Monday, September 26, 2005

  

I'm so sorry...T.T while I was writting part nine on friday I lost focus & did the name of the girl wrong cause I wasn't ficused!! ToT GOMEN!!! I sorry...so to make it up to you I corrected part nine & wrote part 10 for you of my Inu Yasha fan fic! Yay! here you go (Oh yeah part ten is worse than part nine with the sex & stuff...so you've been WARNED!) :
Part 9:
I walked into the forest not afraid of what I might find. It was a dark & eerie place indeed. It made a chill run down my spine, but not because I feared it. There were crroked trees everywhere with long streaks of moss hanging from the branches. The bark on the trees pealed off easily. I could tell because I just put my hand on a tree & the bark just fell off.
The forest was misty like. Not being able to see whjat lies ahead of you. How could this place be right outside of a sweet little village? How strange...
I walked on & on until I saw a shodow up ahead. I stopped in my tracks & stood there without making a sound. It moved closer & closer. And each time it drew itself closer it became greater in size. I backed away slowly & silently, ready to make a run for it. But then it occured to me-- I don't have to run. I'm no human, but a strong, beautiful, free demon, born of Naraku. Oh how that thing up ahead scared me, but boy I didn't mave one inch after my thought.
Standing my ground, I readied myself. I put my hands up ready to pull out my feather at any time if necsisary, and I had my fan out too. Finally the creature moved towards me.
It was no creature, but a beautiful young man. This man was just a neck length talller than I. But oh, was he handsome. He had hazel eyes glazed with a hint of copper. His hair was long and brown, almost like chocolate. He was wearing a traditional kimono; almost like the one Miroku wears, but of the color blue. He was beautiful in every way. Even if I wanted to, I could find no flaw to him.
Then I noticed he carried a sword on his back. It looked awfully heavy. How could he carry something so heavy? I eyed him & his sword up & down, as if to trace every detail into my brain. That's when he spoke.
"Are you in need of help, miss?" he asked shinning his copper glazed eyes upon my red ones.
"Uh..." I stood silence.
"Oh, I'm sorry. How rude of me not to introduce myself. I'm Hoshi. Nice toi meet you." he said.
"Oh..., well I'm Kagura." I studdered.
"Well hiya, Kagura! Do you need any help? 'Cause it looks as if you're lost." Hoshi said, grabbing my hand.
"Oh, why no. I don't need any help. I'm just looking around." I said.
"Well are you new here?" He asked.
"Yeah..."
"Why don't you let me show you around?" He asked holding me in his embrace, "I'm sure you'll love it around here."
I felt awkward. Why did he sweep me into his embrace so soon as if we knew eachother & were lovers?
But none the less I followed him relentlessly. He showed me everything there was to see. He showed me the small rodent demons that lived in the trees to the demon birds that flew ahead so high up. But as he showed me around, I started to feel a little more comfortable with him. It was like the feeling I got with Sesshoumaru, but only I don't feel afraid. It was weird what I felt.
"So what do you think, Kagura?" He asked.
"It's wonderful. And before I thought it was eerie." I giggled like a little school girl.
"But you haven't seen the best part yet!"
"But what could be left? There couldn't possibly be anything more splendid than what you showed me today!"
"Oh, but there is something. Something you wouldn't believe if you didn't see."
"Alright. Show me then!"
He picked me up into his arms & carried me away down the foggy path lined with crooked trees.
It was weird what I felt, but I liked it. It made me feel alive. It made me feel something that I never felt before. It's like sonething inside woke up! It was like the forth of July went off in me! Boom, boom! My heart raced as he held me close to his chest. I started to feel his chest. Oh, hos strong it was, indeed. Why would someone like him be out here? I paid no attention to that for long though.
I stroked his chest as he carried me along. It's as if my fingers touching him meant nothing, for he never looked down.
Soon we were there. It was a small ring of homes in a big ditch. It was almost as if they tried to hide the homes. He carried me down the ditch & into one of the homes.
"Here it is!" He cried.
"Wow! I had no clue this was it!" I said still being held in his arms.
he set me down on the soft bed to the right.
"Kagura...," He started,"...I love you."
My heart raced more & more, not knowing what to say. But I realized the reson why I was touching him so intentively the whole time- I was in love with him, too!
"Oh, Hoshi, I love you to!" I cried.
He flung himself atop of me. We both lay on the bed. Him on top & me underneath his strong, warm body.He started to undress me, as I did him. He started to lick me everywhere up & down. It was so enjoyable. I never experienced something like this before. I undressed him & togther we lay on the bed naked as he licked my body.
Was this true love? For what do I know of love? For what does any demon know of love?
Part 10:
Our bodies conected together. Sewating atop one another. Both panting, breathless. He was so beautiful like this. I just wanted to bite into him & savour his blood for myself. He licked my breast & then lay his head down & nusidled into the soft embrace of my arms. I felt so warm. I felt as though I was wanted.
