plan!” Jonuku yelled as he lunged at me again.


“KIMARI!!!! MARCOOOOOO!!!!! LOOK OUT!!!!!!!!!” I yelled. “What is it Sano-san?” Kimari asked. “Ruki is planting mind-controlling seeds into our necks and taking control of us! Be careful!” I yelled back. “ONI-SAMA! LOOK OUT!” Meia yelled, but it was too late. Kimari was hit. “KIIMAAARIIII!!!!” Marco yelled. “GAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!” he screamed in pain. He was also hit. This was not good. 4 of us were taken over and only Meia and I were left. “SAAANOOO-SAAAN! LOOK OUT!!” Meia came out of nowhere and shoved me out of the way as she was hit. “NNNOOOOO! YOUR GOOING TO PAAAAAAY!” I yelled. I was more or less pissed off. “Save it. Your next,” Mino said. Ruki fired one at me. I lit myself on fire and it was burned to a crisp before it got to me. “So we’ll have to knock you out first,” Ruki said with a smirk. “Jonuku step back. Let his friends take care of him.” This was not good. 9 on 1 and I was the one. “Kira, Marco, get him,” Ruki ordered. They both charged at me. I was under heavy attack. They were hacking and slashing at my shield. Soon Ruki called of the attack. “Marco use your thunder attacks,” she ordered. I thought. “Thunder yo-yo,” he said. He threw his katanas at me. I dodged the first strike but was hit when it came back. “Kira, Kagome, Uzimaki, triple team him,” Ruki ordered again. Kira caused water to rise from the ground. Kagome sent a gust of wind through it. The air born water drops were then frozen by Uzimaki. The drops turned into ice needles and were targeted to me. I tried to melt them, but they were flame resistant. The barrage was so great that it left me in a pool of blood. I soon de-phoenixed and was on one knee. I was gasping for air. “Again!” Ruki commanded. They sent another wave of ice needles at me. I was cut up badly. “Face it Sano. There is nothing you can do. Meia, Jonuku, pin him,” Ruki ordered. Meia and Jonuku sent arrows at me. I was then pinned to the glass of the burger stand. “Mino, do it,” Ruki said. Mino sent a rain of shuriken that bordered my body. “Kimari, slice him,” another order. Kimari warped behind me in my shadow and proceeded to slash my back. It was painful. “You’re powerless,” Ruki said. She walked up to me. She just stared at me. I was bloody and in a bad way. “You’re so weak,” she said.


“I won’t ever let you win,” I said weakly. “Stop us? Don’t make me laugh. You’re pinned down with shuriken and arrows. Your back and head are bleeding. You’re too weak to fight back. You’re not even worth taking control of. We should just kill you now,” Ruki said. “I won’t give up. Even if you kill me,” I said. “What can you do pinned there? You have no powers to use,” she said. “Well since today is a day of anime. Why don’t I do what I’m good at,” I said with a smirk. “What’s that?” she asked. “Managing my ki,” I said. “KAI-OH-KEN!!!!” I yelled. My body erupted in a red burst of energy. The shuriken and arrows were forced out of my body. I stood up. “Now things get fun,” I said.

End of chapter 18

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Wednesday, May 31, 2006

Chapter 17 Ice is nice and trees are mean
It was two days after the mess at the school with Mino. The thing is unlike Jonuku she didn’t drop out of school. Though she did get transferred out of our class. Tomorrow was the day of the anime contention at school. And the big question was what to go as. “Well should we go as a group, or separate?” I asked. We were in the lunch room at school. “I vote separate,” Marco said. “This way we can support our own favorite anime or videogame,” he said. “I say we go as a group so they know we mean business,” Kira said. “I second that motion,” Kagome said. “Well I think we should go separate,” Meia piped in. “I mean we don’t all like the same stuff so we shouldn’t make the others go through the process of choosing just one,” Meia added. She had a good point.” What do you think Kimari?” I asked. “Leave me out of this one. You five make the chose,” he said. “Alright we’ll settle this once and for all. Draw straws. Long straw chooses,” I said. I held out my hand. Kira, Meia, Marco, and Kagome all drew. They were all short straws. My unfortunate lot in life. “Ok I choose……….separate,” I said. “Oh alright. If you say so, Sano-chan,” Kira said. “Good then its decided,” Marco said. We all went to class in time for math. After school ended. The rest of the day we all prepared our costumes for the convention. It took me all night but I got it done. The others finished in time to.


