Monday, December 10, 2007

ok, so last thursday i got clipped, geez damn crazy drivers. I HOPE YER WING MIRRORS BROKE!!!. damn idiots. anyways. for the last few days ive been hobbleing around like i had somthing shoved too far up my ass. it wrecked my phone and not to mention the speakers. so now im kinda depraved of my musioc, cause it was a phoner and mp3 combined (i know thats not all that rare. lol) £300 down the drain cause some idiot cant drive safly. geez. I HOPE YOU ROT IN HELL YOU IDIOTIC B******, DRIVE SAFER IF YA DONT WANNA KILL SOMEONE!!!





(so i dont get in trouble with anyone. whare it seems that i am being rude and it looks like im haveing a go at the reader. im not. I direct that to the driver who run me down)
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Monday, October 29, 2007

Chapter 3> more aliens?! Welcome to colony 35



misty and I worked all night, fixing the ion drive, though I had to admit to myself, I became distracted at times, for one reason or another.

"attention, we are beginning docking sequence to colony 35, general kauru, deck chief misty, lieutenant himiwari, please come to the bridge immediately!" we looked at each other, then laughed a little, "geez, I wonder what it is this time, anyways lets go, I don't want to make her angry" I said as we headed up to the bridge, hina joined us on our way up, "you ok, hina, you look a little pale"

She smiled "im fine, just a little nervous, and well…"she looked at misty

"What? Is it cause im an alien??" she frowned

"Well, this is my first time meeting one, let alone speaking to one" we all laughed at that, and we headed through the doors to the bridge

"Captain! What's the status?"

"Alls well, were just about to dock"

"Good, could someone fill me in, don't forget im a bit behind the times here, and well I don't know what to expect" I asked

"Captain, if I may?" misty said

"Sure, go ahead, after all you know more about the place than me" the captain laughed



"well…" misty began "…space colony 35 was the first colony built by both the human race and my beast race, and so, both races live on this colony, though now there's more humans than beasts, and through the years our races have begun to mix. There are approximately 36 million humans alone on this colony, next to the 9 billion scattered throughout the galaxy. And there are 25 million beasts, next to the 18 billion throughout this galaxy, and the Pegasus galaxy.

Now, when we arrive there's probably gonna be a welcoming committee, a big one, your kinda famous, even among my people, so expect a warm welcome. But I should warn, you some of our race, doesn't take kindly to humans, and seek to oppress them, so its possible that their gonna try to pull something…" the captain interrupted "and that's why you, misty will be in charge of his safety, is that ok, keep your eyes on him, and don't let him out of your sights for even a moment" the captain ordered



There was a large clunk on the hull as the docking clamps latched onto the ikazu. Myself, Hina and Misty, followed by the captain, and Natsuke, Kira, and Jack, three of the bridge officers, walked along the umbilical tunnel into the concourse. We kept on walking along the concourse, to a balcony that overlooked the rest of the docks, I counted 12 ships similar in size to the ikazu, but in different shapes and colours. The commander lead us towards an elevator platform

"ok general, once we depart from here, misty will take you and hina to the penthouse. At 1500 hours tomorrow there will be a conference, one whare everything that happened in the last 1500 years will be explained to you. Don't be late" the commander said sharply as we departed from the elevator.



Misty lead us to where a car was waiting for us

"driver, the angel hotel, and step on it" misty sounded as she was getting agitated.

"the 'angel hotel'?..." I asked "…where's that?"

"its in the 3 section of the station, theres six sections in total, each with someone in charge of it, so there is a high council, comprised of 7 people. 2 human, 2 beast, 2 half breeds and one who oversees their actions. Im actually the daughter of the section 3s council member, so Im kinda famous myself, but I hate my father, he always treats me like a kid, always saying that I need to grow up, and become a 'PROPER LADY' geez like that'll ever happen, theres no way hes geiing me away from being a chief mechanic" she ranted on, but stopped when she saw my bewilderment.