His fingers continued up my body and soon were playing in my hair. He pulled out my neat organized hiar, so it would fan out onto the bed. He lifted my soft hair & spread it across his face. He started to sniff it.
"Oh, Kagura, your hair smells of fresh flowers." He said panting away.
"Hoshi, should we be doing this?" I asked terrified & yet secure.
"Of course. It's only natural."
"But I know nothing of you. How can i trust you?"
"Oh, Kagura, you just have to spoil the fun, don't you?" He said giving me a bitter smile.
"But...I just wanted to know what you are."
"I'm a demon, just like you are. Why?"
"But you look nothing like a demon. What kind are you?" I asked curiously as he kept stroking my chest.
"I'm your average type of demon. What else? I am nothing more than a wandering demon that controls fate."
"What do you mean?"
"I mean that I can write my own little story with my own little characters, and what I say will happen. It's my way. Ot's my world. Before you were born I planned for this night to happen. You would fall in love with me instantly & then you'd make love to me many a time. And soon enough you'd bare my child." he said.
"No! That's not true! Who are you!? I mean it!? I'll kill you if you don't tell!" I screamed trying to back away, but he held me down on that bed with his stone hard arms.
"It's all true, Kagura. You will bare my child! You will be my lover. Why can't you accept the fairy tale life I planned for you? Naraku accepted his. So why can't you accept yours? I seemed alright with it at first."
"Naraku...?" I asked in shock.
"Yes. I control everyone. Even Inu Yasha's fate. I am the closet thing there is to God. I am Him! You should feel honored that I chose you to bare my child, Kagura."
"No! That's not true! I'll never make love to you again! It's all a lie, you sick man! I don't love you!"
"You can say that all you want, but I know that for the rest of your life, you'll love me. You always will. And I know for a fact that you'll walk out here in two minutes fully clothed & retrieve that girl that you care so much for. But let me tell you, Tomorrow, you'll feel lonely. You'll crave the feelings I give you. You'll come back to me tomorrow evening. I know you will. And that's when Destiney truely beins. But if you manage to not show up tomorrow, maybe you can control your fate after all, but may I remind you no one has ever defied me before. No one." He grinned.
I pushed myself out from underneath his sweaty body & dressed as quickly as I could, even if it was slopy. I hurried out of the home & ran from the ditch. My hair swayed in the wind behind me for I still had it down. I grabbed my feather from my bosom & rode off into the sky, not looking back.
When I came to the village, it was a bit later than expected of me. I rushed over to Ms. Hirasawa. I asked if Hatsumi was there & believe it or not she was. She was sleeping on the floor where she made a spot for her to rest. I was worried in a way that she was still here. I thought Sora would be back by now.
"Have you seen Sora?" I asked Ms. Hirasawa.
"No, not since this morning. I thought it odd for him not to come to get his sister Hatsumi. So since it was getting late & I could tell she was growing tired, I made her a spot to sleep." She said.
"Oh, thank you so much, Ms. Hirasawa! I don't know what I would have done if it weren't for you."
"Oh. it was nothing. She's actually quiet sweet. Infact she's always sweet. She's filled with so much love... Are you her mother? I'm just wondering, because you two seem so much alike."
"Oh no...I'm not her mother...we're not even related," a smile lit my face," But I am trying to be her & Sora's new mother...But I'm not biological. I'm a demon & they're both sweet humans."
"Oh, Sora's a human, but Hatsumi here is a half demon, didn't you know that?"
"Hitomi? A half demon? For real?" I asked dazed & confused.
"Yes. They say her mother fell in love with a great, handsome demon that ruled the western lands. Though I'm not sure of his name, but I have heard of him to be very inteligent & charming. Yes... her mother's name was Sara. She was very beautiful, but she died at the feet of her lover- the demon."
"Oh, really? What type of demon? Do you know?" I asked interested.
"I hear dog demon. But I'm not sure. I only know that she has ears of a demon, that's why she covers them with her strands of hair. I also noticed she's starting to get a marking on her forehead. It's very vague, but it's a mark alright. And it's no bruise either." she said.
"Oh. Why thank you very much for your information, Ms. Hirasawa, but I think it's time I take Hatsumi home."
"Why of course. You just be safe! I hear there's been a demon out there lurring in the young to only suck their sould. You tow be careful now!" She said waving to us as we walked down the path to our little home.
We were there. I lied her down on the bed, & undressed her into her sleeping garments, as she still lay unconsious in her dreamland. Just out of curiousity, I pulled the strands of her hair that covered her ears. Then i saw for myself. It was true. She was a demon - or at least half of one. Then I looked at her forehead & there I saw the marking of a moon. It wasn't a full moon, but more like a quarter moon.
I lay her & myself down to sleep. But as I slept I was thinking of what I had discovered today. I also thought...what if Hatsumi was the daughter of Sesshoumaru...?

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