Monday, April 11, 2005

   Chapter 5…a new love?¿? so…I haven’t been on all weekend! Sorry about that! But u people haven’t been commenting on my story ither…so were even! Lol

-the next day-

Jalie wakes up to see Akayo standing over her

Jalie: can I help u? (in a very tired and confused coice)

Akayo:o…sorry! I was just thinking…

Jalie: ya?

Akayo:well…what happened down there?

Jalie: it…it was nothing…

Akayo: something is trubeling u…what is it?

Jalie:look…it was nothing!

Akayo: fine

Akayo goes to walk out the door…but jalie stops him

Akayo: so…are u gona tell me or what? I’m just conserened…*a sad look in his eyes lets jalie know that this is the truth*

Jalie: that was my brother…not my real brother mind u…he is my step brother…from my step father…

Akayo: ur family tree is very confusing!
@_@

jalie: it’s not funny!

Akayo: sorry…I didn’t mean to sound cruel

Jalie: that’s alright

Akayo:continue

Jalie: well…he said that I was a vampire…but that’s not possible…I’m part angle…it would never work in my blood

Akayo: vampires don’t exist thoug

Jalie: I don’t know…how elts could my father still be alive?

Akayo: u sead it ur self…he is ultamit evil

Jalie: yes…but that just means that he should be gone for good…not commeing back again

Akayo: I don’t know what to say

Jalie: there is nothing that u can say

Akayo reaches out and hugs jalie: there may be nothing that I can say…but I still wana help u in any way that I can

Jalie starts to cry: thank you so much…no one has ever been thair for me…my mother was taken away from me when I was young…and I found these people who rely didn’t know ne thing about me…and

Akayo:…and now ur here…don’t worry about ne of that! *he wipes away her tears*

Unka walks in: ooowww…jalie and akayo siting in a tree…k.i.s.s.i.n.g.

Jalie throws a pillow at her

Unka:hey!!! What was that for?

Jalie:for being in the way! Now move it!!!

Akayo starting to laugh: shouldn’t u be bending water or something?

Unka: fine…I see that u 2 want some time alone ne way

She leaves

Akayo: she has a point u know!

Jalie: what?¿?

Akayo: that is what I was about to do! *he slowly leans in*

Jalie: sorry but I have to go

She slowly gets up to leave

Akayo: please…don’t leave

Jalie: I have to…*stomach growl* time for breckfast!

Akayo: ya…I gess I’m hungry to!

Jalie and akayo walk out to the kitchen for breckfast

Rin and Yuri are suting side by side eating tost with jelly

Unka and Ukavo are talking about what unka just saw in jalie’s room

Unka: haha did u 2 kiss yet?

Akayo and jalie: no!! *faces red*

Ukavo: don’t lissen to her…it will work out!

Jalie: thanks…I know it will

At that moment…something comes over Rin!

Rin: what in the hell is happening to me?

He starts to shake uncontroebly

Jalie: Rin?

Yuri: RRRIIINNNNN!!!!!

He loses control and for some reason…he sprouts wings…and actuaily flys off twords town

Jalie’s wings come out of her…and she is forsed to stop him from reaching every one elst…no one can see him…or they may kill him because they do not understand!

Jalie catches up to him…and tackeles him to the ground

Rin in a deep voice: get away b**c*

Jalie: rin…I know that ur still in here…stop it now…or I’ll have to stop u!

Rin blastes her off of and she seams to be unconshious!!

Rin: I tould u!!!

Akayo: even if u r my brother…I WON’T LET NE THING HAPPEN TO HER!!! DRASTIC FLAM!!! I know that ur still in ther…and maybe this will bring u out of this sh**

Jalie is still laying there on the ground!

Rin wakes up and realizes what he was doing right befor the blast hit him…

Rin: aaahhh…

After the blast clears away…rin gets back up…looking confused: what happened?

Akayo: good to c that ur back to normal…BUT LOOK WHAT U DID TO JALIE!!!

