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Monday, May 1, 2006


   AEGFF, Chapter 32!!!!
Wel, here's AEGFF, all by it's lonesome... it'll be accompanied by Bizarre Love Triangle on Saturday. But for now, this is the only ficcie. Enjoy!

Chapter 32

The day of the auto show finally arrived, and Max was psyched to go. After persuading Tera to walk instead of take the motorcycle, they headed off to the show. It seemed like Tera knew the way off by heart, and was leading Max along while they spoke. It was mostly about the House of Mouse, and their duties to the place.

“I’m still having a hard time writing lyrics to a song…” Tera admitted sheepishly, smiling. Max just grinned, asking if she might be a regular performer at the club. Shrugging, she said that she’d just see how the first night went; after all, it wasn’t like she could expect to be the crowd favorite. She turned the corner, Max following like a lost dog, and gasped in awe when he saw the area the auto show to place in.

It was full of cars, mostly classics and some new cars that he hadn’t even seen advertised yet. Tera had already run off and was fawning over a Ferrari; he recognized the logo. After he decided that Tera would be off looking at the fancy cars for a while, he went on a search for a car he could buy. Unfortunately, everything was WAY out of his price range.

“Holy shit; is it actually legal to sell stuff for this much?” Max asked himself, seeing the price of a vehicle he’d thought he could afford, “at this rate, I’ll never get a car…” He sighed, turning around and crying out in surprise when he saw Tera there. After she helped him up, she said she could help him find a car in his range. Unfortunately for Max, there weren’t any cars in his range… maybe in 23 years, but definitely not now.

“Maybe you can get your dad to help pay? I’m sure he’d let you get a car if he could see how well you’re doing as the valet.” Tera suggested, before she took a picture of a motorcycle that had tires bigger than her actual body, “or maybe he could help you find a used car that doesn’t suck too much.” He nodded, saying he’d try to talk his dad into it when he went to work.

***

That night at work was interesting, to say the least. His dad wasn’t about to let him get a car, so with Mickey and Minnie’s help, he was going to try and prove to his dad that he was responsible enough. Unfortunately, when an automated car drove up and ended up being driven into a wall inside the House of Mouse, his dad was sure he wouldn’t be able to take care of his own vehicle.

However, Max was able to unearth a little dirt on his dad; apparently, some people had videotaped his dad doing drag races when he was about Max’s age. Goofy saw and decided it might be a good idea to help Max with his request. Goofy’s heart was in the right place, but instead of helping Max get a car, he got him his own parking space. Now, as cool as having your own parking space is… you kind of need a car. Fortunately, that wacko Professor Von Drake drove up in a beaten down jalopy

“This won’t do... better keep it away from Mr. Toad….” Prof. Von Drake said to himself, slapping a For Sale sign on the car’s windshield. It was only for $50, which was rather fortunate for Max. After giving his dad the ol’ puppy dog eyes, he caved and they split buying the car. Max gave his dad a hug, and then took the car for a spin; fortunately, he wasn’t a terrible driver. The car was old and beaten down (the price was accurate) and the car backfired every once and a while, but it was his.

“Oh my God!! A jalopy!” Tera grinned, looking at Max’s car when he’d brought it back to campus, “these things are so cool! I can’t believe you even found one, let alone got it for $50!” She was glad he had been fortunate in finding a car; it seemed she’d finally written a song that night too. Perhaps they’d both be ready for what was to be happening the next night.

Yeah, I hope this one wasn't too bad. I don't think it came out as well as it could've, but it's not too bad. Anyway, read and review, merci beaucoup!

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