Tuesday, June 27, 2006

Is that seriously how it ends?!

God, i watched all of Elfen lied, boy is the ending lame, i mean i was lovin it up until i heard the last line of the last episode, and i thought "that ending seriously made no fuckin sense!"

okay, brief summary of everything i now disliked about Elfen Lied.

First, i still feel bad for Nana, i understand it sucks to be tortured at that institute, but does that mean you have to torture poor Nana? if you don't want to go back, rip off her head like usual. that scene still pissed me off.

i feel bad for Lucy's puppy. okay, being a girl who acts like an adult and has horns would tend to cause your childish peers to tease you. also the fact that adorable naked female Dosu's keep telling you that killing people feels good, and is all you were meant to do. so Lucy keeps running away from orphanages, and escaping from one she finds a puppy, who becomes her only friend. as she is being bullied by a bunch of kids a girl helps her out and becomes her second friend, but it turns out this girl was a spy, and after Lucy shows her her puppy, the girl brings it to the bullies who tell Lucy to beg for its life, when she refuses they punt the dog into a wall and beat it to death slowly with a flower vase. that is when Lucy first finds her vectors, and she kills all them.

okay, i had to watch Nana be slowly tortured because she loved her "papa," but these callous pricks who would murder a puppy, i miss their deaths. i'm sorry, but i wanted to see sadism on Lucy's part there, i wanted to see those pricks suffer. but this is the one time it wasn't violent enough.

So Lucy, running from the murder scene meets a young Kouta, and they become friends, yet even while they are playing the evil little Dosu's keep telling her to kill, yet she plays around with a falls in love with Kouta. and when he has to leave to meet his Cousin, she asks what gender it is, and he lies and says male. he lies for no apparent reason! she said she would go, you can't shelter her, if he did it because he knew lucy's feelings, how would she feel if she knew he lied?

well she catches captain idiot with his cousin, so she goes nuts and lets the evil Dosu's take over, saying "goodbye Kouta, i loved you..." then she kills a bunch of random people, even ones that tried to help her because they thought she was just a scared little girl.

so she follows Kouta onto his train, and tears his sister in half infront of his face, as his sisterm having seen it was Lucy who killed those people, desperatly pleades with him to run away, he says "i hate people like you!" and with that Lucy tears Kouta's sister in half.

Why the hell do that, he obviously chose Lucy over his sister, she then kills Koutas dad, when he asks why Kouta is screaming.

Kouta screams "why did you do that!? i thought we were friends!?"

lucy replies with a sadistic smile "We ARE friends, thats why you are still alive, now where's that other girl?"

i realize the only other friend who lied to her made her puppy get brutally murdered, but damn!

and seeing all this as Kouta;s memory returned, it was repressed because well, it kinda should be. it would have stayed that way if Lucy didn't have to kill dozens of soldiers on the bridge to protect him. she says once she's done she'll explain everything.

so she admits everything, and that she lived all this time, enduring the painful tests, the mental tirture, being hunted and hated, just so she could apologize and tell him she was, and is in love with him. and Kouta says "well you killed them all, so i will never forgive you. but Nyuu [Lucy's Chii like alter ego] and that little girl with horns, i loved them.

so with that Lucy open mouth kisses Kouta, and once she releases him, he returns the favor. Lucy then tells Nana to "go back and live a calm, peaceful, happy life with you're friends, have everything i never did." then Lucy goes off and seemling gets shot to death by the rest of the soldiers on the bridge. but at the end we see a lucy shaped silohette, he looks away and back and screen blacks out before we see if she's there.

Mariko is such a bad ass, dhe kills the only person who loved her because they weren't actually related. yet her actual father, who never once talked to her, she melts in the arms of. even though 1, horned people are supposed to mature faster, like lucy, and 2, are willing to kill their own parents. Mariko was by far the most fucked up, but was so easy to kill, her dad just picks her up, and has both of them blown up together.

plus Bando, my favorite character, fights Lucy off-screen, and loses badly, but she hurts him less this time, and then she leaves and we never hear from him again. WTF!!!!!!?

