Tuesday, December 28, 2004

The Shinobi
hello again,

This is my fan fic ive been trying to work on.I wasnt gifted with writing so its kinda hard for me.If you like it great!If you dont, i dont give a crap so dont e-mail me about it!It takes place in ancient
Japan.

(thoughts) ~~~~~~~~~ = scene change

chapter 1- The assignment

Feore arose from his deep sleep
to the sun peeking over the horizan.
Strange dreams had been bothering him lately.He kept dreaming of a strange girl with sad green eyes.
(stop it! your meeting the shogun today for your first assignment!
dont screw it up!!!)He sighed and got out of bed to do his warm ups.
Feore had been training since he was very young to be a Shinobi.An
extremely dangerous and skilled assasin who worked personally for the Shogun.(A/N-i dont know if this is true but in my story it is)He was 16 now,and his training was almost complete. Muscles rippled over his young body as he jogged around the countryside.His peircing blue eyes taking in everything.The strange girl wandered into his mind again.Who was she?and why did she look so sad?Feore felt like he knew her somehow but couldnt place it.He mentally slapped himself.Today he had to concentrate.His Sensai was counting on him.The Shogun had declared him ready for his first assignment.Feore shivered with excitement.He wondered what he would have to do.He smiled to himself
and finished his jog.It was starting to rain softly.To him it was a sign of good luck.(today is going to be a great day)or so he thought..
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Jade opened her green eyes to her
kitten Shadow lying on her chest sleeping.He opened one amber eye
and yawned in her face.Giggling softly she rose from her bed and quickly dressed in commeners clothes.Quietly she began to sneek out her window.She made sure to glare at the white makeup on her dresser.That stuff was horrible and she hated wearing it.Her rich father was snoring in the next room loudly and his samurais were sleeping at their posts.(good.....no ones going to stop me from going to the city today.)Jade was forbidden to go to the city without proper protection and supervision.Her father had heared rumors of a an angry war lord who was out to ruin the family.But did that stop her?no way.She quickly sneaked twords the stables using the shadows to her advantage."Raylana?here girl"
she called quietly into the morning fog.A pure black horse nickered softly and trotted to her."Good girl" Swiftly she hopped onto Raylana's elegant back and rode away
into the fog twords Edo.
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im going to stop here.i know introductions suck but it will get better i promise.i will update soon if i can.*salutes at computer screen* PLEASE COMMENT.





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