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Monday, July 24, 2006


CHAPTER 11! LAST CHAPTER!
Everything was still black but she heard murmuring. When she tried to speak nothing but raspy air came out. She started crying. She knew what was happening.
Greed and Pride walked over to her and sat down on the bed. Safira jumped up on the bed and crawled over to Rin. “What’s wrong mommy?” she said. “It’s nothing. I’m probably just sick,” she said, but Greed knew something was wrong. She tried to open her eyes again but everything was still blurry. She could tell that everyone had left the room because all the murmuring had stopped. “Tell me what’s wrong,” said Greed. “I told you. It’s nothin’,” she said again. “I know there is something wrong. Now TELL ME RIN!” She started crying again. “There’s… there’s… an ancient prophecy, that says… the Earth Alchemist… brought back to life by true love… the homunculus made from the Earth Alchemist… will die when it’s supposed to turn 24... from an unknown cause,” she said. Greed’s eyes went wide,” Wh…wh… what?” “I turn 24 in three days, Greed,” she said. “You CAN’T!” yelled Greed. Rin fainted again. When she woke up, she saw Greed held against the wall with swords. She also saw Pride standing next to him. Pride had a dark look on his face. She sat up and yelled,” PRIDE? What are you doing?!” “No one defies a date with me!” he yelled. She was going to yell something again, but she started coughing. Pride walked over to the bed and tilted up her chin. “If you go out on a date with me, then I’ll let him go and I won’t bother you anymore about it,” he said. “No,” she said while coughing. “Oh, I would if I were you.” he held up a bag. Rin’s eyes went wide as she new what it was. “Don’t take it near him. I’ll go but you better not take that near him,” she said. “Good,” he said,” tomorrow then?”
Then next night, Rin was getting ready, when she remembered Greed was still hanging on the wall. She ran over to him and tried to pull the swords out of him, but they wouldn’t budge. “I’m sorry,” she whispered. Pride walked in and said,” It’s time to go.” When the date was over, she ran all the way home. When Pride got there finally, she yelled,” Take those swords out of him now!” He walked over to Greed, waved his hand over the swords and they came out. Rin pushed Pride out and ran to Greed. She dragged him over to the bed and laid him down. He opened his eyes just as Rin broke down into a coughing fit. He got up and laid her down on the bed.
It was the day of death. Rin’s coughing fit had made her sleep for two days. She got up and got dressed into a beautiful black and red dress. She walked downstairs to find everyone sitting downstairs talking. “What’s the occasion?” asked Lust. “I have something to tell all of you.” she said. “I’m dying today. Safira started crying. “How?” asked Wrath. “There is a prophecy that predicts it.” Leiko stared in disbelief. The bartender threw a Dr. Pepper over to her. “How’d ya know?” she asked. He just shrugged his shoulders. Suddenly, a bright red light appeared around her. A loud high pitched noise started. When it was all done, she was not breathing. She was lying on the couch, limp as a noodle. Greed picked her up and took her outside. He put her in a tree and lit the tree on fire. He remembered that she once said when she died she wanted to be burned in a tree.



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