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Tuesday, July 11, 2006


   My Story Angel Of Loneliness
Angel of Loneliness



My melancholy song overflows from deep with in my heart
What good this power of voice if it brings misfortune upon those dearest to me
All is but a distant memory……


I am Magdalene. That is it just Magdalene, for I have no last name, nor do I have a family. No mother, no father, no sibling, nor grandparents that I can recall. A one bedroom apartment and an unusual cat with amber colored eyes, velvet black fur and a red diamond shape on its forehead are my only company (besides a cop named Sam, but he will be mentioned later on). My cat’s name is Ai which is Japanese for love. My past is unknown to everyone including myself. I live alone at the age of 14 because I bring pain and misfortune to those that are close to me. I am well known for my bad luck and enchanting celestial voice. None wants to come near me because of it. I am given money by the state of Florida to live on my own until after college. Some things should be kept secret and never be revealed. My power of song is no gift, but a horrible curse that I would never wish upon anyone.



Knock! Knock! Magdalene awoke startled from the sudden knocking on her door. The annoying knocking on her door continued until she got up from her bed yelling “I’m coming!” She staggered from her bedroom to the front door. She opened the door with her eyes closed (not exactly safe when you don’t know who’s at the door, but she is so angry and annoyed by the person who woke her up so early she is ready to fight and win). Then she shouted “Who is so cruel to wake a person up at 7:00 on a Saturday morning!?”
“I brought Dunkin Donuts!” Magdalene slowly opened her eyes to find Sam with a giant bag with the Dunkin Donuts label on it in one hand and two cups of coffee in the other. Sam is an eccentric cop in his 20 with blonde spiky hair and an earring on one ear. He is a goofy (a little dimwitted) man that could really get under your skin, but couldn’t stay made at because he always made you laugh. Sam has taken care of Magdalene since she was 11 and was the only person who would visit her since everyone is afraid of her. Magdalene looked at Sam then the bag, then at Sam again. After several seconds she grabbed the bag and coffee right out of his hands and slammed the door in his face. At this point Sam was dumfouned and was knocking on the door pleading for a donut. It was a pretty pathetic scene to say the least. “Come on I want donuts I paid for them!” Sam wined like this for several minutes until the door flew open and Magdalene threw a donut at him.
“There, you happy now! There’s your donut, now shut up your making a scene!” Magdalene yelled to the top of her lungs as she pulled Sam inside. Then she dragged him by the shirt, to the table and dropped him letting his head bounce off the floor.
“Ow! Magdalene that hurt. I think I might have serious brain damage. Ohhh the internal bleeding. Ohh the agony. I see the light I’m coming grandma!” wined Sam for several seconds.
“First of all, you’re already brain damaged you idiot and second of all, you deserve it for waking me up so early, but I will thank you for the Dunkin Donuts.” Magdalene calmly said with a sarcastic smile on her face.
“You’re a meanie! So to make up for it why don’t you sing for me again for old time’s sake?”
“No!” Magdalene became wide eyed and grabbed her head as if she were in pain and began to cry and gasp as if she couldn’t breathe. “No! Not again no I don’t…. Why! Please don’t make me! I don’t want to hurt you or anyone else again!” Sam didn’t say a word and walked slowly to Magdalene and hugged her.
“It’s okay.” Then Sam thought in his head, you’ll pass the darkness and see the light. You have the power to heal people. Let your wings break through


All the memories I hold are fading….
Half the tears diluted them….
Will I hear someone beyond this lonely acing feeling?
Someone somewhere up there keeps telling me to go on, but whom?
Something is calling me……
I feel the gravity of it all…..


Several Days Later.

Magdalene and Sam were walking to the store and where talking about what they needed. They didn’t notice that someone was following and watching them. “Sam we need bagels and what else?”
“Donuts!” Sam blurted out
“Blech! I’m getting sick of donuts.” Magdalene said in a jokingly voice. Then suddenly out of nowhere a red head with green eyes tackles Magdalene. The following conversation will have the persons name next to what that person is saying. Pay close attention this might be hard to follow.

