Thursday, November 9, 2006

Well, the day is almost over...
and I'll barely have time to type up the next chapter. But this post has actually importance (think I just put my other posts down <_<)...anway. The identity of that woman will be revealed...finally, had to say SOMETHING about Vengeance (yeah, that's gonna be the title methinks)
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Time for the obligatory lunch rant!
Man, so much to say, so little time to say it....HA, wishful thinking on my part, forty minutes left and I have half a bowl(?) of french toast cru-wait wait wait! I'm supposed to be dropping little teasers and whatnot about ch2 part 2. Well, I can safely say that the title (in the works) is so far Vengeance. So like last, feel free to ask questions or drop a line or something, because waiting sucks (yet I'm a procrastinator wtf)
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Chapter 3 may explain some things...
Alright, this week's been cut short, because of holiday, but hey, that means more free time to brainstorm on mah story (man it needs a title). Bad news, since our residential advisor is a...you know...the time limit on the computer at the dorm has been enforced, meaning I have less time to post ch3, IF I post it this weekend. I'll try the library, hopefully thier relics will be able MyO. ...I ranted and didn't even say what might be explained...there's always my lunch rant fully explain what MIGHT be explained, if that makes sense c.c
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How long has it been since she's awakened?
"N-nearly a year m'lord..."

And the seal?

"It's weakening, m'lord..."

You know what you must do.

"Yes, m'lord..."

--- Meanwhile ---

"I can't believe I let you drag me here." "C'mon Gabe, you'll love it, trust me!" "...You always say that Jess!" Gabriel and Jessica, best friends for as long as they've remembered, are busy attending the grand opening of a museum in their hometown. "Hey Jess, don't you even find it in the slightest bit that this place suddenly opened up? I mean-" "Have you been living under a rock or something? Everyone's been talking about it for weeks!" "Guess I'm not with the times..." "You act as if you're an old man, liven up."

Heh, guess I have been a little down in the dumps. I mean it's not like they'll never return or something. Nah, Gauld will be back, he never misses- "Hellooooo, do you want to or not?" "Huh?" His thoughts were cut off by Jessica, who seemed to be getting irritated by his spacing out. "You weren't thinking about your brother again, were you? It's not like he's dead or anything man, he'll be back. Now, I'll ask one more time, do you wanna see the Medieval exhibit?" Before he had a chance to answer, she already had him by the shoulder, dragging him onward.


"Interesting..." Gabriel said, without realizing that's exactly what Jessica wanted to hear. "Thought so." She said with a big grin. "You and your bro were always into this old stuff, dunno why." She said as she began to wander around the exhibits until something caught her eye. "Gabe! Check it out!" He came, and nearly jumped when he saw a huge suit shining armor, looking as if it's ready to smash anything in it's way...provided it had something to smash with. "Hey Gabe, your bro knew a bunch about ye olde junk, so I'm pretty sure you should know a little about this right? I mean look, on the chestplate, there's like an insignia or something." It seemed as if he did in fact know what it was, but couldn't quite say why he knew. As he stared into armor, he caught a glimpse of something skittering on the ceiling, and he turned, nearly knocking Jessica over. She looked at him as if he were crazy, and slowly decided it was time for them to leave. "Oook, I think it's time to leave, you're getting a little too excited. Besides, isn't tomorrow..." "Yeah, me and Gauld are gonna visit the folks." "Listen Gabe..." She was ready to try and comfort him, but decided against it. "...nevermind, if you need me..."

As they left the museum, they passed by a familiar woman, and without thought, Gabriel and Jessica called out to her. "Sylva...?" The woman didn't turn around. "Strange... " Gabriel said quietly as they continued. "...she looked JUST like her..." "Yeah, but her eyes...they...they were so..." They continued on, confused as to who that woman was. The woman came to stop, turned to see if they had gone.

"...I shall not let this oppurtunity go to waste, Sylva..." She uttered. "...For I, Ambrosia, will not fail my people this time..."

--- Elsewhere ---

He cannot be trusted...

"Of course, m'lord!"

Follow him, and if he-

"I will not hesistate, m'lord!"

Hmhmhm, if either of you fail...


