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Tuesday, February 6, 2007

   Second chapter!! :D
Here’s the second chapter………I hope you enjoy it n____n

CHAPTER II
“Memories”

(We are at the Central hospital, you can see patients and visitors around; in the number 222 room you can hear laughs…….)
Winry: Hahahaha you can’t imagine what happened after Izumi arrives. (She is sit in a chair next to a hospital bed)

Al: Tell me!! (He is sit in that bed with bands around his thorax, and head)

Winry: I will tell you when Ed arrives alright?

Al: Alright…….By the way, where is he?

Winry: He is with the doctor, hehehe maybe he is asking if you will be ok

Al: Hehehe maybe you’re right, after all….. I believe that my brother will give me his blood if he can…….

Winry: Yes….. (The door opens) !!

Ed: Hi! How are you feeling Al? (Close the door and walks to they; he has his left wrist cover)

Al: Much better brother thanks!!

Ed: Sounds good! ......Winry, our teacher will be come?

Winry: Oh yes!! She told me something and I was going to tell Al, but we need to wait you for that…..

Ed: Well….I’m here…What is it?

Winry: When you two arrived to this hospital, Izumi needs to go for her medicines, so she told me…..That even when you are ok, and when you, Ed, show her how much assess the family………You two will don’t save of a good sermon……. (Ed and Al, look at each other)

Ed: That doesn’t sounds well, Al…….

Al: Not at really…….

Winry: How much you assess the family? .......Ed? What is the meaning of that?

Ed: !!! ………. Means…… If I’m a good brother…...

Al: What? Of course you are brother!!.....Without you……I will be death

Ed: I know…… But Al……It’s my fault the conditions that you are now…… I really hope that you will be ok!

Al: Don’t worry brother……I will be ok……But you…..that fracture looks bad (points his wrist)

Ed: This? (Touches it) Nah…. I will withdraw it in a few weeks. This isn’t a fracture after all; just a sprain. (Smiles) Envy helped me with that a little you know? He accommodated me the bone.

Winry: What about your metallic arm?

Ed: (Shudders) Wha? Emh….Its ok…Yeah hehehe its ok

Winry: What you do it to the automail now!!??

Ed: I told you!!! Nothing I swear!

Winry: Liar….. Give that arm!

Ed: No!!! (Back offs)

Winry: Give me that arm now!!!! (Approaches)

Ed: No!!! (Runs to the door)

Winry: Oh no….Don’t think about (Takes out her wrench and throw it to the door)

Ed: Ahhh!!! No! Please open open!!! (Winry approaches more) Ahh!!! No no no open open!!!!! OPEN!!!!!

Winry: Come here!!! (Takes his arm and starts to analyze it very carefully)

Ed: Winry! I swear!!! It wasn’t my fault! It was Envy!! He hit me and broke the automail!

Winry: Oh!!! So you admit it! You broke the automail again!!!

Ed: !! Eh? Did I say that?? No! Envy tried to broke the automail and then—

Winry: Shut up! I found something…… (Reanalyze it)

Ed: !!! (Guzzles spit)

Winry: !!!! (She sees a little fissure at the shoulder and the forearm) Ok…It isn’t so bad……

Ed: Fiu….. (The automail creaks and a piece of metal falls) !! Uh oh…..

Winry: (Lifts her look and smiles) Edward Elric……… You are death!!! (Recovers her wrench and looks Ed with “fire eyes”)

Ed: Ahhhh!!!!!!!! (Attention: The next “sounds” maybe will be confusing)

“Ahhh!!!” “Bam” “Crash” “Brother!!!!” “Don’t move!!” “Stop please!!” “Smash”
“Ouch!” “Bam” “Ouch!!!” “Winry stop!” “Ahhhh!” “Winry!!!!” “OUCH!!!” “Take that!!” “Al help!!” “Crash” “And that!!!” “Ouch!!” “Brother!!” “Ouch!!” “And that!!” “Smash” “Ouch!!”

(…….)

Ed: Owww………

Al: Brother….. Are you ok? (Ed is sit in the floor next to the bed of Al….And touching his head)

Ed: I think so……..My head……..That hurts Winry!!!!!!!!

Winry: I’m glad about that……..You never take care of your automail!!!!

Ed: Grrrrrr ……………. (sighs)

Winry: Now I need to repair it……For octave time (Takes out her tool box)…….Come here

Ed: No! You will hit me again with that!!! (Points her wrench)

Winry: No….. I think its enough, or you want more!!??

Ed: No thanks……. Promise me that you don’t hit me again!

Winry: Yes….I promise……Now come here…. Please…..

Ed: Alright…..

(….)

Winry: I finished!.......How do you feel now?

Ed: (Moves arm) ……. Much better.

Winry: I hope you don’t break it again.

Al: Hehehe

Ed: Alright I will try…… (The door opens) Uh?

Izumi: So, you wake up Alphonse!

Al: Yes, teacher.

Ed: ……..

Izumi: What about you Ed? Do you feel better?

Ed: !! ……..Yeah…..I feel better, teacher.

(Silence)

Izumi: Darling………Winry……Could you please let us alone? I need to talk with them.

Sig: Of course.

Winry: But—

Sig: Let’s go girl (touch her shoulder and points to the door)

Winry: Al….Alright. (Walks to the door, take one more looks and closes the door)

Al Ed: ………………

Izumi: ……….. So boys…….What do you learned yesterday?

Ed: ……….

Al: ……. That…..Sometimes…..We don’t take the correct way…….And then, we pay for it……But…….at the same time……You know……In your hearth…..You know that the way that you take was good…..Because you decide it…….

Ed: …....And then, you understand that you need to take more care of the family that you love…….

Izumi: …………… Hehe

Al Ed: Uh??