Rin passes out

Akayo cayes jalie home


o no…what will happen with jalie?

I will try to get up character discritptions soon!

Hope u love the story so far!!!

-faids away into the darkness-


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Friday, April 8, 2005

   CHAPTER 4…WHAT IN THE HELL?
Akayo: where did he take her?

Ukavo: o god…I should’ve jumped in thair with her!!! What kind of friend am i?

Yuri: don’t be so hard on ur self…I didn’t jump in ither

Ukavo: yes…but u don’t know her like I do…it’s different *starts to cry*

Back to where Jalie is…

Uketo: welcome to my little hide out…some people say it is hell…but I would rather think of it as the place where I grew up!

Jalie: ur just like him…power hungry…and u never think about ne one but ur self…and ur quest for more power! Ur just as bad of a monister…even if u haven’t sould ur soul to the devil

Uketo: don’t you get it? Our father is a vampire…and so are u!!! we’ve already sould our soul to the devil!!!

Jalie: WHAT?!?!?

Uketo: why do u think u’ll never destroy him? Because he’s already dead!!!

Jalie: that’s not true!!! It could never be true!

Uketo: o…but it is true!...enough talking…lets fight!!!

Jalie: gladly!! HHHHHAAAAA

Jalie creats some sort of dark energy

Jalie (thinking to herself): of corse…this place is totally dark…the only thing that willl work are dark powers!

She creats dark matter – it is a vail so to speak that doesn’t let even a particle of light shine throw!

Uketo: where did u go? Running like a cowerd again? It’s just like u

FLASH BACK TO JALIE’S PAST AGE:7

Jalie: mommy!!! NO!!! DON’T DO THIS!!! MOMMY!!!!!

Jalie’s Father: don’t cry…she was nothing for u! u can be so much more with out her…I’ll train u even more…u’ll be the strongest and noone will be able to stop u! not evean i…but u must leave this weak creatcher to die!!! AND I WILL MAKE SHURE THAT SHE DOSE!!!

Jalie:NO!!! I WON’T LET U HURT MY MOTHER

A type of energey comes out of her…and it open a demention in the space time continuum…she pushes him threw it…and the portal closes.

Jalie’s real mother: don’t cry my dear…I’m still here…and when the time comes…u will find me again…but for now, u must go!!! YOU MUST GO!!!

Her mother appears to die in frount of here eyes…jalie thinks to herself :I will kill u for what u have done to me!!!

BACK TO NOW

Jalie: I never ran…and I’m not running now!!!

THE DARK MATTER GOES AWAY!

Jalie: I will beat u with the powers that I have gotten scense I left u brother!

Uketo: now that is what I’m talking about!! U still have potential! Maybe ur not a lost hope after all!

Jalie: the only lost hope around here is you! *she try’s to sprout wings…but they do not come out

Uketo: haven’t u figured it out yet? This place is ultimate evial…u can’t summon ur good side here! HAHAHAHAHA

Jalie: then I woun’t use my powers!!! I’LL FIGHT U WITH MY BARE HANDS!!!

She goes to swing at him but he grabs her hand and manages to break her left arm!

Jalie:aaahhh

Uketo: just give up and help ur dear old dady!

Jalie: I will never!!! *the rage inside of her creats some sort of a projection…it looks to be a sword!!!

Uketo: AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH….U HAVE TO SHADOW SWORD!!! BUT HOW DID U GET THAT?!? IT WAS SUPOSTA BE MINE!!!

Jalie: I don’t care who’s it was suposta be…but it will never go to u…now that I have it that is! MUHAHAHAHA

The evel in the sword starts to take control of her

Uketo: what are u doing? Stop! I’m worning u *he raises his hands to block…but in his hands are a pair of guns

Jalie doesn’t even give him a chaince…and she slashes him across the chest!

Uketo: AAAAAAHHHHH

He passes out

Jalie uses the sword to make a rift in time.

She can see everyone on the other side…and they don’t c here…till she goes threw it that is.

Ukavo: JALIE!!! UR NOT DEAD!!!