Why can't that resercher bath or change her undies?

if the director guy wants to make the whole world horned guys like him, why does he kill so many horned children? or use them like pawns, and waste them?

and how can half the babies be born be horned if only pure breeds can actually have fertile children, and we kill all the horned ones anyway? i mean lucy and wierd director guy make it sound inevitable, but if we just kill the creepy babies, and develope gene theropy for the horned virus [hence why the arms are called vectors, they change your DNA] then we can keep going.

i hope this is close to the last i talk about this series, it really disapointed me. and it made me wait 7 hours to hate it.

Absolute Power ch.16 is done, i'll add it to the link later, i can pm it if you want too.

-quote-

the best part of that whole stupid series, bando's quotes...

Kurama: The operation now will begin...

Bando: I'm not getting castorated dumb-ass!

Kurama: the future of humanity relies on this operation.

Bando: The future of humanity, and my balls, what the hell do these things have in common!?

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Bando: [kicks Nana in the stomach] Stupid bitch! oh crap [skipping back] Two meters, two meters...

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Bando: Its a cell number stupid! if you're ever in trouble call this and i'll kill them all!

few seconds later, same person...

Bando: You know Lucy! tell me where she is so i can kill her.

Mayu: But Nyuu is my friend...

Bando: [slaps her in the face drawing blood] I'll kill you if you don't tell me where she is. [Mayu holds up the cell number] What the hell?!

Mayu: Yoiu said if i were in trouble, i just had to call you and you'd save me.

Bando: [shocked] HUH?! [throws Mayu down on her face] Never talk to me again...

i'll miss that guy...

-AP Quotes-

Kit: Wow, even our plot holes aren't that big!

Aveian: There are worse writers than you out there, amazing...

Me: Thanks for the words of support...

HAIL ZEON!!!!!
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Monday, June 26, 2006

random day.
well i'm happy today!
happier than ever in fact!
i'm glad all you guys loved that Flame and my reply,
i had fun writing that!
and yes, Adam Sessler and Morgan Webb put up with that a lot, i actually think i channeled Mr.Sessler when i wrote that reply.
basically use their own writing to point out that they are in fact, a moron, then insult them a little, a perverbial verbal bitch-slap if you will.
yeah it was fun, and i'm glad you, my peoplzez backed me up, thanks.

but i'm suprised that it either took 8 chapters for this twit to decide they hated it, or that after 8 they still hated it, that suprises me. any of you who read it, was chapter 8 really that bad? i thought it was pretty damn good, i mean i can understand hating it in the first few chapters but by 8? did it take any of you that long to decide you didn't like it? or by 8 did you like it less? i'm confused...

and who the hell is "the queer?" none of my characters act gay by ch.8!? tell me, do any of my Original Characters seem gay?

well, off that subject i watched eps 5-7 of my long time antagonist of an anime, Elfen Lied.

yes, i'm going to watch the rest, i think it was the whole Nana getting de-limbed by the main character that made me cringe, i mean Lucy seemed, dare i say human [?] when Kouta talks to her at that shrine [after making out with his cousain...][and yes, i know i can't spell worth shit either] i can actually tolerate Lucy now, see i was afraid i'd either hate or love this series, but that would require it to be exceptional, and Elfen Lied, in my opinion is not, its Exceptionally average, its Blue Gender, except i don't like it that much, i mean Blue Gender did suck, but i liked it for some reason. i mean Bando is awesome, and Nana is cool, but i know i won't remember this series for very long, hell i was afraid it would over shadow Chobits, being as Chobits is almost over for me, Elfen lied will be lucky to overshadow Paranoia Agent, and i hated and was bored by that show, it is the only show that disturbed, confused, and bored, me at the same time. yeah, i won't miss Elfen Lied, but i will watch it to the end.

i do love that ending song, its so catchy and cute. which is wierd at ep.4 "ooh look, Nana got all her limbs ripped off, then she was killed by the only person she thought loved her... YAY! happy bubble-gum j-pop love song!!!!"