Izumi: Very good guys…….But don’t forget that when you take the way that you choose, you can go back……..So you need to use your brain, because the heart and the brain don’t make sense and never can be combined……. (Ed and Al smiles)
But: You two have passed a lot of danger……..And was stupid the options that you, Al take…..Your brother wants to protect you, and you don’t listen to him….Now you have the consequences……..Ed, you take another stupid decision, you need to be more stronger……..Don’t put your little brother in danger again…… (Goes to them)
Now……. (Slaps Ed)

Al: Brother!! (Izumi slaps him)

Izumi: I’m very angry with you two……….

Al Ed: …………

Izumi: …….. Ok………. Come here (hugs them)

(Two days later, Ed and Al go out of the hospital. Then go home and have dinner with Izumi, Sig and Winry. Next day, Ed goes to the work because he have received a note of the general)

Soldiers: Good afternoon major Elric!!

Ed: (Smiles) Good afternoon! *thinking* Major uh? That sounds better than “Colonel Elric” (Goes to the general office)

Roy: Oh, Fullmetal…….Come in….Take a sit…… (Keeps a paper that he was reading)
Very well…….Now……About your mission---

Ed: Sorry general……I…couldn’t finish it…….I had another problem…….

Roy: You’re wrong, Fullmetal…..

Ed: I am?

Roy: Yes….. You accomplished the mission that I give you, there was no toxic substance…..It was only a false rumor to take you and your brother to a trap, but I see that you defeated them anyway…….. That force me to make a certificate of state alchemist permanent (Smiles) what do you think?

Ed: It’s great!!!!!!!.......Umh….I mean……Its good sir….I’m sorry for the other state alchemist that is going to be forced to be a colonel (Smiles) Now…..can I go home or I have job?

Roy: I was going to put you some paperwork, but I see that I don’t have any one for the moment……. So…..yes Fullmetal…..You can go home early today. Go with Al and look after him alright?

Ed: Got it, sir! Good afternoon. (Goes to the door, when he close it starts to scream….) Yeeeeeeeeeeeeeees!!!!!!!

Roy: ……He…..Strange boy……

“May I have a question sir?”

Roy: Yes? Lieutenant Hawkeye? (She goes out from the shadows)

Riza: Why you don’t put him paperwork now? Even when you know that you have mountains of it?

Roy: I don’t know……Maybe I have a little timeframe of generosity……But come on do you believe that I have control of the world?

Riza: Its ok sir, he is going to have a tranquility afternoon today……….

(…….)

Ed: Al!!! Winry!!! Come here!!!!

Al: What’s the matter, brother?

Winry: Yeah…..It’s everything alright?

Ed: I accomplished the mission that the general give me!!

Al: ??

Winry: But how? I believe that you told me that the mission failed!!

Ed: I believe it too, but he told me that it was all a trap. And I accomplished when I “defeated” Dante and Envy……Now……I’m a state alchemist forever!!!!!!

Winry: Sounds good.

Al: I’m still wondering……..

Ed: What?

Al: Why Dante stopped with her plan and ran away? .......She just looked at you for one second and……..she ran away……….Don’t think it’s strange?

Winry: I don’t know anything……..Now…..Into the house I make the dinner! .....I did sauerbraten……..And for dessert……..A cake.

Ed: Cake? Sauerbraten? Let’s go Al!!!!!

Al: Hehehe yeah!!

( Winry went at the next day……Izumi, will be there for a couple of months because she “said” that she wants to meet better City Central. One month passed……The Elric brothers don’t have problems, they getting better each day.
But, one day……In a country house…..near of Dante’s place…….Someone wasn’t happy……..)

Envy: Why!!!???? Why you don’t let me finish him? They were weak!

Dante: His eyes……… You don’t saw his eyes, Envy…….. Hohenheim had just the same eyes, but now……His son........

Envy: !!?? Hohenheim is dead now! And he will never return from the death!!!!

Dante: You are so foolish, Envy…….. I’m not referring to Hohenheim of Light now……. I can’t believe it……His son…… If Edward has those eyes……Means that he is more powerful than his father... I see…that he doesn’t discover his powers yet…..

Envy: Powers? What are you talking about?

Dante: ………….Bring him to me alive!

Envy: For what you want the Fullmetal shorty?

Dante: I will tell you Envy I think that you have an enormous curiosity ………

(………)

Envy: Alright…...Master………

Dante: One more thing: Don’t kill Alphonse and don’t let Gluttony to eat them.

Envy: Yes…..Sure (Turns around and make an evil smile)

Dante: Gluttony!!

Gluttony: Grrrrrrr!!

Dante: You two……….Bring to me……….Edward Elric!!

(……….)

(In another house……..A boy with long blond hair sleeps in an armchair……And dreams….)

Ed: ……..No……..Ghh………No…….. (*Flashback* Al……His parents…..disappears one at time) No………..Stop……. (*flashback* A strange person who looks so familiar walks slowly to him and you can hear his steps………) Who…….. (*flashback* the person approaches more……You can see that that person has long hair and the look….is down……..) Ghh……..No…….Stop it……..No………
(*Flashback* the person is closer! Lifts the look…….Is he or she? Have golden, but empty eyes and blond hair……..) Ghh…….No…….. (Heave an arm and approaches the hand faster!!---)

Ed: Nooooooooooooo (Brings up, he is perspiring and pants) ………….Al?

Al: Brother, are you ok?

Ed: ……Yes…..It was a…….Nightmare ……. Just….a nightmare……..

Al: Sorry for wake you up but I discover something important when I was out!!!

Ed: What is it?

Al: I found information of a Philosophers Stone…...that was already created!! But its incomplete…..I believe that another piece of that is in the antique national library because it’s an old document!!

Ed: The Philosophers Stone……….

Al: If we found it……. I can return your arm!!! Please brother... I want to recover everything that you lost for saving my life……Really want to return the favor…..

Ed: (Smiles) Alright then……..Let’s go!!