"so you're a high class beast? Who works as a mechanic on the ikazu, interesting" she looked at me harshly "hey, hey, I was just having a laugh, geez"

the car came to a halt outside a large building which climbed all the way to the top of the dome like structure. We were ushered inside by misty who took us to the top floor which had views of both the city and space. We stared out towards the center of the station, it looked so huge

"you know. This is gonna take some getting used to"
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Friday, October 19, 2007

   look i dont to sound like im having a go at people, but i want to know what people think of my stuff, one of my major rules which i havent put up is if you comment on anything of mine illl leave comments on somthing of yours. its only fair right, geez, when i dont get comments, which i havent for a while now, it makes me feel like theres no point in puttin up art if no one is gonna comment. from now on i would appreciate it if people actually commented, wether its on my posts or my art it dosent matter, but please comments please....
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Monday, October 8, 2007

im really really really really really really really really really really really sori havent updated recently, with my school work piling up its kinda getting to me. anyways, im ok before anyone asks, apart from the stab mark on my left shoulder, this is why i shouldn't go out at night alone, especially when its a saturday night. im ok, although the same cannot be said to the ones who attacked me. ahhh, i dont think that theyll be comeing out of hospital very soon.

currently im having to go through a little rehab for my arm, its painful but its nothing that i cant handle.

anyways c ya
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Monday, September 3, 2007

just out of peak curiosity, who here, plays guild wars frequently?
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Sunday, June 24, 2007

Chapter 2: starfleet earth - the alien mechanic girl

It had been almost a week after being forced to leave my homeland, earth. Those aboard the ship were extremely tense. I knew how they felt but kept to myself.
"Attention all decks, at 0600 hours tomorrow, we will be rejoining the main fleet at space colony 35. I know that you're all extremely upset about earth, as I feel the same, but we mustn't let those feelings get to us. Good luck�
Those words seemed to soothe my mind, and I headed towards the bridge. As I passed the mess hall I noticed something different about one of the crew; she had long cat like ears, and a tail to match. I didn't think much of it at first, and I carried on towards the bridge.
The two guards stood sharp as I walked up the ramp towards the bridge doors
"you don't have to do that you know, you can be more relaxed you know" I smiled and walked on through
"Yessir" they both said in harmony.

"Ah, kauru, what brings you here?"
"Nothing really, just wanted to check on things"
"I see, well everything's going ok, but the morale of the crew still seems low"
"True, ill see what I can do to help. By the way, I couldn't help but notice that one of your crewmembers is, well, different" I said
"So you've noticed her, huh"� the captain smiled "nice girl, does what she's supposed to, without any fuss, and still has time to play around. Her names misty, and she's the only alien aboard this ship. She's also the chief engineer, you two would get along pretty well"
I smiled and left the bridge,
"I guess ill go say hi"
I made my way to hanger B and had a look around, then noticed an ion fusion drive unit, designed for small craft, it was a wreck "jeez, they have my original on here too?! Damn, and look at it, it"s totally trashed"� I looked around for some tools and started repairing it.