well i'm no longer alone, i have several people supporting me now, its good not to be alone. i'm happy that all that pain is over with now, that was the week of pain, i hope it will one day be only known in the posts i wrote during that time. but i am stronger for it, so i guess i'm glad it happened in a way.

i saw a pay per view today WWE Vengence, WWE is a joke, i only watch it now to mock it, i mean i realize Pro Wrestling is a soap opera with punching, but now the punching is almost gone, and poorly done in WWE, so i on;y watch it to mock it. i can't wait until, like WCW, their money runs out and they get bought out by TNA and universal, that will be a happy day.

i'm going to be up late today, good TV. and i'm going to train tommorrow, because i'm still built like an EVA, and unfortunatly i don't have a Prog knife, AT Field, and ai can't rip apart, de-limb or disembowel enemies, so i need to train.

i promise Absolute Power will be updated soon, so be pacient loyal readers.

quote:

i love this program

Duffrane: I'm a pacifist

Caboose: You're a thing babies suck on?

Tucker: Thats a pedaphile!

Church: Tucker, i think he means a "pacifier."

Tucker: Oh yeah, man i was thinking about a whole different thing.

-AP Comments-

Kit: You know all about Pedaphilia, don't you Draco...

Aveian: Don't spoil the story.

Kit; Sorry...

HAIL ZEON!!!!!
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Sunday, June 25, 2006

i love Flamers.
this a recent " review i got, i'll post it and my reply.

YOU SUCK! you have a horriable writing style!! your "jokes" arent even clost to
funny!! you make the queer and all the other people to strong! and you make the
original characters to weak! to put it simple you stuck at writing and should
never write a story again and if were lucky you will kill your self! so no one
ever has to read another one of you crappy ass storys!! now go fuck your self
you gay fag! and burn in hell!!

and my reply...

Hello flamer person, i would like you to thank you for your horribly misspelled hate mail, it makes me feel good that the people who dislike my story are so obviously morons. To write this, I used a magical device called “Spell Check,” so that my message would not sound like I failed 1st grade English. I would suggest you invest in such a device; it will probably make your insane rants seem slightly more credible.

Now my writing may be “horriable,” and my jokes may not be “clost,” to funny, I may even “stuck,” at writing, but at least I have the courtesy to not be so rude to random people.

Also there is an apostrophe in “We’re,” you said “were.” And I don’t understand where the “we’re,” comes in, are you suffering from multiple personality disorder?

Unfortunately for you random Flamer, I will not kill myself, I will write more of Absolute Power, because it is beloved by many, at I like to serve my Fans.

And my characters are stronger than the characters from G Gundam on purpose, because I hate that series and I only used it so that I could make several racially insensitive jokes, so I used my characters to beat the living crap out of the ones from the original series. And I would like to note that Allenby is the strongest pilot in the story, so that kinda ruins that little rant doesn’t it? In fact Domon, George and Argo are extremely strong too in my story, and every fight involving them is epic and hard-fought.

If you wanted to mock my treatment of the characters, you should note that I mock them relentlessly through out the story, so maybe you should look into that before you write poorly spelled reviews.

Also “gay fag,” is redundant, “gay,” or “fag,” would suffice, but both just shows a lack of speech control on your part. I also have a beautiful and sexy Girl Friend, who I met, may I add, in writing this story, I also have several female fans of this story, and of my romantic and poetic speaking on my Blog.

I would also like to point out this statement.

“to put it simple you stuck at writing and should
never write a story again and if were lucky you will kill your self! so no one
ever has to read another one of you crappy ass storys!!”

The correct way would be…

“To put it simple you suck at writing and should never write a story again, and if we’re lucky you will kill yourself, so no one ever has to read another one of your crappy ass stories!”

See the difference?

Also, who is the character you refer to as “The Queer?” I have no gay characters until ch.9, and I doubt any of them could be called strong. If you are referring to Kit, my main character, he is quite straight, in fact he is quite the letch, so “queer,” does not describe him. Well actually “queer,” means “strange,” not homosexual, as you used it, and if you were saying Kit, or any of my other characters are strange, you are correct, they all are, quite strange.

