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Tuesday, October 4, 2005


Poem of death
I've been checking out other peoples sites, and it seems a few hav put poetry of sorts onto their sites. So i thought i'd have a pop @ it. Here goes.
Something I was working on in English...

"I see you glide down the river, the river of life, believing the deception that is clear before your eyes, that of the great light. You are told there is a god, one who will claim your soul,
take you to a haven above the clouds where you will be safe,
but all is but a lie.
I am the end.

As the river flows on you grow older, develop character, and I watch over you at every passing moment. I can feel your essence,
a bitter taste to be washed away,
your soul to be smothered by the
black cloak that streams out behind me, extinguishing life.
I am the end.

You near the end of your long journey, the river quikening it's pace, and time slowing, slowing, skowing to a pain-staking rate,
my whole being quivering in anxiety. The river abruptly comes to a halt, opening out over a chasm, and as you fall I catch you, snatching away your soul, bringing you peace, taking you from the lies of the light.
I am death.

And as your friends mourn at the side of your body, your soul is glad, free from the clutches and boundaries of life, and the lies of earth's fake god. I try to smile, try to be happy that I have freed you from your shackles, but can't, happiness is beyond me. You are free, but I,
the savior, am bound myself. And I can never be freed.
I. Am. Death."

So...
Whaddya think?
Any good? Feed back wud b gud.
If u h8 it, PLZ says so. I don't wanna work on summing that I'm shit @.
Owwwwwwwwww my arms...

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