(……….)

(In the middle of the road to the antique national library, the Elric brothers found someone……..That was in the wrong place, as usual…..)

Ed: What are you doing here?

Roy: I have the same question for you……

Ed: It’s a public road; we can walk on it if we want!!

Roy: Same answer, Fullmetal

Ed: (A little drop appears on his head)………. Jeez! Listen you--……..
General, we don’t have any time for your games; now get out of the way!

Roy: Can I know what the hurry is?

Al: We go to the antique library for—ouch! (Ed hit him with his elbow)

Ed: Sorry, but we don’t have time (Pulls Al’s arm and starts to walk faster)

Roy: ………. (Look at them for a minute) Strange kids……. (Starts to walk for his way)……. but ….. (Stops and turns around) ………Mmmm………

(……..)

Ed: This is great………This is really great!! (He is looking a little placard: ANTIQUE NATIONAL LIBRARY. ONLY GENERALS CAN PASS.)

Al: Calm down brother! We can enter with permission.

Ed: Who could give permission to a kid and a state alchemist? No….We need to enter…..

Al: ……..Look brother! Over there!!

Ed: Good work Al! Come on! (Runs to an open window and stops in front of it) It is too high….But not a problem….Ready Al?

Al: Let’s go brother! (Ed puts his foot on Al’s hand and “jumps” to the window…..But….)

Ed: Ah! Wait wait wait!!!!!

*Bam*

Ed: Ouf…….

Al: Brother!! Are you alright!?

Ed: Yeah…... *cough cough* Just …….I need air (Holds in the ledge of the window and enters to the library) Here you go Al! *cough cough* (Claps hands and a piece of cord appears from a carpet)

Al: Thanks brother! (Ascends to the window)

(In the darkness, a couple of shadows appear)

Envy: So….They entered to that old library……. Very good…..A perfect place….
Without witness…….. Come Gluttony….Now is our turn….. (Walks to the library)

Gluttony: I’m hungry….. (Follows him)

(……)

Ed: Useless…….Useless…...Trash…..Damn!! There’s nothing in this section……Al!
Do you find something?

Al: Nothing yet, brother……But I’m sure that we will find those documents.

Ed: (Smiles) Al…… I will take a look in the section over there ok?

Al: Ok *thinking* I need to found it! No matter what ………… My brother needs my help, he already help me before (While…..Ed was checking the third shelf)

Ed: No….. (Takes a book) mmmm…..Interesting….But no…..It isn’t the book that I’m looking for (Takes another) Mmmmm No….. (Another) Trash…… (Another) Trash!!! (Three books later) It’s all useless (throws the book to a pile of old books) Useless……. (The book that he throw, push another one and falls with the first page open) Uh? (Approaches)
What the…..? (Picks up the book and starts to browse it) “According with the scientific investigations bla bla bla bla bla mmmmmm…….The Philosophers Stone was already created…….in the town of Fabula……to the East…..by……!!!!!!!!!” (Looses the book that falls with noise over the pile) No!!!.......It can’t be!! (Falls with knees)

Al: Brother!!?? It’s everything alright? Do you find something?

Ed: He….He……created the Philosophers Stone ……

Al: Where?......And Who?

Ed: The old town of Fabula……To the East……..

Al: Who?

Ed: ……….

Al: Who Ed!!??

Ed: ……… Hohenheim of Light……..

Al: !!!! ………Father?

Ed: Yes…….He created another Philosophers Stone in the town of Fabula……

Al: It can’t be…… It means that he killed all the people that lived in there……….
How he could….?

Ed: He did it….Al……When Dante and he were lovers…..

Al: How you know that?

Ed: …….. Dante told me…….And then, when I meet again dad, he explain me the situation…….. (Smiles) But…. Don’t be sad, Al….Dad always wanted our good…..

Al: Alright brother……..

Ed: (sigh) Well….I suppose that we found the last part of your documents Al…..

Al: Yes!! Now all we need is go to that town and find that Stone before—- (Ed stops him with his hand)

Ed: Shhh

Al: What is it?

Ed: I….feel something…..

Al: You….feel something? How?

Ed: I don’t know…….!!! Al watch out! (A piece of wall falls, but Ed withdraw his brother just in time) *cough cough* ……..You!!

Envy: We meet again, shorty.

Ed: Why don’t you leave us alone!!??

Envy: I can’t do it. We came for someone……..

Ed: Don’t think about…… (He goes in front of Al, protecting him) You will not touch my brother again!

Envy: …….Hahahaha

Ed: ??

Envy: You don’t have to worry about your little brother, shorty……… My master doesn’t need him anymore…….

Ed: ??........

Envy: Yes…. We came for you, fullmetal shorty…….. You will come with us now…….

Ed: I don’t think so (claps hands and transmutes a piece of iron into a knife)

Al: Brother!!

Ed: Stay away Al!

Al: No! I will fight with you…You will never win alone

Envy: Hahaha……Gluttony, keep him busy, while…….I will fight with the shrimp!

Ed: Who are you calling a shrimp!!??.......You will pay for that!!

Envy: Come on shorty!! (Imagine: A little fight…EdVSEnvy and AlVSGluttony)

Ed: Why Dante don’t come for me by herself, and sent you two uh!?

Envy: She is too busy doing something special, and you are the guest so I propose to you…….Behave!! (Throws to him a spear, Ed shunned it)

Ed: *Pant pant* Shit (While, Al was fighting very good, but Gluttony was really fast for him………Al stumbles and Gluttony traps him with his arms and open his mouth)

Al: !!!!

Ed: Al!! (Turns around)

Envy: Decide…….. You will come with us or your brother will be the dinner of Gluttony………

Ed: ………..……. (Looses the spear that he was using for fight)

Envy: Hehehe brotherly love….. What a pity that he will die anyway.

