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Friday, February 10, 2006


ok here is my first chapter ^^::::


Genre: Action, Love, Comedy, Fantasy, and Serious

Setting: Takes place in Kyoto, Japan during the Warring States Era, late 1800’s

Characters: Yuki, Michiyo, Kent, Yuiko, Reno, Shoji, Shinkono, and Yoshitsune, Miharu, Tito, Lady Ayumi, and Lord Kenji, and more…

Ch.1 Bored

Yuki and Michiyo were lying on the floor. “ARGH! It’s so freaking boring here!” Yuki shouted. Michiyo got up, and starting spinning in circles. “I’m bored! I’m bored! The fancy woman’s bored!” she sang. She kept singing and Yuki kept complaining. Then two boys walked up to them. Yuki was doing a head- stand and fell over. Michiyo kept spinning until she ran into one of them. She blinked and looked at him. “ Rikku!” she shouted hugging him. He laughed. “DAMMIT!” Yuki shouted in pain after she hit the floor. She tilted her head back and looked at Michiyo. “Yuki-Chan! They’re here!” she shouted jumping up and down. Yuki got up and saw him. “ Toya!” she shouted hugging him. They all laughed and played around. Toya and Rikku were their boyfriends and soon to be husbands. “My dad left me the family business early! Let’s get married tomorrow!” Toya shouted. “Yeah!” Michiyo joined in. Yuki cried with joy. “Yay! The fancy woman is no longer bored!” Michiyo danced. Then there was an explosion. We all looked at the fire that was started. Then arrows suddenly shot out of nowhere. Soldiers ran in and killed people on the spot. “Come on!” the boys shouted grabbing their girl. They all ran into an abandoned hut. “You two, get in these barrels!” Rikku said. “But what about you guys?” Michiyo asked. “Hurry!” Toya shouted. Yuki and Michiyo quickly got in. Then the door burst open and soldiers ran in. Toya quickly pushed Yuki down and put the cover over her head. Rikku did the same to Michiyo. “Boy! What are you hiding?” the soldier demanded to know. “Nothing!” Toya scowled. The solder walked over to them and pushed him out of the way. He pushed the barrel over and I fell out. “Yuki!” Today shouted. Yuki sat there too terrified to move. Michiyo sat in the barrel praying they would die. Then they pushed the other barrel over and Michiyo fell out. I grabbed Michiyo’s hand. “So you lied?” the soldiers scowled. Toya glared at them. The other solder grabbed Michiyo. “She shall make a fine wife foe me!” he said embracing her. “Let go, you ape!” Michiyo shouted. “Mi-Chan!” Rikku said running towards her. The soldier threw Michiyo and took out his sword. Michiyo hit the wall and fell unconscious. The soldier swung his sword many times and chopped Rikku into pieces. Yuki sat there traumatized, with Rikku’s blood on her. “Yuki!” Toya shouted. She sat there. The soldier walked over to her. He pulled her into him. “And you shall be mine” he said. Toya tackled him. “Run, Yuki! “ Toya shouted. Yuki got up. “Not so fast!” the other solder said. Yuki closed her eyes and tackled him as well knocking him out. She picked Michiyo up and ran out the door. Then she heard a gun- fire. She froze where she was. She slowly kept going. “Run, Yuki!” she remembered him saying. So she ran. She couldn’t help herself. She sat Michiyo down in a safe place and ran straight back. As soon as she ran in, she saw a glare from a sword slice right in front of her. Her eyes widened as tons of blood splattered on her. Toya’s body fell to the floor. Suddenly darkness started to take over Yuki. She dropped her head. “Wench!” the soldier shouted walking towards her. She clenched her fists and then they popped out. Her nails grew longer and her teeth grew sharper. “What are you? Some kind of beats?” the soldier said putting his sword close to my Yuki’s face. Yuki growled. Then she looked up and hissed. She showed her teeth to the soldier. “What the hell?” he shouted. Yuki’s eyes were glowing a golden color. She tackled the soldier and ripped him to pieces. Then she fell to her knees and changed back to normal. She looked at the ground and saw Toya’s body. She grabbed her head and screamed. “AHHHHHHHH!” About 5 hours later, Yuki was awakened by someone constantly moving her. She opened her eyes and saw her. Michiyo had tears running down her face. “Mi-Chan? What’s wrong?” Yuki asked. “Rikku…where is he?” she said. Yuki was silent. Then she remembered her “Transformation”. “They’re gone….” she said. Michiyo sat there. “No…” she said. She hit the wall. Yuki sat there feeling guilty “I didn’t get there in time to save him…” Yuki said her eyes now tearing.

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