myOtaku.com: Deceiver

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Birthday
• 1987-04-04
Gender
• Female
Location
• In the shadows
Member Since
• 2006-05-16
Occupation
• demon/half vampire
Real Name
• Kai

Personal

Achievements
• staying alive
Anime Fan Since
• 2000
Favorite Anime
• DN Angel, Yu Gi Oh, Wolf's Rain, Love Hina, Case Closed, and more
Goals
• To graduate college
Hobbies
• writing, reading, acting,
Talents
• making friends

myOtaku.com: Deceiver

Thursday, June 22, 2006

Okay, here's some more of my story. This is all I have so far, later.

It was ten minutes after three and the school was deserted. Riley waved as her last friend faded in the distance, it had been a good year. She sighed glad to have it over but the memories would stay with her forever. She walked along the road on her way home, barely noticing the young man standing beside a tree, until he spoke to her.
"Hello miss" His voice was strong and sounded kind. Riley looked up and for the first time actually noticed him. He was very cute, but the first thing she observed about him was the fact that his eyes matched the color of the leaves he stood next to.
"H...hello" she couldn't believe how shy she'd gotten. She was never the type to get nervous in front of people. His smile was gentle and she felt suddenly calm almost like she was dreaming.
"May I carry your books for you?" He already had them in his hands as she stood and let him take them.
"Y...yes. you may" She silently scolded herself for being so overwhelmed by his charm. They walked in silence for a block, then he spoke.
"Did you enjoy yourself on the last day of school?" She was amazed, he spoke as though they were old friends, when they had just met.
"Yes, I am saddened by the fact I will not see my friends for some time, though" He nodded,
"That can be cause for sadness, but thats the best time to make new friends." The conversation changed as they reached her house.
"May I see you again?" He said it almost as if he dreaded her answer. She thought for half a second then answered.
"I would like that." He smiled and handed her books back. He looked relieved and very excited.
"I will call again then, when I get the chance." He spoke fast and his tone was that of anticipation.
"Very well, then I will wait for you." She was overjoyed that he wanted to see her again. As he walked away she couldn't help but think about him, she went to her apartment. She picked up her cat on the way to her bed, she stopped at her window to see if she could catch a final glance of the man who had made her feel like she never had before.

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As Chloe walked slowly back to her apartment a cold wind blew passed her causing her to shiver. That's weird, she looked up and noticed the suddenly overcast sky. She could smell the rain in the chilly air. Not wanting to get caught in the rain she walked faster. Lightning flashed and the rain came with little warning filling the streets. Chloe had never seen the weather change this fast before. As she ran through the empty streets, she thought she saw a shadow following her. Could it be? No, they couldn't have found me that quickly, Could they? She ran faster, the rain pelting her bare arms and face, causing her sight to be obscured. She ran fast and hard, she ran until she could no longer breath. She collapsed near a wall and leaned against it. Well, whoever is following me will have an easy target. she leaned her head against the cement wall and let the rain run down her face. After a few minutes the rain stopped hitting her face, but she could still hear the sound it made on the sidewalk. Now that's odd. She looked up and saw a man standing above her holding an umbrella over her.
"Need some help?" his voice was very commanding yet there was a trace of sorrow in the way he spoke. She stood suddenly embarrassed at her appearance.
"Yes, I seem to have lost my way." she looked down as her wet hair fell in front of her face. He smiled and pushed her hair behind her ear. She raised her glance and looked into his deep brown eyes, his eyes were shrouded in mystery. She was amazed at how beautiful his eyes were, she quickly looked away realizing she had been staring. He helped her put on a black leather jacket.
"Well where do you live?" His red hair covered his left eye as he spoke.
"I live right before the high school, in the center of the city." she pulled the jacket closer.
"I live around there as well, I can easily take you." he put his arm around her and brought her closer so they would both be under the umbrella. Chloe could feel the power in his arm as they walked. She wondered why this really attractive man would want to help her. She realized that she must have looked really pathetic sitting out in the rain like that. He spoke again,
"So what's your name?" she looked down trying to decide if she should tell him, she chose to tell him since he was helping her.
"K.....Chloe" dang, I have to remember not to mention my old name! He appeared not to have noticed her mistake. They walked in silence for a few blocks, then he spoke.
"Chloe, thats a fine name." He paused "I am Vincent" Chloe looked at him, something about the way he said his name made her feel uneasy, almost like he wasn't used to saying his name. They walked along the sidewalk in silence, she occasionally looked up at him, but tried to focus on the ground in front of her. After a few minutes of walking they reached her apartment building.
"Well, this is it." She spoke quietly, and started to take the jacket off.
"Alright, It was nice meeting you, I look forward to our next encounter, You can keep the jacket." He smiled then walked back the way he had come. She stood there holding his jacket. Then turned around and slowly walked up the stairs to her apartment.

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