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Thursday, December 27, 2007

which one
i need u guys to tell me which title sounds better with this poem.
#1 "Death's Sweet Breath"
#2 "Death's Sweet Kiss"

ok heres the poem

"I walk through shadows.
Alone and cold.
Some stones are new.
Though some are old.

I found the one.
That I serched for.
Alone it lay.
In the core.

I looked down.
At the grave.
Then looked up.
As fell my gaze.

Upon a tree.
Alone it stood.
Taller than most.
Because it could.

It stood there.
And grew so tall.
Right on the hill.
About to fall.


I looked back down.
At the grass.
That glistened bright.
Cause Death had passed.

A shiver crawled.
Up my spine.
As I thought.
That in time.

Death would come.
For me too.
And bring me here.
Make people blue.

But as for now.
I watched the light.
Off the ground.
What a sight.

For Death's sweet breath.
Had kissed the graves.
The grass now showed.
His icy gaze.

For Death's sweet lips.
Had kissed again.
his icy breath.
Had took a friend."

so wat title # 1 or 2
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