Jalie: nope! *smiles*

Akayo: I thought we lost you *runs up and gives here a hug*

Jalie: wow…I should get sucked into a swirling vortex more often!

All of them: NO!


so…this was chapter 4! Lol…now u know a bit more about jalie’s past!

I won’t be able to post again till Monday…sorry…tell me what all u want to happen in the next chapter!!!

After chapter 5…I’ll give character descriptions!

I love u all for reading my story!

~jamie

and i have the best boy friend!!!



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Thursday, April 7, 2005

   chapter 3...back home again?!? i'm fealing much better today...and i would like to introduse some charactors to the story...but iam still gona remember someone in my story...u will see what i mean.
Jalie, Rin, and Akayo all fly back to Jalie’s house. When they get thair…there are a bunch of chars parked out side!

Jalie walks threw the door

Rilly: where have u been? The school said that u went with ur uncle…u have no family…I was woryed sick!!!

Jalie: u tould them u were MY UNCLE?

Rin:well…I thought it would work!

Rilly:who r these people? And what r they doing in my house? What is going on here?

Jalie:these r my friends and I have to leave for a while…there is something I MUST DO!!

Rilly: NO, I won’t loose u 2.

Jalie: what?

Rilly: Kat died in a car crash the other night…there was no hope…

Unka: Jalie…don’t go!

Jalie: I have to sis!...i don’t know what all happened…but I have to do this *tears start* even if Kat is gohn…I MUST!!!

Unka:what r u talking about ne way?

Jalie:these people can do things that until reseanrly I thought only u and I could do.

Unka:WHAT!?!

Rilly:what r u talking about…u r staying here…I damand it!!

Jalie starts to get upset…and wings pop out of her back:u didn’t know that I could do this…but now u do…and if I go…I may be able to find what happened to my real mother!!! I’m no longer a lost child looking for a place to live…I have a chance to find out everything…AND I’M GONA TAKE IT!

Jalie leaves the house

Unka fallows

Unka:wait…if ur going…then I’m going to! I need to learn how to controle it!!! And I want to be with u…u always said that if u could train me…that u would…WELL NOW U CAN!!!

Jalie:…ok…u may come IF they say it is all right!

Rin and Akayo: shure!

Unka:Yes!!!

Ukavu (one of Jalie’s friends): JALIE!!! Wait…

Jalie:Ukavu?

Ukavu:I had no idea that u could do those things!!! Now I can tell u something that I’ve been meaning to tell someone for the longest time!!!

Ukavu changes into a lion

Ukavu: I’m a shape shifter!!!

Jalie: WHAT? O my god! That is increadable! How do u do that? OMG!

Ukavu: I have no idea!

Both laughing

Jalie: Well…lets go! There is so much to do…and so little time!

Lol

Jalie, Akayo, and Rin sprout wings…Unka is being carried by Jalie…and Ukavo turned into a hock!

When they get back…there are people thair in which Jalie has never met befor

Rin: YURI!!! Ur back so soon?

A tall girl with dark hair stands and turns around.

Yuri: RIN!!! *hugs Rin*

Jalie: (to Akayo) so I take it that is his girl friend?

Akayo: yep!

Yuri: I found a new recruit…her name is Ai

Ai:hellow

Jalie: hi…where are u from?

Ai: I don’t remember…Yuri found me in the forbidden forest…

Jalie: u survived the forbidden forest? U have to have some powers!!

Ai: I use water!! And I was up againse a fire dragen.

Jalie:and u didn’t catch it? They make great pets once their tamed!
Lol

several people laugh!
but the laughing is shortly interupted

Uketo: gahh...i will get u Jalie for what u did to our father!!! ggaaaahhhhhh

jalie is taken in by a swerling vortex...



so...this is where this chapter ends...

Question...where should Uketo take Jalie?
and if you would like to be in my story...just tell me what you want your name to be...and tell me a few details about your charactor...and i will put you into my story some how!

ttfn
~`jamie

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