In conclusion, I would like to say you idiocy and poor grammar offended me more than your comments, which I actually found quite comical and amusing. I do not want fans of your mental quality to anyway, so I sincerely want to thank you for not reading my story, so I will no longer have to deal with your dumb ass.

Thank you once more for entertaining me.

Sincerely,

J. Daniel Moore.

Also known as, The Great Fox Boy.

If you’d like to read my blog, its JD Person at TheOtaku.com

I hope this was simple enough for you to understand, maybe if you come back in a year, after studying under a wise Tutor or Philosopher, you will under stand my story, Absolute Power.

I will leave you with your message to me, because your writing embarrasses and insults you more than I ever could. I did enjoy trying though, so thanks for the help.


so do you think i was right in my actions?


either way i'm really happy today, so worries.

i can't wait to write more of Absolute Power being as it gets such beautiful reviews -^_^-

quote:

more of me and my dad

Dad: most atheletes say the don't play soccer because it is too simple and a waste of their time.

Me: let them say that face to face with a soccer fan, -^_^-

-AP Comments-

Kit: wow, people love us!

Aveian: Idiots do hate us.

Foxxy: Fuck them, i know the real fans will love us, and morons like that are better to get away from anyway.

HAIL ZEON!!!!!
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Saturday, June 24, 2006

happiness.
first this comment made me laugh out loud...

Grifter99:
What doesn't kill us, makes us stronger.
Become stronger.

reeal nice man, i guess i should feel differently, but that makes me laugh.

i'm happy again today, i think it goes without saying why. but beyond the main reason, its just that i had lotsa people to talk to online, two girls, one a really good friend, the other, well she's speacial, not "the one just for me," speacial [too much Chobits] more like "what the fuck could i say to describe this particular lifeform?!" speacial. yeah, plus plenty of youtube, so i'm just happy. life is good now. i hope it gets better, but if it stays like this, i could be very happy.

and lets talk about false hopes, see i don't actually believe that they are true, i just imagine they are, and it makes me really happy. if i were to believe that the one just for me were in my house, sleeping in my bed, and that my mom said nothing because she is in on it, and my dog Penelope [Penel or Weenim for short] is just too dumb to notice, when i go into my room, and see my bed empty, i'm not suprised, nor am i disapointed, i knew it would be, i just like day dreaming that it would not be. i guess i'm stupid or wierd, but hell my delusions kept me going through the night.

i still don't miss my dog binkie that much, she just seems like a dream now, her death seems like a dream, i think its my body's saftey reaction trying to keep me from feeling more pain. i may be cold, but i do wish she didn't go, i guess i do miss her, i'm just not sad, its more of a respectful mourning than an emotional one.

i don't even know where all the time went, usually i'm counting the hours, but today blew by, but it was nice, it was a happy day.

Chobits is almost over for me, yeah i have to admit now, it is the best series i've seen, of course Gundam is still number 2, i gotta buy the next SEED Destiny DVD.

excuse me, pee break...

and i'm back, had around 51 ounces of bottled water today.

awwwww, Weenim is asleep [if anyone gets the reference you are awesome] she's so damn cute, all huddled up there, fast asleep, i lay next to her for 2 hours, wide awake, i get up for 20 minutes, falls dead asleep.

i saw a bunch of Red vs Blue today, i'll proably watch more tonight before i pass out, or not...

Absolute Power should be updated too.

quote:

me and my dad.

Me: I trust God, thats why i pray, and when i do get divine help i thank him and am greatful for it.

Dad: Thats fine...

Me: So thats why i don't like Christian music, it doesn't reflect my feelings. i need a song called "God covers my ass."

Dad: thats never going to happen...

-AP comments-

Kit: "god has my as?" yeah, we will never be able to say that.

me: Hey, i watch out for you guys!

Foxxy: Yeah, after all the shitty stuff happens you keep us from dying, thanks a lot!

Aveian: My life isn't that bad, except i spend it with those two...

HAIL ZEON!!!!!!
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Absolute Power ch.11
Absolute Power
Mission: 11
Turning point: part 2

Sora: (boarding her Suit) I guess I’ll have to cover for everyone, plus have some fun myself!

