Monday, February 6, 2006

   hey heres a story i started in creative writing literature... i'll add the rest later... read if you want...
The Nightmare Unspoken


The room was dark. Dark and musty. She could smell the mothballs; old and decaying. Looking ahead of herself, she could only see two figures standing near... a door maybe? To her left there was a little girl. Five maybe. She had cute long blonde curly hair. She was adorable. When she looked into Marron’s eyes Marron could tell she was scared. “What’s your name?” The little girl, afraid at first replied “...Lucy...” “Well that’s a pretty n...” the door swung open. A man, about 6’ 3’’, walked in.
Marron looked to her right. There were two other men beside her. One looked about 17 and the other 21. “What are we doing here?” she thought.
She tried to recollect her day. She was traveling to see her older sister Jessi, in California. Marron lived in New York. She didn’t have enough money to fly, so it would be a long drive. She left her house around three a.m. and began to drive. Around nine she was in the middle of nowhere and getting tired. She went around a turn and a big black van pelted into her. She remembered a guy getting out of the van and coming up to her car. He opened her door, got her out and the rest is black. She woke up here.
Just then she felt the pain in her arm. She hadn’t noticed it before. She watched as the figure moved toward her. She was getting scared but she didn’t want to show it for the sake of Lucy. Lucy began to cry, So Marron took her in her arm that was ok. “Don’t worry we’ll be ok. I’ll figure this out. I’ll get you home if it’s the last thing that i do. i promise.” Lucy just looked at her with her big tearful eyes. “It’s gonna be ok.” Marron soothed.
The figure, now visible, a man grabbed Marron’s broken arm. “Get up!” “You’re hurting me! Stop it!” Marron yelled. His only reply, “it’s time.” He grabbed Lucy with his free hand and a woman about 5’3” grabbed the two boys and led them to a room. Marron took Lucy with her other arm and then kicked the guy. He fell down and Marron grabbed Lucy and they ran.
The two ran out the front door, the sunlight burning their eyes. “Where are we?” Lucy cried. Marron, puzzled, said “I'm sorry Luc, I dunno…” They just kept running. They ran all the way to the interstate. A sign read “Canada” “Lucy, where do you live? How far?” Lucy looked puzzled. “We’re in Canada Luc…” “I live in California!!!” Lucy bawled. “Don’t worry I have to get there too, I will get you home.”
Back in the building the two boys sat in a room. “ How are we gonna get out of this?” Drake asked, his dark brownish red hair strewn everywhere. “I dunno” Josh replied. They both looked around a while. “There’s a door” Josh said. “Prolly locked. You go try it and I will keep looking.” Drake replied.
Josh got up. When he stood, he was about 5’8”. He wasn’t very thin, but he wasn’t fat either. His light blonde hair was short and spiked up. He started to wlk to the door, determination in his big hazel eyes. He reached the door-locked. “Thought so” Drake said on the other side of the room. “Too easy… they aren’t stupid.” Drake was messing with some old crates at the left bottom corner of the room.
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