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Tuesday, June 6, 2006


Rest of Chapter 1:
Here is the rest I cant wait til tomorrow. So here it goes. I hope you like it I will post more later.

I took the desk in the back the next day in homeroom. The teacher started taking role, Samantha Abbot, ... then a couple of names later my name was called. Being that the first letter of my name is near the beginning of the alphabet. When my name was called instead of the usual, "Here.", I just raised my hand. Refusing to interact by speaking. After I put my hand down, I turned to look out the window. Noticing how warm it looked outside, and how it was so beautiful that I wished I was outside. Outside where the usual spot was, where I normally spent my free time at school.

The sky was a light blue, with very little clouds. And the clouds that were there seemed to take a shape. (oh, look a star!) Under that "star" was a tree. Now, the school doesn't have many trees. Especially in the food court area. In the food court area ther are about two. What I love most about these trees is the way they look. The trees have cracks that run down to the trunk, that remind me of rivers. The trees have an old look about them. A grey look. Like they have been there for centuries and could tell many stories if they could speak. Like how so and so broke up. Or remember when she decided that she was going to climb me and nearly fell but that one young man broke her fall? Good times, Good times. Oh lord, I must be nuts! I am sitting here thinking about what trees would say if they could talk.
I was quickly pulled away when I heard the opening of a door. Through the door walked a tall, skinny boy, with dark hair. There was something about him though, something mysterious. His eyes were the same dark brown color of his hair. And his bangs fell in his eyes. "I am sorry for being late." he suddenly spoke. The semi-plump teacher replied, "Just take a seat by... Jennifer." The boy walked slowly to the seat and hesitated, quickly glancing at me before sitting down.

Chapter one is really long and I am just now realizing that so I am sorry but i must break it up once more. Please tell me how I am doing. For those of you who are really interested I am trying to think of an easier way to get this to you. If you have any suggestions please let me know. Thanks. Jess

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