Sunday, April 1, 2007

   The second half of my story...
[Hollow eyes el narrator speaking] ahem... where were we........... ohhh, yes!!! Kaisuri was seeking guidance from her sensei's spirit and Langmai was just about to strike down Kaisuri from the rear and backside... a dishonorable and low tactic attacking move... but none-the-less, her most used and favored attack... lets see what happens...

*cling...*

*soft irritated ahhh... comes out of Langmai* [Kaisuri in lighting speed and agility brought up her sword and blocked Langmai's attack] it seems you need lessons in manners, in honor and fighting!!! [Kaisuri swiftly got up and stands tall in a stance of readiness with the look of hate and anger in her expression]
first lesson: never under estimate your opponent and believe that they are weaker or less aggressive or worthy of battling in meager size or looks...
[Langmai turns but uses that as a disadvantage as Kaisuri lowers her guard, to grab her flying daggers to throw at her]

*swish swish*

[the daggers fly in the air and as Kaisuri's blade deflects them from hitting her they split apart and one strikes her on the shoulder cutting and breaking through flesh and skin releasing the flow of freshly new blood]

*a pain filled grunt seeps past Kaisuri's lips* ahhh... you damn cheat!!! I shouldn't have expected less from you, then conniving trickery!!! I had at least though you'd fight with honor and grace, but it seems [Kaisuri stands right up from her crouch position, she was in from ducking and dodging the daggers] *exhales with a hit a pain* I've been terribly mistaken!!!
[exhales as she prepares for combat in a three step movement using strength methods and agility]

*swing swing*

[Kaisuri jump backs and takes out her sword to engage in battle...] Langmai, I just have one question for you!!! [Langmai ignores Kaisuri and swirls in the air spinning towards Kaisuri]
mm, hmm.. *grins* so that's how it's going to be... then lets not waste time!!! [Kaisuri steps back, throws off her robe jacket and grabs a bamboo stick off the ground... before Langmai notices, Kaisuri swiftly dodged her attack and whacks her twice with the bamboo stick... one dislocating one off Langmai's fingers out of place and the other brought her plummeting down from the air] now then... [Kaisuri walks over and places her foot over Langmais' chest] you'll answer my question!!! and believe me Langmai, I have my ways of making you talk... even if it takes all night!!! you WILL, talk!!! [the look in Kaisuri's eyes and seriousness of them frightened Langmai] ok... I'll answer anything! [Kaisuri nodded her head and stepped off of Langmai in order to help her up, and that was her mistake] *Langmai yells* For Henrii!!! [Langmai took advantage of that moment and knocked Kaisuri off her feet and plunged a knife into her chest] ahhh, you... you... thats right kaisuri! I'm your enemy and forever will be!!! nothing can or will change that!!! but why? I haven't done anything to you!!! it's not what you didn't or haven't done, it's what you will do!!! what?!? [Langmai twists the blade of the knife in Kaisuri to conceal the wound so she would bleed internally] ahhhhh!!!! [Kaisuri grunts and moans in pain] there, now you'll be suffering and dieing at the same time!!! Hahahahaha!!! [langmai smiles and laughs in triumphant in her victory]

*swing*

*pain filled ahhh, passes her lips along with her surprised yet a shocked expression as she falls to the ground with a thud* next time you best kill you enemy then celebrating the down fall of them before their actually dead... [Kaisuri rises slowly and in pain] now tell me, why have you attacked me and want me dead so badly and who's this Henrii?!? *coughs up blood and winces in pain* I'd rather die with that then tell you!!! [Kaisuri rises her sword in a death take position]
*sorely and painfully says it* do it, end my agony and pain, take my life and end it as it was hatedly brought into the world... so will it be taken out of it!!! *smiles and closes eyes* [Kaisuri blinks and stops dead in her traces, she couldn't do it... can't] please, just tell me why? and I'll end it all... [Langmai opens her eyes with tears in them] go, let me die in peace... maybe I'll be, in the afterlife instead of in the living, finally at peace... *a tear glimmers down her cheek with the moonlight portraying it, and causing Kaisuri to bend down and hold her hand* [her wound reopened and bleed even more for doing that but she didn't care, as long as she did something for once right] come on... [kaisuri out of care and compassion lifted up Langmai and began carrying her, the town was more then a mile away and she believed she could make it] hang on! [langmai in disbelief and in pain couldn't believe what was happening, why would she do this... after she so angerly attacked her and could have killed her, why is she repaying her with kindness and care... she was never shown this kind of care in her life and if she died now, would be happy for being shown it] Kaisuri, let me down... NO, we're almost there and your wound won't let up if we do so... Kaisuri, I'm at peace and will tell you what you so seek and want... [that didn't phase Kaisuri] we can make it! hold on langmai! put me down Kaisuri, I'm ready to let go and move on in the after life... are you deaf Langmai, you can make it and we can then talk... [langmai touched Kaisuri on the shoulder and looked up at her] you've done all you can, it's time that I did what I can for you... [ that, that made her want to forget what she said and do nothing more then to move forward but she slowly put her down] what can I do... I-I... you can still make it, we can make it... *Kaisuri said with a seriousness that made Langmai wish she could make it and wish they would have met in different situations and terms* you've done all you could Kaisuri, and that's good enough for me... *Langmai smiles and her eyes sparkle* well that's not good enough for me! *Kaisuri lifts her up and moves forwards with a desperation and fear* [they made it to the village and along the way Langmai told her everything, but Kaisuri made it there alone.. Langmai died shortly after reaching the village] *Kaisuri yells* I'm sorry!!! [as she fell to her knees... all she wanted was vengeance for Langmai and no one can even possibly know what it's like... what it's like to feel like the bad person, the hated person, the person who stole a life from a person who was just as pain filled and needed something true and good... a person who was behind the eyes of an enemy she just never knew] Ma'am, your companion is ready for burial... [Kaisuri snapped back into the now, the present] Yes... I'll be there in a minute... [the cherry blossoms of the tree's were being blown of the tree's as the wind blew... like a dance they blew here and there... the wind of change, the wind of a person running and going along with it... a person Kaisuri never knew but would never forget...] Langmai... rest in peace!!! [Kaisuri says softly and with emotions as tears threaten to rise and begin in her eyes... she pushes them away and says a pray for her spirit to make it safely on the other side] I'll get you Henrii, you can count on it... [the wind blows and washes over Kaisuri and dances around her moving her long hair in and out of her face with cherry blossoms along with it]

end of first chapter...

sorry it was so long, I hope you enjoyed it though!!! ^^
last night my stomach hurt so badly and I just listened to rise aganist (it's the new CD and I love it) and fel in and out of sleep... then around 10 i watched from dust til dawn a good movie, and for you who haven't seen it its an old movie probably still in vhs and a vampire movie... I love sci-fi and vampire movies!!! ^^ I finally then read my book around 1 to 2 and went to bed... I'm a night owl!!! ^^
today so far is going good, I'm babsitting and all but so far it's going ok!!!

so how did you like my second half?
how's your day going?
and april fools... i was thinking about lying and saying I cut my finger off somehow and say april fools but that's a little unbelieveible and dumb... ^^ well have a great day/night and l8terz...

~*hollow*
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