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Friday, January 20, 2006
The Intro.... (my naruto fanfiction)
just to get this moving a little bit, i'm going to put in the intro of my fanfiction in. (remember this is only a draft so it is not quite complete, but i would like some help and i think if you guys get some info, then you can start! (even though i still need that info on naruto...(see below)) but anyways!
first you need to know that my charecter's name ir yeira(yay-la)! (very bad at pronutiation crap)
next is that her sensei's name is akima sensei!(like iruka sensei(academy sensei))
next is that this is 3 years after the actually series of naruto, so she is 15, so if sasuke and naruto! and sorry for all those people that kind of like sakura, but i am thinking of having her killed, because i don't like her, she would only get in the way, and naruto needs something to relate with me.
ok, next is that, yeira is from the village hidden in the clouds!(actual village)the bands have three circles on it one large one with a smaller one above it(connecting to it), and a small circle to the left of those.
next is that her only relative left is her brother, kokoro! her mom died at her brother's birth.(yeila was two) and her father was murdered by someone! i'm not telling you who! it would ruin the story!
if you havn't read it read the post below. i need help with that too! thank you!
now here's the intro...
Yeira wiped a tear as she passed her friends. She was leaving the village hidden in the clouds. It had been her home for all her life. She never wanted to leave so soon, but pressing times called for drastic measures. Her sensei was waiting for her at the gate, but she wiped all traces that she had been crying before approaching him. “So, you truly have decided to leave?” Akima sensei asked looking at her solemnly. “Yes, I really don’t want to go, but I at least have to know why.” She replied not looking him in the eyes. “Well, good luck. I hope this trip serves you well.” He stated placing a hand on Yeira’s shoulder. “Oh, sensei” she began to cry once more as she grabbed Akima sensei’s shirt as though she were a freighted child. At first, Akima sensei was shocked. He had never had Yeira show her emotions in front of him. But soon he regained his composer and wrapped his arms around her comfortingly. He allowed her to cry until she pulled away. He didn’t care that she had soiled his shirt, and then he bid her farewell placing a small box in her hand. Yeira wiped her face once more and left the village hidden in the clouds with only a pack on her back, an orange ninja band on her leg, and a small black box in her hand.
ok, it's a bit vauge, but that's the point! well tell me what you think! and cya all later!
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