Ed: !!!!! (Looks behind but……)

Envy: (Hits him in the head) Hahaha

Al: Brother!! (Tries to deliver himself but Gluttony is so strong)

Ed: ……..ghh……….. (He blackouts and falls)

Envy: Our master commanded to us don’t kill you, but I have to obey her? I don’t think so!! Hehehe…..that’s it (Gathers Ed) we almost finished……..

Gluttony: I’m very hungry Envy!! Just a bite

Envy: You can eat Alphonse if you want…….

Gluttony: Food!!

Al: !!!! (Sound of an explosion) KABOOM!!!

Gluttony: !!! Scares me (Releases Al)

Envy: I see…….The military again…..Let’s go Gluttony!!….. (Al, quickly, starts to draw a transmutation circle) Ohh I almost forgot (Turns around, takes the spear of Ed and throws it to Al, pins his clothes) don’t follow us if you want your brother alive…….

Al: No!! (Tries to deliver himself) Brother!!

Envy: See you, kid *whispers* little brother……. (Jumps out of the window with Ed, Gluttony look behind and jumps too)

Al: Brother!!!! (His clothes rip a little) No!! Brother!!! (At last, delivers and runs to the window, but its too late…….Edward…..is gone……) Brother!!!!!!!!!!!!


TO BE CONTINUED (Wait for the chapter three)
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   Fanfic made by me!!!
Hope you like it.
My story contains 4 chapters.
First, I wrote a little introduction.
The first chapter is here, please told me what you think about please. :)
NOTE : Maybe contain phrases and “scenes” that are a little strong, but, as you wish n__n

Introduction:
One year later. The Elric brothers almost recovered that they lose. Al has his body and Ed his left leg but still the automail of his right arm (Don’t ask me how O_o that’s another story) Ed even was a State Alchemist, He need to stay in Central, So he bought a house.
Winry call on them every month. But even when they believe that all finished, still have enemies……..

CHAPTER I
"Particles"

"That boy........Alphonse Elric"

"Something wrong, master?"

"Now he has a body....... Wonderful"

"So?"

"Think about, Envy!!!...... Before, he was the Philosopher’s Stone...."


Envy: What are you thinking?

"His body, when Edward return his body back, the Stone disappears.....But not at all....are a few pieces in his blood now"

Envy: What?

"You hear me, Envy .........Now all we need is the cooperation of Alphonse"
Envy: But....He never

"He will.....With a little of.........persuasion"

Envy: How?

"Who is the only person that he love more than anything and he will do everything......... For him? "

Envy: Now I understand!!!

"You know what to do Envy"

Envy: Trust me, master.......I will (Evil smile)

............

"You never catch me!!!!!!!"

"Oh, you want to see?"

"Come on guys, when someone gets hurt isn’t funny!!!!!!! (Nobody listen) Goodness........

"Now I got you!!!!!"

"Ahhhhhh" (They fall in the mud, and start laugh)

"You lose again Al"

Al: You cheated Ed!!!!

Ed: It’s not true.

"Oh my God.....See? I told yaw, now you guys to the house and to the shower now"

Ed: Come on Winry, you ruin the fun!

Al: That’s true

Winry: Ok ok.....It is funny.....but could you guys go to the shower now please?

Ed Al: Umh.........ok

Ed: Jeez! ... In my whole life, she never was funny.

Al: Hehehehe

Winry: I’m listening you!!!! (Start walking behind Ed)

Ed: Uh oh.......Run Al!!!!!

Al: Hahahaha

Winry: You will see little devils come here!!!!!!

Ed: Little!!!????

Winry: Yes, little devil!!! Come here!!

Ed: Uh oh (Runs into the house)

Winry: When I get my hands on you…..!!!! (Run behind Ed and Al trying to catch them)

………………

Next day, Edward goes to the work, Al goes to the shop and Winry stay at home organized all.

Soldiers: It can’t be…… If he accepts, maybe will be the colonel most young in the history!!!!! With only 17 years.

Shhh!! Here comes

Ed: Umh….Good afternoon!

Soldiers: Good afternoon colonel Elric!

Ed: I’m not a colonel……. I’m a state alchemist

Soldier: Not yet, Sir

(Ed walks away…to the general’s office)

“Come in”

Ed: Excuse me sir, do you call me?

“Yes, we need to talk Fullmetal”

Ed: About what? …..Flame

Roy: About you ascend……. Ready to be a colonel?

Ed: ……

Roy: Please take a sit………………. Ok…… Fullmetal, you really want the ascend?

Ed: Not at really….. I…. Like to be a state alchemist

Roy: That’s the problem! Nobody wants to take the booth

Ed: Why? I believe that all the state alchemists want it!

Roy: Yes…. But since you arrived, everybody wants to be like you, Edward!!!.......So you see there is not person to want the booth……If…

Ed: If what?

Roy: If YOU take it

Ed: What!!??

Roy: You hear me, Fullmetal

Ed: But that’s not fair!!!....... Why? I didn’t do anything to be idolized like this! They can’t do anything
because…….because I didn’t do it?

Roy: Correct

Ed: Damn……. (He stands up and starts to walk around) I don’t want it!!!!!!!! ........

Roy: ………

Ed: Just…tell them that I don’t want it and they can take it if they want!!!

Roy: I can’t………

Ed: What?? You----

Roy: But……. I could help you

Ed: How?

Roy: Giving you a mission……..

Ed: Mission? .........

Roy: If you accept, and accomplished it, maybe I can do your certificate of state alchemist permanent, and another state alchemist will take the ascend to colonel. What do you think about that?

Ed: ……. *Thinking* that’s a good idea, but for the other side, I don’t want to put Al in another danger……. I don’t want to be a colonel…..

Roy: Fullmetal? (Ed turns around)

Ed: Tell me the mission

………

Al: Brother!! You come back early.

Ed: Just…the general and I talk about my ascend.

