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Monday, July 24, 2006


   ENDING NOTES
Three weeks later Greed decided there was nothing left to live for. So he killed himself. Safira was sad for two years and didn’t say a word the whole time. They had to teach her how to talk again. Wrath was sad because Safira was sad. Envy threw a party the minute Greed killed himself. Happy cause Rin AND Greed died. Lust did nothing. Gluttony was sad because he wanted to eat her. Sloth was annoyed because of Wrath’s whining. Pride was devastated because the only date he got with her was by force. Envy killed Leiko six years later because she was too hyper. Dante ran out of bodies to move to so she died. In conclusion, Rin was an important person to everyone. She was calming, caring, loving, and powerful, and a good person. Her death affected everyone.
Rest In Peace Rin.
The End

I am going to make a new story now though so please read.


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CHAPTER 11! LAST CHAPTER!
Everything was still black but she heard murmuring. When she tried to speak nothing but raspy air came out. She started crying. She knew what was happening.
Greed and Pride walked over to her and sat down on the bed. Safira jumped up on the bed and crawled over to Rin. “What’s wrong mommy?” she said. “It’s nothing. I’m probably just sick,” she said, but Greed knew something was wrong. She tried to open her eyes again but everything was still blurry. She could tell that everyone had left the room because all the murmuring had stopped. “Tell me what’s wrong,” said Greed. “I told you. It’s nothin’,” she said again. “I know there is something wrong. Now TELL ME RIN!” She started crying again. “There’s… there’s… an ancient prophecy, that says… the Earth Alchemist… brought back to life by true love… the homunculus made from the Earth Alchemist… will die when it’s supposed to turn 24... from an unknown cause,” she said. Greed’s eyes went wide,” Wh…wh… what?” “I turn 24 in three days, Greed,” she said. “You CAN’T!” yelled Greed. Rin fainted again. When she woke up, she saw Greed held against the wall with swords. She also saw Pride standing next to him. Pride had a dark look on his face. She sat up and yelled,” PRIDE? What are you doing?!” “No one defies a date with me!” he yelled. She was going to yell something again, but she started coughing. Pride walked over to the bed and tilted up her chin. “If you go out on a date with me, then I’ll let him go and I won’t bother you anymore about it,” he said. “No,” she said while coughing. “Oh, I would if I were you.” he held up a bag. Rin’s eyes went wide as she new what it was. “Don’t take it near him. I’ll go but you better not take that near him,” she said. “Good,” he said,” tomorrow then?”
Then next night, Rin was getting ready, when she remembered Greed was still hanging on the wall. She ran over to him and tried to pull the swords out of him, but they wouldn’t budge. “I’m sorry,” she whispered. Pride walked in and said,” It’s time to go.” When the date was over, she ran all the way home. When Pride got there finally, she yelled,” Take those swords out of him now!” He walked over to Greed, waved his hand over the swords and they came out. Rin pushed Pride out and ran to Greed. She dragged him over to the bed and laid him down. He opened his eyes just as Rin broke down into a coughing fit. He got up and laid her down on the bed.
It was the day of death. Rin’s coughing fit had made her sleep for two days. She got up and got dressed into a beautiful black and red dress. She walked downstairs to find everyone sitting downstairs talking. “What’s the occasion?” asked Lust. “I have something to tell all of you.” she said. “I’m dying today. Safira started crying. “How?” asked Wrath. “There is a prophecy that predicts it.” Leiko stared in disbelief. The bartender threw a Dr. Pepper over to her. “How’d ya know?” she asked. He just shrugged his shoulders. Suddenly, a bright red light appeared around her. A loud high pitched noise started. When it was all done, she was not breathing. She was lying on the couch, limp as a noodle. Greed picked her up and took her outside. He put her in a tree and lit the tree on fire. He remembered that she once said when she died she wanted to be burned in a tree.



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Saturday, July 15, 2006


   Take this Quiz PLZ!

