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Tuesday, January 18, 2005


   Here's the rest...


Here's the rest of the story, as you can see, this is all I have done so far...It obviously is incomplete, I usually don't write in this genre, so I'm having some writers block i would love it if you guys could help me out...

I ducked to the side, just as she fired, and sweeped her legs out from under her. I watched her fall slowly to the ground. As soon as she fell, she flipped onto her feet and continued to try and shoot me. It was easy to dodge such slow bullets, but she didn't see the danger in making me do so. I kept drawing closer and closer to her with every shot, until I had her backed into a corner. It was was then I took control of the fight and brought her to her knees. She was about to try and fire at me one last time while I was at point blank rage, but she never got the chance.
"I'll try to make your death as quick and painless as possible but I can't garuntee anything." I said as I watched her expression change from struggle and utter defeat to uncontrolable fear. It was then I slid my dagger out of my sleeve and in one quick jab, ended her life. Or that was the plan anyway, as I was about to kill the girl I realised I couldnt because she reminded me so much of myself at one time. So as I stabbed her, I made sure only to make the gouge deep enough to make her pass out from not only blood loss, but also fear. She may have been strong pysically, but psychologically, she was nothing, just stubborn...
I was walking by the room that had become hers while she was unconcious when I heard her wake with a start.
"What..." She was finally begining to realize what happened, when she saw me leaning in the doorway.
"You...How dare you mock me! You should have ended my life when you had the chance...Why do you play such games!?" The poor girl screamed in an angry rage. She had been unconcious for 4 days, and was still very weak. She then, once again lost conciousness, and was unaware of the world for another 2 days...
The next time she awoke I was sitting beside her bed reading. "So, you're awake. I do hope you're feeling better, I have some questions for you." I said calmly not looking up from my book.

"H-how dare you!" She began screaming. "I will answer no questions from a scumbag like you! I would rather die..." I could see the hate she had for me seething in every single word.

Well, yea, like I said, I need some help...We have some serious writers block...



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