Like many of you guys, i´m also writing on a manga, actually i´m writing on three. Well, i thought i needed some featback from experts, and who better than me Otaku friends?! So, here´s the concept (so far, mind that), i´ve also written character bios and others things, but it would be too much to translate all that to english from danish, sorry. Does it sound original enough, is it understandable? Please, give me your opinions, and please be honest. If you should have questions, please comment it, and i´ll go to your site and explain it in a comment. Thank you. ^^
Btw. I´ve translated this from my danish, so it might sound a little wierd.
"Nightleasher Legacy
(Concept)
Everything is driven by oppositions, which makes "Order" and "Chaos" necessary. A Nightleasher is destinyed to represent Chaos, and the Dayleasher is Order. There is no god and have never been one. "Life" is a infinite mass of pure energy, called "The Origin" from which creatures´ spirits are being created, when they are to be awakened. When a creature dies, it´s spirit returns to The Origin. Basicly, The Origin is build on the four elements: Fire, Earth, Water and Wind, and being harnessed by Light and Darkness. Therefore, every person has an alignment to one of the elements and every family has a alignment to either Light or Darkness. Generally Darkness is agressive and Light is defensive. Light or Darkness is then blended into the creatures´ element, which makes the personality and fighting-style (Light and Darkness can both be used for either attack or defence, but have their prime in their seperated ways). Human-kind only use a very small percent of it´s potentiale, but certain persons can unleash their hidden potentials more than others, which in the eyes of others makes them "superhuman", although it should be very normal.
It is Order and Chaos´ destiny to fight each other, or people won´t learn, the world won´t evolve and little by little, time will slow down and eventually stand still, as being passive doesn´t create anything."
There is much more to it that doesn´t get explained here, but maybe i´ll write dat some other time. ^^ |