Winry: And? …………Oh please come in and tell us all.

……
Al: The general?.........You are talking about Roy?

Ed: Yes now he is a general…….and for that reason

Winry: You will be colonel!!!

Ed: Yes…… But I don’t want it …… So the general give me a chance….I need to accomplish a mission to preserve my certificate of state alchemist.

Winry Al: ………

Al: Which is the mission?

Ed: I need to go to Dante’s old house to inspect because they think there are toxic substances or something like that maybe could kill the people of central….And if I found the substance, I need to destroy it without explosions…

Al: I will go with you

Ed: I know you will say that……. But…….I can’t let you go Al

Al: Why?

Ed: Because I AM THE STATE ALCHEMIST and not you……it’s dangerous

Al: Don’t care!!!!!! I want to go with you….. If you don’t like it, don’t care, I WILL GO WITH YOU.

Winry: If Al goes, me too.

Ed: Don’t be fool Winry!!!!! Damn it…….. Why are you so foolish?? I’m the state alchemist, not you Al….and not you Winry. You will not convict me ever do you understand??

………

Ed: Damn it damn it damn it!!!!!!!!! Why I’m so responsive?

Al: You don’t brother!!!

Winry: Thanks Ed for let us come with you

Ed: Yeah…..sure…… But when we arrive, you wait me outside.

Al: What? No way!!!! I’m going with you brother.

Winry: …………

Ed: Don’t tell me you also Winry please!!!

Winry: No…..

Ed: Uh? Whoa….thank you very much See Al? You need to stay with her

Al: But brother!!!

Ed: No Al!!!!!! I want you outside with Winry…You don’t need more danger!!.....You almost die one year ago and I………

Al: Uh?

Ed: I …… Don’t want to lose you again……… (Silence)

Al: Brother, we do a promise remember? And also YOU said it once:
“If we don’t take care one of the other, nobody will do it” That’s why I need to stay with you no matter what.

Ed: Al…..

Winry: Ed….Please let him go with you…….(She whispers to him) He loves you….And you know it……

Al: Brother??

Ed: Al….. If I said no….You will follow me don’t you?

Al: Yes

Ed: Ok….. Well then…You will come with me but whit one condition: If something gets bad, you will escape ok? There’s a deal?

Al: ………Ok it’s a deal

…

(Someone in the shadows laughs)

“Hahahahahaha……This will be most easy than I imagined”

Ed: Uh?

Al: It’s something wrong, brother?

Ed: No…..Nothing…..I just feel that someone was spying us…..

“Hahaha”

Al: Uh? Brother!

Ed: Yeah….I hear it too

“So, you’re come back from my master’s old house?”

Ed: Yes we do it

“Oh interesting……. You are so stupid as usual, child”

Ed: Why don’t you go out and show us your face? .......Envy

Envy: Ok fine (Jump and land in front of them) So, do you miss me?

Ed: Not at really. What do you want now?

Envy: Oh good question Fullmetal shorty

Ed: Don’t call me shorty!!!!!!!!

Al: Brother please calm down!

Envy: Oh...yes….The little brother…That is the answer for your question

Ed: What!? If you touch my brother I—

Envy: Come on don’t pretend to be the big brother now….. The chat stops here….. Gluttony!!!

Gluttony: Arrggggggggg!!!!!!!

Al: Watch out brother!!!

Ed: Ugh!! That was close, Come on Al, run!

Envy: Hehehe you can run, but you never escape…

Gluttony: Can I eat them?

Envy: No, you can touch they that was a command of our master, But for now you can aim the little brother. I’m going behind the shorty.

…
Al: We lose them?

Ed: I think…… Al…

Al: …

Ed: You are an idiot!! See why I didn’t want you here!!!?? It’s dangerous Al!! I’m going to take you out now!!

Al: But brother….

Ed: Shut up Al!!! I’m going to take you out right now and if you don’t like it, I don’t care.
Gluttony: Food!!!

Al: !!!!

Ed: Move it Al!!! (A piece of wall falls between Ed and Al)

Al: Brother!!!! Brother, are you ok?

Ed: *Cough cough* Yeah…I’m fine…..Wait a minute! Where’s Gluttony!!??

Al: Ahhhhhh!!!!!!!!

Gluttony: Here I come!!!

Ed: Al!!! Hold down I’m coming

Envy: I’m afraid not shorty!!

Ed: Envy!! What—ugh (Envy hits him)

Envy: Let’s see how can you resist

Ed: *thinking* Damn it, now how can I go with Al!? Wait a minute! If Envy and I are in the middle of this room, Al and Gluttony maybe could be in…..

Envy: Come on! Bring up you (Goes to him)

Ed: Umh… (Stands up) I don’t have any time to fight with you Envy!! But if you want it…Catch me if you can!!! (Starts to run)

Envy: Oh you want to play? (Runs behind him) You forgot that I’m strongest than you

Ed: *thinking* Damn! I didn’t think in that, I need to win time (Claps hands and all the roof falls behind him) Now all I need is go to the other side of the house (Runs)
“Hahahaha” (The wall brakes)

Envy: If you believe that with this you won me, you’re wrong I will find you no matter what and when I have the chance I’m going to kill you like I did it one year ago and this time your little brother don’t be here…… (Starts to walk…into the darkness)

…

Al: *pant pant* I think I lost him …. (Turns around) Ah! This is……. It can’t be!

I need to warn Ed! This is dangerous for him.

…

Ed: Al! ....Alphonse!!...Uh? A gate! (Opens the door) Umh… The same place…… But now is different because Rose and Dante don’t be here.

“You are wrong……Edward”

Ed: ???

“You don’t change anything….. You want to protect your little brother”

Ed: Because HE IS my brother and don’t start to tell me that fallacy that the Equivalent Exchange don’t exist.

