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Saturday, August 28, 2004


my poetry
well, i thought these poems were bad, but luicifers wife, klaha220, and rebecca all seemed to like 'em, so i'm gonna share 'em with the rest of ya. please don't laugh, ok?

this one was the first poem i'd ever written that wasn't assigned as a school project and the first one i'd ever written with any kind of emotion involved:

Helpless

My love
Sweet kitten
So far away
Frightened and alone
So helpless
I need to save you
I’m going insane
Separated from my love
Depressed and afraid
So helpless
I haven’t slept in weeks
Thinking only of her
My sweet kitten
There’s no escape
So helpless
Their beautiful death
Set you free
No longer afraid
No longer helpless

(i was listening to "never again" by nickelback when i wrote that one. i love that song, especially the part that goes:
"father's a name you haven't earned yet
you're just a child with a temper
haven't you heard don't hit a lady?
kickin your ass would be a pleasure")

and well, this was the second one i ever wrote. i wrote it yesterday for my love...rebecca (as if you guys couldn't figure that out on your own)

I Need You

I need you
I need your touch
your sweet, gentle kiss
to smell your hair
to hold you close and
to look deep into your eyes and say

I love you
I love the way you whisper my name
the way you cling to my waist
the way you comfort me everyday
the way you make me feel
when you look deep into my eyes and say

I love you

remember. you promised not to laugh

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