Which two anime characters would be good in a battle?
Edward Elric
Winry Rockbell
Greed
Inuyasha(demon)
Chiyo-Chan
ZatchBell
Kyo Sohma
Yotsuba
Miss Yukari
Sasuke
Gohan
Trunks
Sesshomaru
Chrono
Dark
Krad
Envy
Naraku
Riku
Sora
  
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   .....this thing is cool
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> > >>D. Green - Wacky
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> > >>F. Purple - Mysterious
> > >>
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> > >>B. Dog - Loving
> > >>C. Fish - Boring
> > >>D. Snake - Boyish
> > >>E. Parrot - Annoying
> > >>F. Mouse - Brainy
> > >>
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> > >>B. New York - Busy
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> > >>D. Spain - Mysterious
> > >>E. Montana - Country Girl/Boy
> > >>
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> > >>B. Piano - Popular
> > >>C. Electric Guitar - Wacky
> > >>D. Drums - Wild
> > >>
> > >>Question number FIVE:
> > >>A. Dr. Pepper - Popular
> > >>B. Sprite - Wacky
> > >>C. Coca Cola - Wild
> > >>D. Pepsi - Fun
> > >>E. Mountain Dew - Athletic
> > >>
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> > the amount of time (question) number 8 says!
> > >>
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Wednesday, July 12, 2006


   CHAPTER 10!!!! Finally! Im sry it took me soooo long! Well plz enjoy! (owwy my hand hurts! T.T)
Today was it. The big day. The once a year Homunculus Talent Show! They could do three acts maximum; One act minimum. She was going to do three. She and Greed were going to sing together, she was going to sing a song by herself, and she was going to dance to a J-Rock song. Shaggy jumped up on her lap and purred. “Hi Shaggy! I haven’t seen you in forever!” she laughed. Greed walked down the stairs and said,” Hey, Rin. I have a present for you.” “Really?” she said. “Yeah. Follow me.” he said back. He took her hand and pulled her up the stairs. When they got to their room, he said,” Close your eyes,” and covered her eyes with his hands. He walked her into the room and sat her down on the bed.
“Open your eyes,” he said. She opened her eyes. In front of her was a bear cub. “OH GREED! Its sooooooo cute!” she exclaimed. He grinned and handed her the bear. She held it up to her face and nuzzled it. She ran downstairs as fast as she could, which was pretty fast considering she is the Earth Sister. “COME DOWNSTAIRS EVERYONE AND GATHER IN THE LOUNGE!” yelled Dante. “Finally! I was starting to get even more nervous than I already was!” yelled Rin. They all crowded downstairs into the lounge. “We’re going in alphabet order. Envy start,” said Dante. “Rin, get up here NOW! We’re having a dance off!” yelled Envy. “Oh my god,” mumbled Rin. She hopped up on the stage and said,” You’re in for a big surprise, Envy.” We’re all in This Together started playing. Rin started first. By the time they were done, everyone had their votes in. Rin won. “Gluttony, it’s your turn!” Gluttony hobbled up on stage. He brought a couch and three glass bottles of beer with him. He put the bottles in his mouth and ate them. Then he began to eat the couch. When he finished he said,” I’m still hungry.” “GREED! Go.” He stepped up and called up Rin. When she got up there, he started to sing a song called “Grillz.” She new what to do. She and Greed had practiced this for three weeks. She started dancing. When they were done, everyone but Envy and Lust started clapping. Leiko was next. She did a tornado. Then it was Lust. She did target practice. Next it was Pride. He did a thing that made all the girls collapse. All the boys chased him off stage. Then Rin was up. She took Greed with her and got up on stage. They started singing a song called Bop to the Top. After that was over, she sang a song called Fairytale. And then she danced to a song called Undo. Everyone cheered and clapped. Safira got up with Wrath. They had a spar fight. Then Safira did a fire show. Everyone cheered and clapped for her. Sloth got up and went on stage. She had a human boy with her. She looked at him and he said,” Mommy?” and hugged her. They clapped. She went off stage and Wrath came up. He used alchemy and did some cool tricks. They clapped. “All right everyone. That is the end of our talent show. We had some impressive acts and some that weren’t that impressive.” Dante said as she glared at Envy. “You may all go now. The board will be up tomorrow.” They all left the lounge and threw a beer party. As they were walking upstairs (after the beer party) Rin suddenly collapsed.



