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Monday, October 11, 2004


   Chapter One of my new fic!
Here's the moment you've all been waiting for, *drumroll* Chapter One of "Yoh Asakura: Kidnapped by Hao'! Enjoy!

"Yoh Asakura: Kidnapped by Hao"
by Allison Erb

"Are the girls & Morty still asleep?" Yoh asked. "Yeah, I just checked." Horo Horo replied. It was early in the morning, but Yoh, Horo Horo, Len, Lyserg, and Rio were going out to train. "remind me why we're not telling the girls thatwe're going to train?" Lyserg asked. "Well, because if we do, Anna will try to make it worse." Yoh told him. "Oh yeah." Lyserg said. Then, they all left the house.

Yoh led the gang to the middle of the nearby forest. "Well, this is where we're going to train." Yoh told them. "This is a good place." Len said. Then, they heard something move in the bushes. "What was that?" Rio asked. "It was probably just a squirrel." Horo Horo said. At that moment, Hao jumped out of the bushes.

"What do you want, Hao?" Yoh asked his twin. "I just came to have fun." Hao replied. He then attacked each of them with the Spirit of Fire. They got hit so hard, it knocked them out. "Master Yoh, please wake up!" Amidamaru said. "It's no use, samurai. He's knocked out." Hao said, walking over to Yoh. He picked up his limp twin brother and threw him over his shoulder, then he disappeared.

Well, what do you think?! Please review. Sorry it's so short. I'll try & make the next one longer. See ya!

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