“I believe that you finally understand it when your little brother lost the memory one year ago”

Ed: But now he remember all and I have to pay for it (Touch his automail) whatever you tell me I don’t listening you….I’m still believing in the Equivalent Exchange.

“And you are still like your father; Edward……dogged and fools”

Ed: You have the same body or you just change your soul to another one?.....Dante

Dante: Hahaha At last you recognized me

Ed: I’m already know you are…….I smell the odor of the putrefaction in the air

Dante: Really? Well then, I will just change to another body, because yes, Ed I still have the same body of your…little foolish friend…..How was her name? Oh yes!...Lyra

Ed: You don’t have heart…..

Dante: Yes Ed, I have one….But the human kind IS the one that don’t have a heart

Ed: Why do you say that?

Dante: I believe that I’m already told you…… The human aren’t ready for the powers of the Alchemy and…..for the Philosopher’s Stone….. They just start to kill them.

Ed: You forget that YOU are a human too, Dante

Dante: No…..no more……Since I started to transmute my soul to another bodies and live for 400 years I stop to be a human.

Ed: Even with a live for 400 years you are a human!! And that’s something that you never understand Dante!

“Ed!!!”

Ed: ???

“Ed! We have to run now this place is dangerous”

Ed: Winry? Where’s Al?

Winry: He is outside! Hurry we don’t have time!!

Ed: You’re laying me…..My brother never will wait me outside.

Winry: But you have to believe me Ed! You are in danger and I don’t want to lose you (approaches to him)…..because I love you (hugs him)

Ed: !! (He can’t loosen) Get off!!!!

Winry: Hehehehe (starts to transformed) I can’t believe how easily was this.

Ed: Get off me!!!!

Envy: (Transforms again) Come on…..Ed be a good child

Ed: You think that transformed into my mother I will listen to you!?

Envy: Oh…. Well then let’s transform into (transforms) this old face; oh I forgot it is the same face! But this one has a special technique (Releases him and his arms starts to transform into water)

Ed: You are a cowardly Envy!!! You try to cheat the people with false persons

Envy: Really? And you are so stupid…. (An arm of water entangles around his ankle)

Ed: !!!! (Falls, and another “arms” entangles around his body; they raise him) Ugh……

Dante: Enough Envy!........ Now I can proceed with my plan

Ed: Plan?

Dante: I need your brother….like I think Envy told you. He is still valuable for me, also….. We know why right?

Ed: Shut up!!!

Dante: You can’t stop to imagine that this day will be arrived don’t you? And when I have your brother in my hands…..I don’t know how much of power I will need…so I have not choice…..Maybe I will kill him (Ed starts to approach his hands backwards)

Ed: What!?—umhg (An arm of water entangles around his mouth)

Dante: But I can’t let you to tell him about that…….. Maybe you could ruin it….. (His hands are closer)

Ed: *thinking* you---you will not use my brother and I…Not this time (Something evaporates and Envy released Ed; he starts to run)

Dante: !!!..............He used Alchemy….Envy go for him before he finds Al!!

……

Ed: *pant pant* Where I am? I need to find Al…..This is my entire fault……

“So you want to be the big brother now?”

Ed: !!!

“So sad that you are brothers and you can’t take care one of the other (You can see a brilliant purple eyes in the dark) Maybe I can repair that….Killing you!!!” (A piece of wall falls in front of Ed and a dust cloud rises)

Ed: *cough cough* Where…..?—ouf (Envy hit him in his stomach and Ed falls) umph…..

Envy: Arise you (The dust cloud disappears) I will never forgive you……If my master don’t command me to have you with life, I killed you without think about!......

Ed: Well umph you already do that one year ago…….Why Dante commands you don’t kill me…Now?
Envy: I believe that you understand it before……Come here (He grasp Ed’s neck) Do you really believe that I like it? I hate all of you…..specially you……You are just like him you have the same eyes……The same stupid smile….

Ed: You….You….are….talking….about my….father…..right? I know…..that you hate him…..because….he creates you…..and….you…hate me….because….I’m just…like...him…..but….why?.....why do…you…hate…the humans?.....You...just….enjoy to….see….these people….dead?.....You…don’t …..Have….any…..heart…..

Envy: I’m a homunculus!! But maybe you forget it…..Let me refresh your memory!!!!!! (He throws Ed to a pair of tables and one of those breaks because the wood was too weak)

Ed: ….. (Tries to stand up) ugh…..*thinking* Damn it! I believe that he fractures me the wrist (Tries again to stand up with the other hand but a foot prevent him)

Envy: You go to some part?

Ed: Umph….. (Whit his right hand tries to draw a transmutation circle)

Envy: Don’t think about (Steps on his left wrist)

Ed: Argh……..

Envy: This is the only thing that I enjoy…..I feed from the pain of you…the humans (steps on with more energy)

Ed: Ahhhhhh!!!!!!! (You can hear the sound of some bone that “creaks”)

Envy: Hahaha…..Now will go with my master, but first we need to do something with that mouth and those hands (Evil smile)………

…….

Al: Brother!!! Brother!!!!......Brother….where are you? ... I can’t believe it…That this was trap…..Now he is danger….All for my fault….If I only listen to him….!!!
Maybe Winry hear all this noise and go for help! I need to return—

“I can smell the odor from flesh……But now is your brother……”

Al: Gluttony! ....Wait! Do you say something about my brother?

Gluttony: The odor from the flesh of your brother…….I can smell it
And the odor of fresh blood……


Al: Where is my brother!!??
Gluttony: I can smell the odor from your blood……. The master tells something……He said…….. (Goes into the dark)

Al: Wait!!!

Gluttony: He said…… (Goes away…..)

Al: Wait!!!