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Sunday, June 25, 2006


   Guess What? The chapter you've all been waiting for... CHAPTER 9! WHOOO HOOO! YAY! ^^ CELEBRATE GOOD TIMES COME ON! Ok I'm done. Just enjoy the stinkin' chapter.
Rin couldn’t help but stare at their new hideout. It was beautiful. They went inside to set everything up. When they were finished, Rin pulled Greed outside and said,” Come on Greed, I’m going to show you my secret place.” She pulled Greed along so fast he kept losing his footing. She said,” Close your eyes.” She covered them to make sure and walked him forward. She uncovered his eyes and said,” Isn’t it beautiful?” He looked around and shrugged. They were standing in front a big pond that had flowers and animals all around it. The water was crystal clear. It was so clear that you could see the fish in it. A deer near by was getting a drink of water. When it saw them it started to run. Rin quickly stomped her foot. The deer stopped and looked at her. She started purring like a cat, and the deer came to her. She started to pet it when Greed walked over to her and said,” Can we go now?” “Why?” she said. He shrugged his shoulders. The deer ran away as Rin walked over to a nearby tree and sat down; hugging her knees. “You’re not having fun are you?” she said.” You don’t like it?” “Well, it’s not really my thing.” “I know but-“she stopped. “I thought I could change you. I’m sorry I tried to change you.” “It actually was kind of cool when you stopped that deer. How’d you do that?” he said. “I used to be the famous Earth Alchemist remember? Terra used to be able to talk to animals.” she said as she laughed. They got up and walked back to the hideout.
The next day, Dante called a meeting. “Surprise powers check everyone,” she said. “Today at 11 I will call all of you to a room and you will show me the powers you have. If I think you’ve improved or that your powers are good, you can stay with us in the group. If not, you’ll be killed. Any questions?” Everyone stared. “Good,” she said. At 11 everyone crowded into the room. “Leiko, you go first,” she stated. Leiko walked in front of her and started performing. After her it was Safira. Then it was Envy, then Wrath, then Pride, then Lust, next Gluttony, then Sloth, then Greed and last Rin. Rin’s and Safira’s performances were by far the best. Rin started. She started with her screaming technique. Then she practiced martial arts. Then her Earth performance. And last her rage. Safira’s performance was a spectacular fire show. “Well Congratulations. All of you pass.” she finally said. “YES!” they all yelled. By the time the beer party was over they all went to bed.



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Sunday, June 4, 2006


   *sniff*
im going to my dads this week so i wont be able to comment or anything for the week. Ill get back to you the next weekend im here. Itll be a couple of weeks. JAA NE!


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   Chapter 8 YES! ^^ ENJOY!