Sora’s Suit is a GuAIZ with GINN wings and head fin and DINN waist armor/gun holders. Machine gun in the right, shotgun on the left, the mono-eye is red. Her Suit is black with white detailing. On the right shoulder is a red heart with an arrow through it that says “Sora” in girl’s handwriting.

Sora: Watch out boys, Sora’s comin to getcha!

Sora’s Suit launches, she flies overhead, raining down bullets and shot on MX’s destroying them.

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Foxxy, in her MX approaches the Main building.

Foxxy: (searching) Sylven, Sylven? Where are you Sylven?

Foxxy spots Quick Sylver, its knelt down and not moving.

Foxxy: Sylven!!!!

Foxxy jumps out of her Suit and runs over to his, she boards it and finds it empty. Foxxy sits down in the control seat and tries to activate it, but instead blue light turn on and the Vid-screen activates, Sylven appears on the screen.

Sylven: So you thought you could steal my Gundam well… Foxxy?

Foxxy: (overjoyed) Sylven!!!!

Sylven: What are you doing here?!

Foxxy: (normal perk) I came to see you! Duh!

Sylven: Get out of here, the whole reason I’m fighting is to keep the war away from you!

Foxxy: But I wanna help!

Sylven: Please, just leave and let me protect you.
Foxxy: Fine…

Shots rain down on Quick Sylver.

Sora: Oooooh, a shiny new one! Ain’t moving, may as well destroy it!

Sora fires both guns down on Quick Sylver, shaking it.

Foxxy screams as the impacts hit.

Sylven: Damn it! I’m too far away, I have no choice, Foxxy forgive me!

The Gundam starts to activate.

Sylven: There’s a spare Zero trace suit, get into it then put the helmet on.

Foxxy: Okay, but no peeking! (Winks)

Sylven: Seconds away from death and you still joke?

Foxxy: (vacuum-seals suit) Cause that’s just how I roll. (Pts helmet on) Hey! I can’t see anything!

Sylven: (activating the last level) Believe me, you will soon.

The Suits controls activate and the Gundam rises.

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Marane’s body twitches as electricity flows through him, the soldier breaks the circuit again, Marane slumps.

Zeru: Will you tell us your secrets yet old man.

Marane: (Fading) Fuck… y… (Passes out)

Zeru: Oh well, I guess Mr. Alrock is done playing for today, put him in his cell.

The soldiers unhook Marane, he falls onto their shoulders. Suddenly Marane’s eyes shoot open and one of the soldiers cringes.

Marane: (barley able to talk) You should no not to trust a doctor with a blade.

Marane drops a bloody scalpel.

Marane: Don’t ask… where I hid it. (Passes out)
Zeru: Marane, you know I can’t kill you, you think you can take advantage of me; I’ll make you pay for that. Take him to his cell!

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Quick Sylver activates. It rises and Foxxy get ready to fight.

Foxxy: How do you move this thing?

Sylven: Its tapped into your mind, just think about what you want to do and it will do it.

Foxxy: Right!

The Gundam blasts forward and drives its spikes through two Daggers.

Foxxy: Its so fast, I can do whatever I want!

She flies up and fires down with the Vulcans, destroying more Suits.

Foxxy: I can defeat anyone, I’m unstoppable!

She impales two more; leaving the spikes in them then draws both beam swords. She flies down and cuts down two Suits.

Foxxy: Its amazing how fast this thing is! I can see everywhere, I can be anywhere! I love it!

Sylven continues walking deeper into the base.

Sylven: You’ll see soon.

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Kit: I hope Sora doesn’t kill too many of my men.

Allenby: Knowing her, I bet the survivors well be really lucky.

Kit: I’d rather die.

Allenby: Then wash your face.

Allenby quick wipes his face off before he says anything.

Allenby: You’re mine; Sora can leave her marks on someone else, (touching his cheek) because this face is mine to do what I want with.

Kit: (touching her cheek) Same goes for this face.

Allenby: (smiles warmly and giggles) You’re so… (looks at his neck) oh my god eeem!