Gluttony: Mmmmmm (Al follow him and then, Gluttony open a door and disappears)

Al: A door! (Stops in front of that door) I….remember something…..Before…..One year ago…. Lights……Ed…and Rose….. (Push the door)….. !!!!!!!
(He looks around and starts to remember……Dante in the body of Lyla…..Rose….Wrath….Envy laughing….Ed….dead. The door close behind him and a few lights turn off)

“Hello kid…..”

Al: !!!

“Or… I need to say….Alphonse” (Goes into the light)


Al: I know you……..You’re Dante!!!!
Dante: Well….I have to admit, Edward take more time in guessing it….

Al: My brother!?

Dante: Yes…He was here you know?.....He tries to escape like a cowardly…

Al: It isn’t certain……My brother never will do it

Dante: Hum……(Close her eyes) But I can’t let him go….To find you

Al: What do you did to him!!?

Dante: He is fine….For now….Envy, come here (Envy goes to the light, but he is dragging something)

Al: !!! (That person bring up the head and Al discovers that is Ed, but he is gag and tied)

Ed: Al!!!

Al: Brother!!! Let him go!

Dante: You love him so much true? And he too, that’s why he tried to protect you because you have
something valuable in your vein….

Al: What!?

Dante: Ed didn’t tell you?

Ed: Stop….it

Dante: I’m really surprised…..You are valuable and your brother never tells you about…..

Al: What is it?

Dante: When Ed bring your body back, he used the Philosopher’s stone that was united to your armor, but he never believe that that transmutation have a secondary effect…..

Ed: St…op!!!!

Dante: The stone disappears, but a few particles don’t…….

Al: !!!

Dante: Thus it is, Alphonse Elric….. Now those particles are in your blood!

Ed: (Close his eyes) ………..

Al: ………..Is that true brother?

Ed: (Open his eyes and slumps his head)

Dante: See now? That law doesn’t exist. All the love that you give to him and he hides that secret to you…… Then, where is the equivalence?

Al: ……….

Dante: Envy! (He transforms his arm into a knife and put it near of Ed’s neck)

Al: Ed! Let him go!

Dante: And if I kill him right now….All the troubles that you passed to arrive here for nothing….Where is the equivalence?

Ed: Al! ...Don’t….listen….to…her!—ghh... (Envy approaches the knife more)
(Silence)

Dante: The two of us want something…..I want a few pieces of the stone…..And you want your brother…..

Al: …….. If…If I deliver to you…..Would you let him go?

Ed: No…Al!!

Dante: Like a.... Exchange?

Al: You don’t believe in that law…..Just call them…. Exchange

Dante: Exchange? Your blood……for the life of your brother……Interesting….

Ed: Al! .....don’t!

Al: What do you say?

Ed: Don’t!!!!

Envy: Shut up (hits him)

Dante: *smiles* Done (“creaks” her fingers and Envy throws Ed. Al goes to him and inclines over him, but a couple of daggers trapped him to the door, far of Ed)

Ed: Al!!! (Tussles for deliver himself) Ghhm…..Al!! (Sound of an explosion)

Dante: The military……. Let’s go Envy

Envy: Hahaha (Brake the wall)

Ed: Bro...ther!!!! (Tussles)

“Don’t move Fullmetal!” (A hand “creaks” the fingers and the bindings start to burn)

Ed: !!.....Ge….neral! (He delivers and withdraws the gag) Al! He is in danger!

Roy: We know it

Ed: How?

Roy: …… Your teacher

Ed: ?? She is here?

“Right behind you” (Ed looks behind)

Ed: Teacher (inclines)

Izumi: I just arrived to the city for medicines and visit you and Alphonse; and now I find that you are in danger……specially Al!!

Ed: I’m sorry…..It’s my entire fault

Izumi: Explain it

Ed: (Slumps his look) ……..I….. Came here for a mission….Al want to come with me too…..And….

Izumi: You let him go with you!!?

Ed: Yes….

Izumi: I can’t believe that from you!!......Stupid apprentice! (Slaps him) You don’t see it, that now Al is in danger? Your brother!!

Ed: ……..

Izumi: …… You stay here, I will go for Alphonse

Ed: But…..Teacher

Izumi: No! .......You stay here; I’m going for Al because you couldn’t protect him a little more, you are a bad brother

Ed: !!! (Izumi walks into the dark hole in the wall)

Roy: Fullmetal…..

Ed: General! I…need to go with my brother…..

Roy: …….

Ed: She’s right, it’s my fault and maybe…I am a bad brother…..But for that reason I have to go with Al…..To…remedy it.

Roy: *smiles* Go ahead Fullmetal, we will try to find that substance for you now…..Go with Al…..He needs you

Ed: Thanks (Smiles and runs into the hole in the wall)

……

(Al wake and open his eyes little by little)

Al: Umh…. Bro…ther….. (He is tied up to the wall)

Ed: Yes, Al? At last you wake up (Evil smile) we don’t need to wait more right? Now just be quiet while I take your blood.

Al: Brother…. Why?

Ed: You are so foolish to understand it, but now….that you know it I can start to use you……Hehehehehe

Dante: Enough Envy, you will hurt him…….It isn’t….. Alphonse? (Touch his cheek) Poor Al, you are sad because Ed didn’t tell that before?

Al: …….

Dante: So sad…… I will feel terrible too if my brother hide to me secrets.
But don’t worry, maybe I could help you with that, just give me a little of your blood, and I can create with Philosophers stones incompletes a real one. (She transmutes a piece of wall into a knife and does a little court in his left arm and in one side of his thorax)

Al: Ahhh!!!! (Dante take a little bottle and waits to the drops of blood that are slip)

“And how exactly you will help him extract him blood, Dante?” (Dante turns around)

Dante: Ohh…. Izumi, what are you doing here?

Izumi: I’m just come for Al, so, if you don’t mind, I will take him with me

Dante: I’m afraid not, Izumi……Gluttony!! Envy!!