Crazy red head: “Yea! The last one has been found” *squeezes Magdalene*
Magdalene: “Do I know you?” *tries to escape Crazy red head’s death grip*
Sam: “Didn’t I tell you to stop tackling people Azzy?”
Magdalene: “This girl’s name is Azzy?” *finally escapes death grip*
Sam: “Yep the one and only” *vein pops from head*
Azzy: “Yeppers my name is Azzy. I’m 17 years old and I’m the Angel of Happiness!”
Magdalene: “Angel of what?”
Azzy: “Sam you didn’t tell her did you?”
Magdalene: “Tell me what!?”
Sam: “Well…I was getting around to it.”
Magdalene: “Would someone answer me!? Tell me what!?”
Azzy: “You’re the last Angel Mags!”
Magdalene: “Never call me Mags and what do you mean I’m the last Angel?”
Azzy: “We’ve been looking for you the last one on our list, the Angel of Loneliness”

Magdalene gets angry and starts to walk away thinking this is all a joke and there is a hidden camera somewhere. “It’s true Magdalene you are The Angel of Loneliness. You have the power to heal people, Azzy here has telekinesis and I have the power to manipulate electricity. How do you think my blond hair stays so perfectly straight up it’s not hair gel. Azzy is the Angel of Happiness and I’m the Angel of Justice. There are also two other angels the Angel of Knowledge and the Angel of Innocence. You should be meeting them soon.” said Sam. Then all of a sudden Azzy turned her back to them and a beautiful light appeared around and out sprouted beautiful angel wings from her back.
“See Magdalene we aren’t making this up we really are angels. I also double as a flight instructor I teach the upcoming angels how release their wings and fly. Magdalene you have the power to heal by singing.” said Azzy.
“No my singing brings nothing, but misfortune I’m no healer I think you have the wrong person. Every time sing something bad happens.” Magdalene said
“That’s just it, unexplained things happened when you sang even though bad things happened. Your powers are tied to your emotions. If you think about every time you sang was it all sad times?” explained Azzy
“Come to think of it they were all sad times. I don’t think any song I ever sang was happy. I guess it’s because I never really had anything to be happy about since no one would come near me except for Sam.”
“Magdalene what I need you to do now is to trust me and sing something happy okay. If not for me or Sam, then for yourself.”
“Fine I’ll try.” Magdalene begins to sing.

When I’m with you my memories fade like dust in the wind. My fears and tears run with the river stream. I wait for the day that we’ll be together again. I close my eyes and smile. I kept the words you told deep inside my heart. You are the one that made me smile when you saw my sad face. I have the will to be with you someday. I know now that I can walk and know that you’re by side. You’re all I need. You will always be my first love. I’ll remember to hold on, you taught me how.

There was a sudden beautiful light like the one before and wings came out of Magdalene’s back. Magdalene collapsed because she used up so much energy from the singing. Sam caught her in time. Beautiful lycoris (crimson red) flowers sprouted from where she was. “Well it’s definitely The Angel of Loneliness. Lets bring her back to the apartment.” Said Sam “She has to meet the other angels.”
Several hours later Magdalene awoke to people yelling and glass breaking. She jumped up from her bed and went into the living room. There was a war of the angels going on in her apartment. Azzy was in a corner of the room levitating pillows trying to hit an angel (all of their wings were showing) in the kitchen that had short black hair hazel eyes like Sam and wearing a white tank top and gray baggy plaid pj pant’s. There was another angel hiding under the coffee table yelling “Stop it!”
“What is going on here?” Magdalene shouted to the top of her lungs.
“Hey roomie!” Shouted Azzy. “We are all going to be living together! The one in the kitchen is the Angel of Knowledge and the one hiding under the coffee table is the Angel of Innocence. The Angel of Knowledge approached her and said.
“Yo. Sorry for all the racket we made and my name’s Kent and scared silly over there is Jake. I have the power to freeze time and Jake has the power to start fires just by using his mind.” Magdalene checked out Kent for a couple of seconds and started to blush. She started to realize how cute he was. “Oh and I’m 15 and Sir Wet his pants is 11”
“I don’t wet my pants take that back!” Jake complained.
“Make me you big baby!” Kent taunted
‘Don’t pay attention to them okay Magdalene.” Azzy said with a smile on her face. “Anyway we’re all going to be living together.”
“What do you mean living together?”
“Sam told us we are going to live together and have to live together I’m not sure why, but all he said was that it was the beginning of a giant battle.
“That’s weird, but I guess it would be great to have some other company besides my cat and Sam.”
“That’s positive thinking!” Azzy shouted with glee.
“Okay, but now we all have to clean up this mess okay!” Magdalene shouted so everyone could hear her.
“Okie Dokie” shouted Azzy
“Aww come on!’ complained Kent.
“Let’s get this over with” said Jake. Magdalene’s life is starting to make sense now that she knows who she really is. Whatever this great battle is she knows they will overcome it. In due time she will uncover more secrets of her past such as her unusual cat Ai. She’ll get to learn more about her new roommates and maybe even come to love them.

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