"AHHHHHHH! What are you doing?" someone shouted from behind me.
"I'm replacing the booster coil, what does it look like?" I said as I clambered out from underneath the drive unit. "Ah, your...misty right?"
"Yeah, but why are you messin with my ion drive? And do you even know what Ur doing?"� she said coldly
"huh, I...well...I designed them, so obviously I'm gonna know what to do right"
She smirked "that's impossible. Coz that would make ya, over 1500 years old"
"Wow, my age really doesn't show through does it, heheh" I smiled
"Y-you! Why you, get off my deck, now!" she yelled
"Hey, I'm being serious, my names kaloki kauru, the general-director of the G.O.S.D"� I replied quickly
"You, you were serious back then weren't you"� her face gave a shocked look
"Yes, I was serious. Anyway, ill let it slide this time"� I offered my hand "anyway, it's a pleasure to meet you misty, just call me kauru, Kay" I smiled as I said this. She took my hand
"Y-yeah, nice to meet you" she seemed to blush slightly, but I didn't pay much attention.
"Anyway misty-chan. why do you have an original 2500 model ion drive, when theirs much more powerful models out there?"
"Its coz it's the most reliable. Plus this one is the original of the originals. The first one, therefore I think the best"� she replied with a smile
"Ill take that as a compliment, but you do know, this was actually the first one I actually revealed, its not the actual original, the original was, smaller, less powerful, and was made in my bedroom, in England" as I finished her head dropped.
"I guess they gave me the wrong info huh"
"No, this is 'the' original, just not the first of its kind. Although, I think it needs some TLC, don't you?"
She looked at me
"Uh, huh. I guess so"
"Tell ya what, ill help ya, fix her up, then ill show ya how to upgrade it properly. Trust me. When were finished it'll be as good as, if not better than, the newest one on the market"
Her face lit up
"Really, YAAY!"


And so started the friendship of the alien mechanic girl, and the human general that has several secrets still to reveal. So look out for the next chapter.

~Chapter 3: lost in the sea of memories~

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Saturday, June 16, 2007

Initial Ideas - Misty | Hosted By theOtaku.com.

an image of misty from the second chapter of my story. hope u like
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Monday, June 4, 2007

Starfleet Earth - chapter one - end of earth
CHAPTER ONE> THE END OF EARTH!

The cryo-sleep capsule hissed as its doors opened "ok, its all ready sir, you can get in now" the tech-chief said as I walked towards the capsule.
"Thank you chief. Is it set for the correct sleep period?" I asked
"Yes, it�s all ready. When you get in it�ll be a bit cold but that�s normal, try to relax though. Ill start the cold-sleep systems as soon as you�re inside" he replied.
I climbed into the capsule, at the same time as my partner, who was entering a capsule across the room, directly in my view. She smiled and closed her eyes as the system put her in cryo-sleep. We weren�t allowed to wear anything due to the risk of freezer burn when we awoke from sleep.
�Engage the cry-sleep systems chief� I ordered as I closed my eyes.

�Open that cryo-capsule!� I heard as I stirred from cryo-sleep �hurry� it was a female voice,
The doors opened and I clambered out, and fell to the ground, I was numb all over, but feeling soon came back. I felt someone cover me with a blanket, �come, we have to get out of here�
My vision was slightly blurry, but I managed to see the capsule my partner was in, she was still in cold sleep. I ran up to the capsule and pressed against it
�I won�t go without her� I shouted
�We have to go, NOW!� the woman�s voice resonated through my mind.
�I said, im not leaving without her, and that�s final� I yelled back
�Fine! Jake, Kurt, get her out of there, and step on it� she ordered
�Yes maam� the two said in tandem
The two ran over, and started the revival system.
It wasn�t long till they had her out of the capsule. I held her and covered her with a blanket. �Don�t worry, I got ya�
�K-kauru? Is that you?� she mumbled
�Yeah, it�s me, kauru�
I helped her up, and walked her to the woman
�Im done lets go� I said
��bout time, we�re off schedule �coz of you� she whined �ok, Jake, you�ve got point, lets move. Follow me� she said
I followed her, helping hina walk, as she still didn�t have all feeling in her legs. We left the cryo-labs facility and walked towards a parked APC that was waiting for us �ok everyone onboard� we did as she said and boarded the vehicle, so did the others. �Ok, now that everyone�s here, LETS MOVE OUT!� she ordered
�Lieutenant is the ikazu ready?� she asked the one in the passenger seat.
�Yeah, she�s all ready to launch as soon as were onboard�
�And what�s the time like?�
�We�ve got around 45 minuets till the core goes critical, we�ve got to get off this rock, before that�
�Thanks�� she turned and looked at us �there�s clothes in the box behind you, I suggest you put them on, I mean, you don�t want to walk around naked all day do you?�
I opened the box and pulled out two armored G suits �so, who exactly are you people?� I asked
�We�re the pacific fleets last, the crew of the ikazu, our ship. Im, matsumoto kiriko, and you are?�
�Im kaloki kauru, 2010�s general of the G.O.S.D, or Global Organization of Security and Defense, and this beautiful girl, is, or was, my second lieutenant, himiwari hinata�

Kirikos face looked surprised
�They said you were important, but not that important. That means you�re my commanding officer!�
�Oh? Really�

�We�re at the ikazu, and we�ve got around 10 minuets till the planetary core goes critical� the driver shouted as we drove up the boarding ramp
�LAUNCH THE IKAZU! NOW!� kiriko hollered into a communicator. The entire place shook, as the ikazu blasted its way towards the sky, it should have felt as though I weighed a tonne, but I guess the inertial dampeners stopped that feeling.
I felt the shaking stop; so I figured we had left the planet. Kiriko led me and hina, to the main bridge.
�Ok, people, report, what�s the situation on the planet?� she asked
�Welcome back captain, we�re out of the blast range, systems all green. Unfortunately, the planets just gone critical, see for your self� one of the deck crew replied. The main screen flickered, and showed the planet, its surface turned blood red and cracks of light burst from the surface, a few seconds passed, then BOOM! The planet exploded, fragments flew everywhere, and a shockwave wracked the ship.
The captain was saluting the planet, and a tear rolled down her cheek. �Earth, gone in an instant! How can this have happened?!� I cried
The captain looked to us, and motioned for us to follow. We followed her to what seemed to be a meeting room.
�Please take a seat� she said as she sat at the opposite end of the table. �It started around a month ago, earths temperature dropped, considerably, and then shot back up, in an instant. Scientists in New York, said that, because of this phenomenon, earth had become unstable, this was proved later with 3 super volcanoes erupting one at the south pole, one in the Himalayas and one in northern Europe. The population of earth, was told to evacuate, to space, this was possible, thanks to the ion fusion drive created by the G.O.S.D. this took till yesterday to complete, then we were ordered to retrieve someone important, from the western district Cryo-labs, you. We didn�t know about any others that were there. And that�s around about it. We have orders to rendezvous with the main fleet; at space colony 35 there you will be briefed on the more specifics.



this is only chapter one, if you want to read more, please tell me, and if you want, you can come up with characters to be added in the next chapter (im having trouble with names) theres a total of six spaces for characters (one character per person please!!!) the title for this story, is as of yet, still in progress. starfleet earth, is as of yet, not the title, just a concept.
title, and names in this chapter, belong soely to jakecottier(c) as of 06/01/2007.

~jake cottier/kaloki kauru
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Monday, May 28, 2007

ok. so i was going to the cinema with my friends, and we get jumped by a load of bastards who cant understand why people are differant from them. why? its just so fuckin annoying. the was me, my friend james, and zoe. and zoe is the one worst off. i just hope that these people who attacked us are put whare they belong, IN FUCKIN PRISON for indiscriminate assault.

Currently Listening :
Phobia
By Breaking Benjamin
Release date: By 08 August, 2006
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Friday, May 25, 2007

ok sorry for the wait, but after thaught, ive decided to scrap the story i started before. i decided this a few weeks ago, and since then have been writing a new story. its about a young general of security, kaloki kauru, who was frozen, along with his second in command, himiwari hinata, in the year 4010. they were supposed to be frozen for 10000 years, but a cataclysmic event forces them to be awakened, 8500 too early, by the crew of the last ship leaving earth. when kauru, awakens, he forces them to awaken hinata as well, when they all finally arrive at the ship, the ikazu, it launches just after theyve boarded, blasting its way into space and beyond. thus begins kauru's adventures.


this is just the prologue, i will post the first chapter if u want to see it all.

~hazourdousspike/kaloki kauru
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