Saturday, March 31, 2007

   A story hopefully on going... ^^
well my day is ok so far, except waking up earily and my eyes hurting, then me having to go out in the sunlight and blind my blurry (from sleeping) vison... I had to get my older sis and wake her up... it sucked but oh, well... ^^

well last night i had fun, I was really into writing a story and it's kinda inspired by sickofcrying... she doesn't know yet!!! ^^ I talked to driffter and shishou on my chat box and am writing them in my story...
so far it's me (Kaisuri) I made the name up... and other characters who are not in the story quite yet...
it's not a fan fic, I'm not very fond of them but there still cool and I like them but it's an original story made by me... here is the first chapter and I hope you enjoy!!! ^^ and if you want to be in it let me know and I'll find a perfect spot and character for you... an enemy, village person, or friend...

Surprized furry

*Kaboom*
Kaisuri ducks praying for god to protect her as sounds of battle approaches *gets up and yells* what the hell was that!!! [kaboom the door flies open and a fist hits Kaisuri in face] *yells* OUCH!!! Dammit, that fucking hurt!!!
I am Langmai, and I'm your enemy... [Kaisuri steps back and then walks away rubbing her face]

*swish swish*

[dangers from Langmai's belt fling out swishing through the moon lit night headed towards Kaisuri]
*swush* [Kaisuri pulls out her trusty sword and *clang clang* the daggers reflect off of Kaisuri's sword and plummet to the ground]
[Kaisuri chuckles] *yells* you missed me you harlot of a beast... do you actually believe a mere dagger and a fist in the face can bring me down!!! *laughs*
[anger washes over Langmai] *yells* that was a practice throw, you just wait and try to dodge the next ones...
*Kaisuri scoffs at her* Ha-ha, yeah right, your as slow as a newborn and as weak as an elderly!!!
*Langmai screams wildly* [Langmai rush towards Kaisuri with two warrior blades that are soaked with dried blood on them]
[Kaisuri looks at the dry blood on the blades] hmmm... Eh... NOOOooo!!! what kind of sick person are you!!! [points at Langmai] I could get HIV or AIDS from those!!! [points at her blades] every worthy and wise warrior knows to wipe and clean their blades after every battle!!! [Kaisuri turns her back on Langmai and falls to her knees]
sensei, to be ashamed is to feel pity, should I take pity upon my enemy, what should I do, should I fight thy enemy or pity them and walk away? [Kaisuri talks to-self while looks out into the sky as Langmai looks at her as if she's lost her damn mind]
ahem, I'm still here you know!!! *Langmai yells at Kaisuri*
ohhh, go away... *waves Langmai away as if she's a pest bothering her*
-WHAT- [Langmai blinks rapidly and is furthermore pissed off] that's it!!!
[Langmai rushes at Kaisuri and lifts her blade to strike her down with one swift blow at her back]


to be continue!!!

^^ Sorry but I must cut if off right there... I didn't want it to be to long for you... ^^ and it's a cliff hanger of a ending to the first half of the chapter!!! ^^ so you guys would want to know and come back eager for the second half!!! ^^ sorry guys, my sis convinced me to do it!!! she's a real pest, believe me... [chuckles]
how did you like it?
how's your day so far?
have a great day/night!!! L8ter...

qoute by hollow:In the mist of darkness there's always hope ready to guild and lead you out!!!

~*hollow*

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