The next day was the convention. I walked into school looking like Cloud from “Final Fantasy VII Advent Children”. And just like cloud I had a rather large sword on my back. I walked around for a while wondering where the others were. Then I heard a familiar voice. “Shinku Hadoken!!” Then a sudden burst of light came at me. I dodged it and prepped my sword looking around. “Sano-chan!” The voice called out. It was Kira. She was dressed as Sakura from Street fighter. “Did I surprise you Sano-chan?” she asked. “Yeah actually. When could you use the Hadoken, especially in the Shinku form?” I asked. “Well I mimicked the game till I learned to focus my ‘Chi’,” she said. “OK, where are the others?” I asked. “Come with me and I’ll show you,” she said. We walked for about 10 minutes. Then I heard,” Katon: Goukakyuu no Jutsu!!” then a large stream of fire came streaming at us. I pushed Kira to the side and used flame manipulation to divert the flames into the sky. “Aw man. I thought I was sure to hit you with that, Sano-kun,” she said. Out came Kagome dressed as Sasuke Uchiha from Naruto. “Ok now I’m confused. Who’s the Phoenix of fire here?” I asked her. “Don’t worry it was just a matter of energy. Besides you ought to see who Marco came as,” Kagome said. “Who?” I asked. SLAP!!! I heard someone clap then a strict of lightning rolled pass my feet. Then the ground beneath my feet turned to mud. Then a boy wearing black leather pants, a black jacket, and a metal arm came rushing at me. I drew my sword and blocked the attack. “Can’t win this one Sano-kun. Your out numbered and out animed,” Marco said. “You can’t win,” Kimari said. “WIND SCARRRR!!!!!!” I saw the fabled wind scar from Inuyasha come at me. I got my legs free and dodged it. I jumped into the air. Then I saw a girl with wings, a school uniform and a long sword come at me. It was Meia. She was dressed like Setsuna from Mahoro Sensei Negi. I once again blocked the attack. Then I remembered my attack. I held my sword out and it broke into 6 different ones. They all positioned themselves around my friends. The first one was behind Kira. I moved at light speed and grabbed it. She turned to block but it was too late. I hit her hard. One by one this process repeated. Till the only one left was Meia. The last sword was above her. I once again grabbed it and struck her. I fell to the ground fast. The 6 swords falling to the ground around me. Each of my friends dropped. When Meia fell from the sky I caught her in my arms. “What was that?” everyone asked. “Omni-slash,” I said.


After the quick tussle it was time for the costume contest. We all entered the contest. After the judges saw every costume they voted for their favorite. They said to wait about an hour so we all left to the nearest burger stand. Once there we ate for a while. Then it got really cold. I mean REALLY cold. Like someone left the a/c on. “You think?” Marco said looking at me. “Yeah. The next dragon,” I said. Then I saw Uzimaki in the corner booth. “Uzimaki-san you better get out of here. Something bad is coming,” I warned. “Oh really?” he said. “Ok. I’ll leave.” He got up and walked out. “I don’t like this. Let’s go,” Kimari said. We were at the door but it wouldn’t open. “Hmm that’s weird. Maybe I can melt it. Katon: Goukakyuu no Jutsu!!” Kagome launched a giant fire ball at the door. But it didn’t work. “Hey isn’t that Uzimaki-kun?” Kira pointed out. “Yeah what’s he doing?” I asked. He had his hands stretched out. And a strange light was coming from them. That’s when I saw it. Since he was wearing the garments of Zabuza of Naruto his arms were exposed. On his left shoulder I saw the kanji of Ice. I realized then that he was the dragon of ice. “Guys, suit up,” I said. “But why it’s not like he’s the dragon,” Kira said. “Take a good look at his arm,” I said. The others look and sure enough they saw it. “All right then. Let’s get him,” she said. “Let’s Go. Fenikkusu kaihen!!!” To those who don’t know what Kimari and Meia look like when they transform I’ll describe it. Kimari’s entire body was coated in a black mist. The mist became a blob and attached itself to him. The blob then detached and fell to the ground and became a lance. He closed his eyes and re-opened them. They were reversed. For Meia her body was engulfed in a bright light. Slowly changing her. We all finished our transformations and broke through the door. We stared down Uzimaki. “These odds aren’t fair. Guys!” He called. Then a pillar rose from the ground and a fog covered the area. As the fog lifted we saw our opponents. Mino and Jonuku. “We have to take these guys out this time. So no screw ups. Got it?” Jonuku asked. “Got it,” Mino said. “All right,” Uzimaki said. “Can I have some fun too?” A voice called out. “No problem boss lady,” Jonuku said. Then a large tree shoots out of the ground. Its branches bore the strongest of the Dragons. A girl was seated on a branch. “So these guys are the Phoenix? And you keep losing to them?” she said. “Unfortunately yeah,” Mino said. “Well then. I think its time I stepped in,” she said. She jumped down and landed in front of us. “What’s up? I’m Ruki, Dragon of wood.”