Gluttony: Here I come!!! (Izumi claps hands and beaks appear of the ground)

Ahh!!! Scares me!!! (Gluttony recedes and she walks to Al)

Envy: Don’t touch him! A few beaks don’t scare me at all….. (She stops and turns around)

Izumi: So, you are Envy….

Envy: Yes…..Maybe you remember (transforms into wrath) to me?

Izumi: !!! (Envy approaches and gives to her a punch, but Izumi shuns)

Envy: So you are fast, but lets see how you can resist (A little fight begins, but in the last shun…)

Izumi: Bluarhggg (Vomits blood) *cough cough* (Falls)

Envy: Weak….Like all the humans (He grasps Izumi’s blouse)

“Get away from her!!” (Envy turns head)

Envy: So…You come back shorty

Al: Brother!

Ed: Get away…… From my brother and my teacher…..Now!

Envy: Ha (Loosens Izumi) Are you sure that you can beat me with one broken wrist and an automail damaged?

Ed: Maybe you will break my wrist and damaged my automail, but I still have legs…..

Envy: Don’t worry; I will break you a leg!

Ed: I don’t think so (Transmutes his automail into a beak) Lets fight!!

Envy: Bring them on Shorty!!!! (Fight that I know you can image between Ed and Envy, looks like Ed is about won, but……)

Al: Brother!! (Dante approaches to Al with the knife again)

Ed: !!!

Envy: To slow! (Hit him and Ed falls, he makes a little lance and throws it to Dante; she loosens the knife; Ed stand up and kick Envy, he crash with the wall but takes the knife…) You can never win….. Because you are weak when someone approaches to your little brother huh?

Ed: Get away from him!!

Envy: Hahaha (Pins the knife in one side of Al’s thorax)

Al: Ahhhhhhhh!!!!!

Ed: Alphonse!!!!!!! Bastard!! (Makes another lance and throws to Envy, then he claps his hands and beaks appears from the ground, Envy shuns all the attacks, but when he shun the last one Ed make a large lance and cross it the stomach of Envy)

Dante: Very impressive Ed, but you will need more than that to kill a homunculus (Extract the knife and gathers the blood of Al) It isn’t enough blood…..Maybe I need more (Izumi bring ups with difficulty, but she can do anything because she is weak; Dante clean the knife with a tissue and she is about court again……)

Ed: Loose….. To my brother (Ed is holding another knife, now without his beak of automail and trembles of hate; Izumi remembers that Mason tells her years ago, when they were in the island, Ed was the first one with the courage necessary and he said the same things: “Loose….. To my brother”) Loose….. (Remembers) To my brother

Dante: You are (turns head) so--!!!!! (She sees the eyes of Ed) -----(Important for the next chapter!!)

Envy: You—(Extract the lance and goes to Ed)

Dante: Envy don’t!!!

Envy: ??? (Silence)
(Sounds of explosions again, and the noise of landslide)

Dante: Let’s go Envy! I have enough blood for now

Envy: But master—

Dante: Do it what I’m saying!! Gluttony! Come here! (Gluttony brakes the wall and they disappears in the dark)

Ed: Al!! (Goes to him and court the bindings; Then he is holding his head) Talk to me Al!!! Wake up! Come on! Wake up brother!!

Al: ……..

Ed: Come on Al!!! Wake up! .....Don’t brother! Don’t leave me!!! (In his eyes starts to appear tears) I love you Al! Don’t leave me alone!!! ......Please…..

Al: Bro…Brother?....

Ed: Al!!

Al: I’m not hating you brother…..For not tell me……the value of my blood……before

Ed: Don’t be silly Al! .......Come here……Get up

Izumi: Do you need help Ed?

Ed: !!.....I’m…sorry teacher…I---

Izumi: No Ed…..I’m sorry, I’m mistake about you …… Actually you are an exemplary big brother……..

Al: (Smiles) Can we go home now?

Izumi: Of course Al….

Ed: Sure!...Now get up, you need to walk a little.

Soldiers: Major Elric! It’s anything alright?

Ed: Yes…. I just need to take my little brother to a hospital

Soldiers: Alright, let’s moving this place is about collapse.

…..

(Ed and Izumi hold on Al and appears outside)

Winry: Ed! Al! Are you ok? (They look one second and smiles)

Ed Al: Yes, we are Winry!!

Ed: We just going to a hospital

Al: And home……

(You can see all the militaries around the place and a pretty sundown in the east)
THE END
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Thursday, February 1, 2007

   The sea
I like this very much ^//^

The sea……do you see something so beautiful?
There are dolphins, whales and turtles
The sun is rising on the East and the water is too quiet and silent…

My hearth is an ocean
An ocean of love
An ocean of truth
An ancient ocean…where perhaps turns on to life very soon………
Emily
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   Wings
Ok then, one more of my 100 poems XD lol just kidding but really...I have lots of poems n_ñ

Wings…

The wings of liberty
The wings of love
The wings of sacrifice

Wings that help to fly over the darkness

Wings of friendship
Wings of the dreams
Wings in the heaven
Wings in the darkness
Wings in the Midnight
Wings in the heart

The world is in the wings of hope…
Emily
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   Another poem n//n
My spirit is in the darkness.
There is no light and my last hope its’ away……
My blood is in the floor of my road
My heart is dying.

Please!!! Everyday I think in a new day
Please!!! No more pain
Please!!! Save me of the dark…

Emily
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Tuesday, January 2, 2007

   Ok then, like I say on "Talents" I like to write thoughts or poems ^-^. Then.... Here is one. Hope you like it n_n :

Winter…
The snow is falling softly…
I stay at the window
I’m seeing the white trees through it…
All resembles you
Your white smile
Your tender eyes
Your pearled skin

I miss you
You promise me that you will return on winter…
So every night I stay at the window
Watching how the snowflakes fall
Wishing you were somehow here again
Watching the winter pass
Waiting for you…

Emily

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