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Monday, November 17, 2003


   Hellooo
Hello all. Guess what. Last night I saw FLCL for the first time. I loved it.

Anyway, I've decided to write a story. Now it's a manga too but I dont have a scanner so I cant show you the pictures. Well, here goes. Now, this is an original.



Chapter 1
It was raining hard and the world seemed to dissapear in the drops of water plumetting to the ground. Everything was dark except one small girl walking slowly through the rain. She stopped and looked down, into a puddle to see her small face and that horrible mark. Atleast, she thought it was horrible, all the other kids thought it was "cool".

"I hate it." she whispered to herself and walked again.

She walked slowly, looking down. A man, obviously in a hurry, knocked her into a puddle, not turning back.

"Thanks." she said to noone and stood up to see a dark figure standing in front of her. "Not in the mood." she turned to walk off.

"You may be in the mood for this, Kina Totogana."

Kina froze and turned to him. "How do you know me?"

"I dont know you, I know who you are." He stepped so she could see him.

(Handsome.) she thought.(Wait, what am I saying. He's a guy, all guy's are the same.) "How do you know who I am?"

He looked at her. (Beautiful. Just like Kini.)

"Hmm? How?"

He stepped up to her and held her shoulders, "That mark."

"What about it?" she eyed him suspicously.

"It-" before he could finish a huge creature crashed through the sidewalk. "No!" the mystery man yelled in surprise. "How?!"

The creature was huge. It looked like a cross between a goat and a snake. (What is that?!) Kina thought frantically.

"You must wake up!" the man yelled.

"Wake up?!"

"You're asleep," he took out a blade, "Wake up!" he stabbed her then all was black.



So, the whole, goat-snake thing is kinda weird but who cares, right?


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