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Sunday, May 28, 2006


   Chapter 5! YAY!
Well here it is folks! i finished it last night while I was watcging FMA! ENJOY!

"HEY! FULLMETAL! OVER HERE DUMB ASS!" yelled Rin. She had gotten up on a table and was yelling at him. He looked over in her direction. She jumped off the table, into the air, and landed with a kick in his face. "You are the mistake I have to take care of you lowly homunculus," he said." and I'm going to rid the world of that mistake." "You're going to regret saying anything prideful to me cause' I'm gonna beat your ass down until you wish you hadn't been born punk," she smartly remarked back. She punched him in the face and then kicked him…hard. He fell on the floor and groaned in pain, then looked up and said,” Who are you really?” He had never known her name or what she really looked like because the last time he fought her she knocked him out before he caught a glimpse of her. “Fine then. If you’re really sure you want to know,” she said slyly. She looked for Wrath and then called his name. When he came running she said,” I trust you’ve already met Wrath. He’s my handy hair helper. He is the one who helped me dye my hair the way Terra did.” “HOW DO YOU KNOW TERRA?!” he yelled. “Oh please, don’t tell me you don’t remember me,” she said,” Wrath I need you to undye my hair.” He did and then ran off again. Back to having black hair she pulled out a black ribbon and twirled it around herself. When it completely engulfed her she untwirled it and she was back to wearing black again. His eyes went wide. “Now listen here pipsqueak,” she said,” whether you like it or not I know the story,” she began to say,” once upon a time, a stupid boy tried to bring back his girlfriend and fellow military worker. When he failed in his attempt that girl became a homunculus and ran away. The girl was found by a band of other homunculi and was taken in to their lair. When they told her who she was, a handsome man came and helped her along her way to knowing who she was. The two fell in love and came back to kill the boy who brought her back.” Just then Greed walked up to them and smirked at him. “Now do you remember?” she said,” well just in case I’ll tell you. The boy in the story is you Ed and the girlfriend is Terra. I am the homunculus that became of you trying to bring back Terra and this is the homunculus that girl fell in love with.” “That’s right and if you have any thoughts you’d better talk it out with me!” yelled Greed. He punched Ed in the stomach then ran after another guy.
Rin started to fight him when suddenly she blacked out. The last thing she saw was Roy Mustang watching her from above her face.
When she woke up she was chained to a wall by her hands and she was sitting on her knees. She then remembered what Dante had taught her. She then screamed at the top of her lungs and held it. Sure enough all the guards dropped down to their knees and yelled in pain and all the chains broke. She got up and stopped screaming. She squeezed through the bars of the cell and started running down the hall when she ran into a man. It was Mustang.
“You’re not going anywhere. We have some questions to ask you.” he said. He pushed her back into the cell and then stepped inside with her. Ed and three other men walked in with him. They pushed her down and torched the chains back in place. “Now to begin with, where are the other homunculi?” he asked. “I’m not going to tell you Mr. I’m so cool cause’ I got my fire!” she mocked. “Fine then, where is your hideout?” “I’m not saying because you’re c.o.o.l.”
“Why thank y- HEY WAIT A MINUTE I AM NOT!” “Hehe.” “Anyhow back to business. Who brought you back?” “ Oh, I’d be happy to tell you who. EDWARD ELRIC. Terra was his girlfriend and she died so he tried to bring her back.” “Ok. Wher-“ “WOULD YOU JUST SHUT UP?! I’M NOT ANSWERING ANY OF YOUR QUESTIONS SO GIVE IT A REST!” She lost control. Her eyes glowed red and she began breathing heavily. The chains broke once again and she charged at them.
She ran right into Roy and punched him. Then she ran out the door. She got back to the hideout and everyone was there. Greed ran over to her and asked,” Where have you bee-“ Rin collapsed on the floor and didn’t move. Greed picked her up and took her to her room. When he laid her down she groaned and then said no more.



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