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Friday, April 2, 2004


   The Burning
Here it is The Burning

A boy with sapphire green eyes and of blond hair stood upon his mighty vessel DEEP FREEZE under the hot sun. The rising heat making his head beat, his body sweat.
As he stood there every second that past him by made him feel weaker. His body felt heavier. He could barely move.
He tried to take a step. He fell on the floor in agony. He gathered all the energy he could muster and stood up.
He tried to walk again, but fell. Laying there he hurt. His skin burning.
He took all the energy in him and crawled. He made it down the stairs into the room where his bunk was. He had escaped the heat but his adventures were not over. He crawled into the bunk and fell asleep.

Do not miss the next issue Colder Than Ice.

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