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Wednesday, May 5, 2004


Poems!
Okay here are some of my most recent poems. I'm going to do them in chronological order starting with my Holocaust poem. I can't remeber the date on this one. And I couldnt think up a title. Which means suggestiona are welcome.

The screams
The pain
The horrors that were commited

Burned and gased
Like little mice
Straved and loathed

Some survived
And some did not
Even more begged for the bittersweet release

Auschwitz with its camp
Amsterdam,
And Mauthausen

Desolation
And Broken Glass
Burnt Offering among many things

In Nineteen-Forty-Five
The leader of the Death Angels
Decided not to stay alive

The screams have faded
The damage done
The ashes have blown away

This one is about James mainly. I wrote it about a week after all that shit went down. It is really part of a triolgy but this is my favorite one. It has a lot of symbolism in it only James, Charles, and I would get. But it's still good.

Smolder my Mind
3/29/04

I was only happy when it rained,
But then you took that away,
And left the scar on my mind.
It'll last till the end of time.

Now tell me baby,...

Are you happy when it rains?
Are you proud of my scar?
Of what you've done to my mind,
And the damage you've done?

Did I leave my mark?
Did it hurt when I branded you?
Did my fire scorch your mind?
Is the smoke in your eyes?

Just pull your hood up and turn away,
It'll all be okay.
Just keep saying that.
Four more years and you are mine.
Cos then I can get you outta my mind.

I'll scratch and claw,
Twist and bend...
I'm locked in my white room,
and the walls are closin' in.

4 more years can't come in time,
Gotta get you outta my mind.
Cause baby all infatuation dies.

This next one I did yesterday. It really didn't start out as a poem. It all started as a doodle of a rose during science class and then became Bloody Roses. Once I finished it it kind of hit how I invision what it would be like if Hiei and Kurama really were a canon couple. And it's from Kurama's POV. It doesn't mention any names and could be just a stand alone orignal poem with no conataions to any anime. Unlike my normal style this rhymes. Which in away gives it a sense of whismsy.

Bloody Roses (an HxK shonen-ai poem)
5/4/04

Where roses die
is where my heart lies
The death they bring
Will make us kings

I'll plant my seed
And watch you bleed
I'll wrap you in my rose's thorns
Treat you like a lover scorned

All wraped up in my barbed wire
Soon I'll be your sire
Just wait and see
You'll soon belong to me

This next one I did today. And is a rewrite of a poem by the same name I did back last year. I just like it for some odd reason. Ditto on the rhyming thing.

Wisper to a SCREAM (revisited)
5/5/04

Wisper to a scream
Silent as a dream
Can't you see
Because of all the things you've done to me

Fuck this shit
I'm not your pet
All the tears I've cried
With them my face is wet

In the end you'll get yours
And I'll get mine
Only time will tell
When I'll follow you to Hell

And now for yet another one I wrote today. It's the longest of my now called "Whimsy Poems" My friend who read all three thought that this one was the best.

Mirror, ,rorriM
5/5/04

Mirror, Mirror on the wall
Who's the most fucked up of us all?
"You are. You who's all by herself
Her heart upon her shelf."

The noise in my head begins to pound
I throw the mirror to the ground
There it lies in shatters
Next to my lifes last tatters

Possibly I'm insane
Maybe only lies remain
But don't mirrors only show the truth?
By now that's probably moot

In my hand rests a shard
Can it really be that hard?
I press the shard to my wrist
Anticipation for that bittersweet kiss

I bathe in a crimson rain
Away flits my pain
Have I really bled
Or is it all in my head?

And one last poem that is out of order but it's sort little thing.

Someday My Rose

My black rose will return to me
Then the world will be right
The blind will see,
and the light will be night
What a wonderous world it will be,
I'll protect it with all my might

I guess that's it. I might do a real update later but I hope this tides you over.

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