Kit: (puts his hand over the wound) This? It’s nothing.

Allenby: It’s a nasty wound.

Kit: Yeah, and I lefty my Med-Kit in my Gundam.

Allenby: I have mine!

Allenby pulls out a band-aid.

Kit: Don’t you have med-tape or the sticky pads?

Allenby: Nope.

Kit: I hate Band-Aids!!

Allenby: (smiles) Too bad!

Before Kit can react she grabs him and puts in on his neck applying it softly and smoothly.

Allenby: (smiles) See? Its not that bad (winks) is it?

Kit: (blushing, looks down and away) You’re just lucky I love you so much.

Once again, in a millisecond, Allenby’s lips are pressed hard on Kit’s, her arm around his neck; Kit falls onto his back with her on his chest.

Allenby: I love you, you’re so sweet! I’m just worried. But it’s so cute that you hate band-aids, and even cuter that you’d let me put on you. I love you.

Kit: I love you too.

Kit pulls Allenby into another kiss.

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Aveian: Damn! They just keep coming!

Draco: I know! This is seriously pissing me off!

Aveian: I think we should surrender.
Draco: WHAT!!!!!?

Aveian: I think we should give up.

Draco: ARE YOU INSANE!?

Aveian: If we surrender they will take us to the base, were we can escape and find the others.

Draco: I’d never do that…

Aveian looks very solemn.

Draco: … except now, if we don’t we’ll die, this is our best chance.

Aveian: Good we agree on this.

The two Suits signal surrender as they’re surrounded by enemies.

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Aveian and Draco are led in at gun point.

Soldiers: You’re gonna die very soon you fools.

Draco: You first.

Draco draws his sword and cuts down all the soldiers around him, Aveian pulls away and shoots the rest.

Draco: Looky what I found!

Above them stands Kit Custom and Faye Gundams.

Aveian: We have work to do.

Draco: I’ll try to guard the door.

Aveian: One impossible mission after another.

Draco: Never boring.

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Sora closes in on Foxxy. Sora fires and Foxxy easily dodges each shot.

Foxxy: I can be anywhere, I can do anything, I can see everything! I can do what ever I want!

She fires at Sora with the wrist guns and Vulcans, nicking Sora’s Suit up. Foxxy starts to cringe, she digs her fingers in and whimpers.

Foxxy: I DON”T WANNA SEE THIS ANYMORE!!!!!

Sora kicks Foxxy onto the ground from the air. She rains fire down on her.

Foxxy: I wanna get out, I wanna get out, I wanna get out, LET ME OUTTA HERE!!!

Sora flies in for the kill.

Foxxy: LET ME OUT!!!

Foxxy fires the chest gun, blowing away Sora’s Suit from the waist down. The top half falls to the ground, Sora jumps out, Quick Sylver is half on its back and ass, Sora runs up its chest and opens the hatch, gun drawn. She sees Foxxy, shivering and completely out of it.

Sora: Its just a little girl. Somehow I get a feeling I shouldn’t kill her.

Sora knocks Foxxy out, and then takes her over her shoulder into the base.

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Draco, using stolen Uzi’s fires on the soldiers, meanwhile Aveian replaces the missing Custom’s arm with a MX’s. Suddenly another soldier appears.

Voice: I’m an ally!

Draco: Not you!

Sora: I can’t believe you guys are here! Hi Aveian! (Blows him a huge kiss, Aveian accepts it with the usual unusual warmth) Well, I gotta get this girl someplace safe; I’ll put her in with Kit and his girl.

Draco and Aveian snap to look at her.

Aveian: You located Kit?

Sora: I did a lot more than that! A LOT MORE! (Winks)

Draco cringes.

Aveian: Go get Kit and Allenby, bring them here, we’re breaking out!

Sora: Roger that!

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Zeru: Natasha, we have a certain intruder in hall 69D, go give him a proper greeting.

Natasha: It’ll be my pleasure, well, then his!

Natasha moves out.

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Sora re-enters the room Kit and Allenby are in. the two are still on the ground “enjoying each others company.” The two of them turn their heads to look at her.