End of chapter 17

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Thursday, May 11, 2006

Friends vote
i like my vandread style site but i think its time for a change. should i 1 go back to shadow, 2 do a naruto theme, 3 do a evangelion them or 4 stop askin for yalls for advice and pick my own damn self


The choice is yours
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Friday, May 5, 2006

I'm Back!
I'm back where you at? back home, where you been? to the hood no good motha F!@#$a I'm back!
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Monday, May 1, 2006

Chapter 16 steel against the tsunami
Damn it. Kagome and I were being taken by some metal doubles of us. We switched partners and swiftly destroyed them. We got back to Kira and Mino. The only thing I could see was the bright flashes of light from their attacks. It was speed against ninjitsu at this point. There was nothing I could do. Kira was starting to slow down. As fast as she was she still needed more training. She was breathing heavy. She was cut and bruised. But she keeps on fighting. It was as if there was something she wanted to attain. “You’re slowing down Kira-san,” Mino taunted. “What’s wrong? I thought you would be stronger than this. Hiding behind Sano-kun must have taken its toll. Your weak.” “Screw you, you witch!” Kira said angrily. She lunged for another attack. Mino dodged it and hit her in the back. Kira hit the ground hard. “You wanted to protect Sano-kun and keep him all to yourself. You didn’t even consider his feelings about you. Did you?” Mino asked. “No, I didn’t,” Kira said with her face in the ground. “You are a cold-hearted and selfish piece of crap that is un-deserving of his time. Aren’t you?” she pried. Kira had a distant look in her eyes, like she had given up hope. “Yes, I am,” she said. “That’s right,” Mino said. Kira stood up. “I don’t deserve his friendship. I don’t deserve his kindness,” Kira said softly. Mino was walking towards her. She was forming a kunai in her hand. “I don’t deserve to live,” Kira said. “Then let me PUT YOU OUT OF YOUR MISERY!!!!” Mino shouted about to stab her. I rushed in and intercepted the blow. With my gut. Kira’s eyes got really wide. “Sa…no…?” she said on the verge of tears. “Kira-chan, are you……ok…….?” I asked. Then I dropped to the ground. Stomach bleeding. “Sano-chan? Sano-chan? SANO-CHAN??????” she yelled. Then she looked up at Mino. “You did this. You did this to Sano-chan. You’re going to pay for this!” she started to yell. Then she snapped. Just something inside her snapped. Suddenly, 5 geysers came out of the ground and covered her. She started to glow a light blue. Her phoenix clothes were changing.



Her shirt was now that of a traditional Chinese dress. Yet she had log sleeves. Her jeans were still the same, but her daggers became longer and hooked. Her eyes turned even darker and were those of a hawk. Keen and far seeing. She had gone super Phoenix form. She glared at Mino. “You’re going to pay for killing Sano-chan,” she said. Eyes fixated on Mino. “Try and avenge him,” Mino said. Kira was in front of her in 2 seconds. She reared back and punched her. Mino backed up and disappeared in a cloud of smoke. Kira’s eyes tracked her like it was nothing. She locked on to her and took off. Mino repapered and Kira was right behind her. Mino whipped around and saw her but it was too late. Kira belted her in the face and she went flying. Mino was in mid-air. Kira appeared behind her again and punched her in the stomach. Mino was streamlining towards the ground. Kira once again was right there. She caught her and threw her to the ground. Mino looked up. Now bloody. “Leave now,” Kira said. Her face stained with blood. “Fine. But remember you could have saved Sano-kun from death if you just died,” Mino said. Then she got up and disappeared in a cloud of smoke.


Kira saw the others running towards me. She walked over. “What happened?” Kagome said crying at the site of my body. “He protected me. He called me ‘Kira-chan’ for the first and most likely the last time,” Kira said with her head down. “Don’t count me out so easily,” I said. Everyone just stared at me. I may have been bloody, but I was alive. “Sano-chan?” Kira asked. “In the flesh and blood. But it won’t last if I don’t get some help,” I said. We all went home and relaxed for a while. “Sano-chan, I have to ask. How did you survive?” Kira asked. I looked over at her. “I tightened my stomach at the last second so the blow wouldn’t be fatal,” I said. “Ohhhhhh,” Kira said. “Don’t worry. I’ll be here
Kira then started at me. Then she finally said, "Sano-chan, why did you call me 'Kira-chan'?". She said it glaring at me. "Ummm no reason Kira-san," I said. "I want you to call me ‘chan’!" Kira yelled. "Oh would you look at the time. I forgot I had to be somewhere about 5 minutes ago. Bye," I said as I ran out the door. "SANO-CHAN GET BACK HERE!!!!" she yelled.

