Thursday, June 28, 2007

   OK LITTLE WORRIED BOUT POSTING THIS!!!!
Ok, here is my first attempt to plz u guys with actual writing a story! Here goes my first part! I know it'll have mistakes and it'll be a bit slow at first, but it'll get better I promise! After a bit it gets really good with a lot of twists and stuff!

In a village far away there lives a small broken family! THere is a young 16 year old brown haired, green eyed girl, who is very girly and preppy named Azula, her younger 14 year old sister named Angel whos brown haired, blue eyed, and a big tomboy, their grandmother(Lanais)old, grey hair, bedridden from illness, and always sweet, and finally their granfather(Merck) who is strong willed, strict in training Angel in martial arts and swordsmanship, he is elderly, and protective. “Azula, Azula, where are you child?" shouts Grandmother Lanais. "I am coming, grandmother" shouts Azula climbing the stairs trying not to trip on her skirt. “You are so slow Azula. Not to mention not very graceful." says Grandmother Lanais as she stares at the fallen Azula on her bedroom floor. “Thanks for all your support grandmother." says Azula as she gets up.' You know how much I want to be a dancer, but with my ungraceful legs it shall never happen." says Azula as she sits on the edge of her grandmother's bed. "Nonsense, my dear. One day you shall be the most graceful, most beautiful, and most splendid dancer in all of the world. You will be just like your mother was and you know we will all be watching and cheering you on." says her grandmother. " Yes, but what shall we do with that tomboy wanna be, Angel"says Azula as Angel walks a tray full of food." What was that, Azula?" says Angels she sits the tray down on a little table over her grandmother's lap. “Oh, nothing Angel Me and grandmother were just talking about my dream of being a great dancer one day." says Azula reaching for her sandwich on the tray in front of their grandmother. “Yes and I hope to become the greatest fighter in all the world. Grandfather has been teaching me how to use a sword. He says I have been getting much better at my hand-to-hand combat." says Angel
hapily while munching on some crackers. “Angel child it is time to practice, my child." says Grandfather Merck from the bottom of the stairs. "Coming grandfather." says Angle getting up and running down stairs. Angeland her grandfather go outside and walk down to the pond where her grandfather and her normally practice. "Ok, get ready, Angel"says her grandfather. "What shall we practice first, grandfather?" says Angel“Let’s work a little on your hand-to-hand combat, Angel"says her grandfather getting into position.Angel takes her position &waitsto see if her grandfather will strike first or not. He comes at her and she defends herself. They keep going until her grandfather strikes her down and she has to get back up. She gets up and they keep going until they run out of breath. "Ok, that is enough of your hand-to-hand combat. Lets work on your swordsmanship" says her grandfather reaching for his sword. “Grandfather do you here that screaming? It is getting louder." says Angel looking into the woods. A man comes out holding the back of Azula's shirt.
~*~*~*~ Anna ~*~*~*~


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