Sora: Wow, Kit! I didn’t think you had it in you.

Kit: well, actually its in he…

Allenby thwacks him.

Kit: I guess I deserved that! (Kit notices the hair color of the person over Sora’s shoulder) Wait, Sora, who’s on your shoulder?

Sora: I don’t know, found her in a Mobile Suit I fought, you know her? (Sora lays her down)

Kit: Foxxy!

Allenby: That’s your little sister? (looks at her) nice jumpsuit!

Kit runs over to her.

Sora: So can I get a little present for saving your sister like that?

Kit: (pissed) Shut up Sora!

Sora: Whoa, sorry did I hit a nerve? (looks at the plug suit) (thinking) or did I hit a NERV?

Kit looks down at her face, she’s passed out.

Kit: Wake up sis (pokes her a couple of times) sis, you there sis?

Kit grabs her shoulders kneeling over her and shakes her.

Kit: (voice breaking) Wake up sis! Please wake up!

Suddenly Foxxy’s eyes shoot open, she clears Kit off her with one arm and sits up. Her eyes are blood-shot, dark circled, and rapidly moving.

Foxxy: (speaking quickly, crazed, scared) Where am I? How’d I get here? Why am I here? Who are you people? What are you doing here? What do you want with me? What are you going to do to me? I don’t want to be here, I want to leave here, let me go, let me out of here. I DON”T WANT TO BE HERE ANYMORE!!!!!!!!

Kit: Foxxy, snap out of it! Foxxy, please calm down!

Foxxy: I just want to go home! Get me out of here!

Kit: I said… (Punches her hard in the stomach) …snap out of it! (Slaps her across the face) Now wake up!

Foxxy lurches forward with the first blow and falls over after the second.

Kit: You okay sis?

Foxxy sits back up, rubbing the two impact points.

Foxxy: Yeah, that worked, but you could have held back a little.

Kit: I guess. I’m just glad you’re back!

Foxxy: Glad to be back!

Sora: Well happy family bonding time was fun and all, but I think we should go help your friends!

Kit: Yes, but how?

Sora: I admit this battle doesn’t look very good for us, but I have a plan.

Kit: I’m dying to hear it!

Sora: This basically a two front battle, I say we destroy one.

Kit: Meaning…

Sora: Meaning we load this room up with explosives a blow it to shit. Its not like I’m planning on ever being able to return to it, so why the fuck not?!
Kit: Sounds good to me!

Sora: Good, Foxxy and Allenby can set up the weapons and we can back up Aveian his majesty Draco.

Kit: I guess that’ll work.

Sora: Good then lets move out!

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Sylven is walking down a hall-way, ahead stands a single opponent.

Natasha: Stop, (seductive) or be forced to make you.

Sylven: (normal voice; drops his whip out of his sleeve and unrolls it) Just try it.

Natasha: So you like to play rough, (gets her whip out) well so do I. I’m going to whip you, then punish you. Make you scream for more and then make you all min…

Sylven: You done yet?

Natasha: WHAT?!

Sylven: I’ve got important things to do, so I can’t play around with you.

Natasha: How dare you!

Natasha sends a lash of her whip at Sylven, who moves with the grace of a swan in sending his at her, it moves serpentine to hers and slicing it to bits and then, wet splattering can be heard.

Natasha: How could you beat me, no one is better with a whip then me!

Sylven: That’s a toys for sexual deviants, try using a real whip if you’re serious.

With that Sylven flicks his wrist and blood explodes out of her, her body slides apart onto the floor, Sylven lashes his whip, clearing the blood off.

Voice: Nice move, try it on me and see what happens.

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Soldier: Natasha’s signal has been lost, but the intruder’s is still active.

Zeru: How is this possible! It can’t be!
Argo: Natasha, dead?

George’s head drops in sadness.

Argo: Argo SMASH!!!!!

Zeru: Send out our mercenary friend to take care of him!

Soldier: He cannot be located.

Zeru: Impossible!

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Sarin walk silently down the halls. Some soldiers storm in front of him.