~Chapter 2~
To be continued
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Unexpected delay
Not so unexpected as it was....yeah, unexpected, it WILL be done before lunch, and until then, ciao. (Bah, gotta go do Excel work for a change)
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Wednesday, November 8, 2006

   Ciao for now...
Hope ya'll enjoyed this chapter as much I did creating it. Seriously though, it just came to me, and like Katamari, it got bigger and stuff.
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   Lunch is over, chapter 2 confirmed for the part
Onion rings again, but its totally worth it. Yeah, got an idea of what chapter 2 is gonna about, but the title is still a coin toss. Can't decide...oh well, hope ya'll liked the first chapter. Hm...
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Chapter 2 in progress...
And so far...I need to write it down before I forget it >_< Well anyway, currently thinking of a title for this story, I'll think of something soon. But for now, it's almost lunch time, so I'll be back in like, an hour.
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   Decisions, decisions...
I'm trying to decide whether or not to kinda flesh out the story in some posts, or just let the story tell itself and let it get to you guys. Meh, I might just pull a Bleach and put out some awesome cliffhangers....eheh c_c
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"They say a crimson moon is a warning to those who tempt fate...
...or at least, that's what my grandparents always told me." Sylva said, as she, Gauld, and Sid enter the crypt of ancient ruler of a long forgotten civilization. "You realize that saying something like, knowing very well that we do isn't..." "Cool it Sid, she hasn't been in the...'excavating' business as long we have." No matter what they called it, they knew what they were. "Listen Gauld, I know very well what it is you do, and I'm still by your side, aren't I? I don't care what it is you do, as long as you-" "We're here..." Sid interrupted as they approached one of many chambers.

--- After what seemed like hours had passed ---

"We're so close...I can feel it!" "S...s...slow dooown! We don't know what's-" "Quiet Sylva! We have a knack for this sorta thing, if he says he feels it, then we MUST be close!" She looked back at Sid with a stern look, finally ready to stand up to him, when he said one last thing before everything fell apart. "You know, he didn't want you come in the first place, what with you being a burden to us BOTH ever since we've met." With that said, she came to a complete stop, nearly tripping in the process, and did her best to hold her tears. It's true, I have been a burden, ever since the first time I joined them, I've held them back. I...I knew Gauld was always dissapointed in the fact that ever since I came into his life, I've ruined every expedition we've been on...Sid's right. Gauld looked back to see that Sylva had come to complete stop, on the ground, as if she were in pain. He attempted to stop himself and go back for her, "Sylva!" But Sid, more frustrated than ever, forced him into the chamber. Somehow, they triggered something nearby, and the chamber doors were sealed, leaving Sylva to herself, alone in the abandoned corridor.

That's right, he DOES care, he'd never say anything like that. He... As she slowly began to compose herself, her newfound hope soon turned to rage. SID! If anything's happened to Gauld I swear I'll- She quickly sprung to her feet and tried her best to reopen the door. After several tries, the door seemed to open itself, and to her horror... "Hmhmhmhm...finally, all these years of searching, I've found it, the Ambrosia's Crest! No thanks to that sap Gauld or that dead weight Sylva. Now I can-" He was interrupted by an ear piercing shriek. "What have you have done you heartless bastard! Why'd you do this, where's Gauld!?" "Terribly sorry about what had happened to him," Sid said grinning mailicously, "after we got in here, we had a little disagreement about leaving you behind. Needless to say I didn't wanna lose this argument. Hmhmhmhm..." As her eyes scanned the room she saw Gauld, or what was left of him, near the coffin of the ruler of this pyramid. "...Turns out this is no mere tomb or crypt, this is merely one of many pyramids that Ambrosia, the ruler of this vast land, had control. Pity, soon you two will share the same fate." "What are you..." "You and Gauld and shall soon be reunited in Hell!"

---After the battle---

What have I done...I let Gauld down...I killed Sid. This isn't who I am, I'm no mere graverobber, I...No, I'm not who I was anymore...nothing can change this...except...

As she lie there, with her final breath, she utters one final wish, to whom she was about to defile.

"Please...forgive us, it was the only way we...could..." And with that, she stopped, with Ambrosia's Crest still in grasp, attempting to put it in it's rightful place.

--- Outside the pyramid ---

We see a single person, several miles away from the pyramid, their eyes focused on it, as if they're trying remembering something. It is a woman, but not with the eyes of a troubled, yet hopeful soul, soothed only by a single person...but the cold eyes of an ancient ruler, preparing to venture out into an unfamiliar world...


~End Sylva-Enter Ambrosia~
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