End of chapter 16

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Thursday, April 20, 2006

YOUR ATTENTION PLEASE!!!
i'm going out of town and will not have access to my otaku. so i can't post the next two chapters of my story. sorry.
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Tuesday, April 11, 2006

Chapter 15 Steel’s request
Morning again. I slept great. I was in the living room propped up against a wall. Marco came in. “Marco-kun, good morning,” I said. “Good morning, Sano-kun,” he said back. I went into the kitchen and made a cup of coffee. Kira and Kagome came walking in while I drank. They’ve become good friends now. “MORNING SANO-CHAN!” they said at the same time. They may be friends, but they still fight. “Are you guys ready for school?” Kira asked. “Of course. Ready Marco-kun” I asked. “Always,” he said back. “Fenikkusu kaihen,” we said. “Why did you 2 go Phoenix?” Kagome asked. “This way we can get to school faster,” Marco said to clear things up. “Phoenix Art! Wings of the Phoenix!” we shouted. We sprouted wings out side. “Seeya at school,” I said. 15 minutes later we were at school. “Good morning Sano-kun, Marco-kun,” Mino said. “Good morning,” we said. “Sano-kun can I talk to you for a minute?” she asked. “Sure,” I said. We walked for a while. Then she finally spoke. “You’re an anime fan right Sano-kun?” she asked. “Yeah, I am,” I answered. “So there’s this convention coming up this tomorrow and I wanted to know if you’d like to go with me,” she said. “What? ME? Umm, ughhh. If we go as friends than-“I was cut off. “HOLD IT RIGHT THERE!!!!” It was Kira and Kagome. They came out of nowhere and split Mino and I up. “Don’t even think of about laying a hand on our Sano!” they said. Mino ran off about to start crying. “What’s wrong with you two?! You just scared her off for no reason!” I yelled. Kira and Kagome looked shocked. I ran off after her.

I turned a corner and saw her crying. I was about to walk over to her but then I heard a strange voice. the voice said. (sniff) “Who are you?” she asked. it said. She was crying again. “All I wanted to do is go to the convention with Sano-kun, But Kira-san and Kagome-san got jealous and stopped him from answering,” she said eyes watering. it asked. “Yes,” she said with an angry look on her face. it said. Then a large steel door came out of the ground. She opened it without hesitation and walked in. The door closed and sunk back into the ground. I ran back to the others as fast as I could. “GUYS!!!! WE HAVE A PROBLEM!!!” I shouted. “What is it Sano-kun?” Marco said. “Mino-san has just joined the Dragons,” I said. “This means we have 2 to worry about. This is bad,” Marco said. “This is Kira-san’s and Kagome-san’s fault,” I said glaring at them. “How is it our fault Sano-kun?” Kira asked. “If you hadn’t scared her she wouldn’t have done it,” I said. “Good morning guys,” Meia and Kimari said walking up. “Mino-san from our class has joined the Dragons,” Marco said. “That’s not good,” Kimari said. “You got that right!” Mino said out of nowhere. Then a rain of kunai and shuriken came out of the sky. “Run!” I yelled. We all split up and ran. I was on my own. Then a very large shuriken came streaming out of the sky. I dodged it by a few hairs. “Mino-san! Come out now!” I yelled. Then a cloud of smoke came out of nowhere. There she was. She was in a Kunoich’s outfit. She had a choker around her neck. It had the kanji for steel on it.


“Sano-kun. You spurned my offer and now you’re going to pay,” she said. “What happened to you Mino-san?” I asked. “I joined a team. A team that will kill you and your retched friends,” she said. “This isn’t like you,” I said. “You didn’t like the old me so try the new me,” she said. She stuck out her hand and all the lockers molded and turned into kunai. She hurled them at me in a fit of rage. “Fenikkusu kaihen!” I shouted. Once in Phoenix form, I used my shield to block the attacks. “Sano-chan!” Kira yelled down the hall. She was already in Phoenix form. “I’ll take her,” she said when she was next to me. “Not without me,” Kagome said running. “3 to 1 isn’t fair. So lets even it out,” Mino said. She transformed the rest of the lockers into doubles of me and Kagome. “Guys!” Kira yelled. “Worry more about yourself. You fight the Dragon of steel now,” Mino said

End of chapter 15

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Saturday, April 8, 2006

please bare with me
to all the fans of my story or anyone who likes to post on my site. my computer runs on linux so i don't have "word". so i can't copy it and spell check when i post. sorry
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