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Wednesday, January 24, 2007


Story for english.
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Well, I said I'd post it sometime so, here it is! *NOTE: Ethan is a crazy !@!#$#$. Try not to get too attached.*

I woke up in my Serta soaked in urine and sweat. Yet another night terror I had barely escaped. I could still feel that hideous doctor’s cold blade mutilating my abdomen while I was wide awake and un-drugged. I ran straight down the stairs and into the washroom to check my pale and disoriented face for the blood that had splattered during my nightmare. I saw bright red, oozing stains drenching my face and a long, dark crevice in my stomach where his blade had been. Tears ran down my horrified expression. I yelled for my wife Victoria as the blood began to drip. She didn’t listen. I had always wondered how deep a sleeper she was rather than if she escaped her room to sleep with my best friend that night (as she had done on our fifth anniversary). I didn’t bother to go check on her since there had always been a rift between us since we married. That and I didn’t want her to yell at me or see her without her makeup on. Anyways, I called the doctor though I didn’t really expect her to answer considering she had given up on me when- she answered. I had told her someone from my dream realm had come for me again having hacked me in my sleep. She took a long pause “Ethan, I think you’re going insane.”
“What? How could this be? I was totally sane. Is it hot in here or what?” I found myself thinking. Of course I would never reply this way, she would start to think I was really insane and call my mother, father, and my cousin Norbert. I actually replied with, “You know what that pill does to me, Nora. I can’t help these things you know.”
“I don’t know if you’re either talkin’ ‘bout your vitamins or what you take for your ADD, boy!”
“Is there any chance you could help me, Nora? I’m really tired and confused. And I stammer. Can’t you sense it?”
“I’m sorry but, I’m not so sure I can help you any more.”
“But, Nora I trusted you! I’m relying on you! You’re the only person I’ve been able to talk to since the anniversary!”
“……I’m sorry I can’t help you, Ethan.”
I replied subtlely. “I’m a very lonely man, Nora.”
“I’m calling the men in the white coats, Ethan. Come quietly please.”
“I can’t do that, Nora. You know me.”
“Heh, heh. You’re a trooper. I enjoyed being your counselor.”
“……..good-bye, Nora.”
She hung up. The blood was gone. The tears were gone. The ale and horrified expression on my face……gone. I then gathered what clothes I had washed the night before. I put on my leather hat and matching trench coat. I’m a man on the run now. One lone writer defying all odds! I drove my Hummer at mach 5 speed to fight the adrenaline and escape them. I had felt the urge to drive myself off the bridge I was approaching. Good-bye, world, good-bye everything. Good-bye Nora, the one I love. Good-bye Victoria, the one I despise. My mind was on all of those things I wasn’t focused on the road. Before I knew it I was hit. I was rammed by the sharp bodied convertible behind me. I wasn’t focused and I paid for which. They had told me I had passed out sometime after. They had told me I was crazy. They had told me I was on a road to hell since I started. Well, I say:crew them!!!!!!! I will some day be their God and have them caged! Those damned men in the white coats you may have restrained me once but, now that I shall escape I shall come for you. You better watch out because here I come! Oh, you! Yes, you! The one who I slipped this to. Yes, yes! Come here, boy! Would you you mind letting me out of this strait jacket? Yes, I wrote this with my toes now please, get me out of here will you?!!!!!!!! It's so freaking miserable!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


1. Did you like my story?
2. If so should I draw some opf the characters?
3. Do you think Ethan has the right to be crazy?
4. Who does Ethan remind you of?

Btw, I was really happy yesterday because, I submitted some e-cards out of boredom and both of them got featured! Yay!

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