(Ed’s view) “MUSTANG! I need to go back and burn down their lair! She’s in there and I need to kill her! She’s my mistake so I need to correct her!” “No, Edward. I can’t allow you to that. She’s the strongest homunculus I’ve ever seen. She could be valuable research,” he said. “I don’t care what you say! I’m going to go there to do what I can.” “Fine then leave that watch here, and risk being arrested,” he said back. “Fine.” (Back to narrator) They had just gotten back from catching another homunculus. Rin was exhausted. The homunculus’s name was Leiko. Her power was agility. Because it was this, she was hyper everyday. Envy took Leiko up and showed her her room. Leiko’s room was silver. She had a tall bed, with grey sheets and white pillows. Her floor was made of silver carpet and her dresser was white. Her bathroom was white with pictures of a certain devil that she worshipped. “Leiko this is your room from now on,” said Envy,” you will NOT sleep anywhere else until Dante thinks you are ready.” Leiko stared.” Um, ok,” she said in awe. Envy left her to look at her room. Rin walked up to Leiko and started to explain how everything went at that house. She was almost finished when the ceiling started shaking. “What the hell could that be?” asked Rin. Leiko got up and yelled,” COME ON RIN!” Rin got up and started running after Leiko when a piece of ceiling fell and hit her on the head. It knocked her out. When she woke up, she was in a room of fire. She stood up and all she saw was fire. She was dizzy; she fell down when she stood up. She also discovered that she had a broken ankle. She started to crawl to the bedroom door when she broke down in a coughing attack. She fell to the floor while coughing and new she had to get out of there before she choked. She couldn’t die but she new her remains were right across the hall and she didn’t want to risk getting killed. She started crawling to the door again, when the door flew open.
She saw a small figure in the smoke. She realized who it was; it was the FullMetal runt. He kicked her in the gut and then picked her up, threw her over his shoulder, and walked out of the bedroom. The whole house was on fire. She was helpless. She couldn’t stop coughing, she had a broken leg, and she was weak. Suddenly she heard a bang and he dropped her. Then she was picked up again and whoever was carrying her now, was running. She heard another bang, and then she saw light. Then everything went black.
When she opened her eyes, she saw Safira. “SHE’S AWAKE! SHE’S AWAKE EVERYONE! Are you ok mommy? You’ve been asleep for a whole three days,” she said. “Nng,” she grunted.” I’m fine.” She tried to get up, but fell right back down. She ran into someone’s hand. It was Greed. He had his hand in front of her. “You’re not getting up yet,” he said.” you’re still too hurt.” All she did was lay there; motionless.
Three days later, they had found a new hideout and Rin could walk again. Their new hideout was in a giant oak tree. Rin helped build a tree house that was big enough for everything. Plus, it was even big enough for two floors and a bar.



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Monday, May 29, 2006


   *sniff*
I wont be able to post all week because ill be gone so ill get back to you when I get home next weekend! JAA NE!


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   Chapter 7! YAY! ^^
^.^

“AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!” she screamed. She ran into the wall as she backed away from him. “Hey, it’s me! Don’t run,” he said. She sat against the wall, still screaming. Safira, Wrath, Envy, and Pride ran in the door. Rin still screaming got up and ran to Pride and hugged him.
“Well jeez Greed what did you do to her?” said Envy. “Shut up you no good bastard.” He transformed back as he said that. Rin let go of Pride and walked over to Greed. She smoothed back his hair and said,” Why didn’t you show me this before?” He looked up and said,” I thought you would hate me.” “No I wouldn’t hate you, I’d be scared for a minute but as soon as I realized its you I wouldn’t be,” she said. She leaned in and kissed him. He got up and went over to Pride and shook his hand. “Just be sure you don’t EVER kiss her again.” he said.
That night as she was sleeping, her back, arms, neck, chest, and legs started to hurt. She tossed and turned in her bed and she started to sweat. She was breathing heavily too. Greed woke up and looked at her and shook her. He didn’t know what was going on. He thought she was having a nightmare. Rin started shaking and trembling all over. Then she stopped all of a sudden and was normal again. He got up and went to Dante’s room. He barged down the door and yelled,” WHAT’S HAPPENING TO HER?!” “She is simply getting her lines and spots! Now go back to bed and leave me alone!” she yelled back at him. He left the room and went to get a cool washrag. When he got back to the room, she was breathing heavily again. He put the washrag on her forehead and grabbed her hand. He sat by the bed for three days without moving. After three days had passed, she began to scream. Greed covered his ears. Everyone came running up to their room and watched.
Rin began to get red lines all around her body. Each one with a red spot on the end. By the time they were all on she got up and said,” What?” She felt fine. She felt no pain. As if nothing happened. The lines went down her legs on both sides, up the sides of her stomach, down her arms to her wrists, and around her sides to her back. One line started in the middle of her back and went up and around her shoulders to her chest, one went around her neck, and one went down her chest to her belly button.



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