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Thursday, January 15, 2004

During a boring night with only 2 hours of sleep the past 2 days, i came up with this..........
I needed something to do so i wrote this begining to a fantasy story thing!!!....if you read it can you tell me what you think...pretty please????

*The beggining*
Jin walked the worn forest path, his ear length, jet black hair was matted to his acheing head and his body was sore from the lack of sleep and non-stop traveling. The memory flashed through the teenage boys head so many times. It felt as if it were years old, although this very memory was only three days ago. The day when Jins story began, the day Jin watched his parents be murdered and his younger sister kidnaped......

Jin wouldn't stop walking, he couldn't. He had to get away. Every detail of what he had witnesed haunted him. "Why me?" he pleaded over and over. Jins foot hit a rock. He stumbled and fell to the ground. His body laid weakly on the dirt road and his misty gray eyes closed. Barely realizing what had happened, before he even could, he slowley fell uncoincence.

"You'll be ok" a soft voice in the distance reasured Jin. His face stung as a stranger patted a cut on his face with a damp white cloth. He let out sighs of pain as his eyes flickerd, slowley opening. A pale skined girl that couldn't be much younger than Jin sat infront of him. She gasped "your awake". Her bright green eyes glowed with happiness and the sun danced an her long dark red hair. "ah...where..where...am...i..." Jin weakly let out the words while he tried to push himself up............thats all for now...let me know if its worth finishing!!!!!
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