Soldiers: We got you now!

Sarin: Think again.

Sarin flies forward over their fire and eliminates them easily.

Sarin: Now for what I came for.

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Soldier: Sarin has found Marane!

Zeru: What!? Could things get any worse, everything is going to hell!

Domon: I have something I now must protect.

Zeru: Get back here, I order you!

Domon: I don’t need to take orders from one I could kill so easily!

Zeru: He’ll pay for that! They all will!

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The door opens, light shines in a beaten and bonded Marane; Sarin stares down at him.

Marane: Sarin, great to see you, but I’m guessing you’re not here to save me, right? (Sarin says nothing, and does nothing) Well, I guess if anyone’s going to do it it may as well be you, just please kill quickly and don’t damage my face, wanna look good for my funeral.
Sarin: Do you wish to die?

Marane: That’s a stupid question; the basic idea of life is to not die.

Sarin: Why do you help Zeru?

Marane: Why? Why wouldn’t I?

Sarin: You hate him, yet you create weapons for him.

Marane: I create the weapons that will soon destroy him. So are you going to kill me or what?

Sarin: No. a life as pathetic and useless as yours is not worth ending.

Marane: Then thank god I’m not a stronger man.

Sarin breaks Marane’s chains with his claws then walks off.

Marane: He may have saved me, but I have a feeling my fate is to die here.

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Several Soldiers are firing in on Draco and Aveian. Draco’s gun runs out and is pinned down as he reloads.

Soldiers: We’ve got ‘em now men, lets… (Gunshot, blood comes out of forehead) Arrrgh!

The guy falls over more are shot and falls, Sora runs forward, delivering headshots, Kit pulls out from behind her and cuts down the rest. The two run into the Hangar as a grenade clears the rest of the hall.

Aveian: Welcome back Captain.

Kit: Good to be back, Commander.

Aveian: Where are you’re two leading ladies?

Kit: Demo-mission. They’re going to gather explosive and blow this place to shit.

Aveian: Sounds fun. Right now I’m trying to repair your Suit. We’re having to use spare MX parts, but it should function.

Kit: I hope that’s enough for me to destroy Domon. He’ll pay for this.

Aveian: Just don’t get over zealous or you’ll die.

Kit: Glad you believe in me.

Sora: (Firing into the doorway) Ladies, shut the fuck up and get back to work!

Draco: (firing too) We’re doing this so you idiots can get ready to fight, so get working, damn useless curs!

Kit: Alrighty, well, I better join in the repairs!

Kit rides the lift up, Aveian looks at his neck.

Aveian: Band-aid?

Kit quick covers his neck.

Aveian: I’m guessing a certain someone put that on you.

Kit: Shut up.

Aveian: She has you good doesn’t she?

Kit: Like Sora isn’t controlling you.

Aveian: Good point.

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Foxxy: (singing) High explosives, explosives are fun! We love explosives, they’re fun for everyone!

Allenby: That’s catchy!

They both start singing as they disassemble shells in the armory and carry the explosives off towards Sora’s room.

Allenby: Think Kit’s okay?

Foxxy: Knowing my brother I’m sure we have nothing to worry about. You really like my brother, don’t you?

Allenby: Well duh!

Foxxy: I knew, it was always written all over your face.

Allenby: So, its all over his too. We both have each other deep. I think its cute.

Foxxy: I envy you. You’re guy likes you back. Mine’s…

Allenby: Don’t worry, he will. I’m sure. You’re Kit’s sister, you can get anyone!

Foxxy: Thanks! Foxxy, I was thinking, why don’t we set other explosives up, we need to cover all angles.

Allenby: Good plan, lets get going!

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Voice: Nice move, wanna try it on me? (a man in a cloak walks out of the shadow) the real cutting happened before you pulled back, that whip must be very sharp.

Sylven: You could read my technique? You’re a very good observer.

Man: It comes with the job, being a Mercenary.

Profile:

Ra (2nd Mercenary)
Height: 5’ 9”
Voice (Reki .Hack Twilight)
Body: Pecs, ripped arms and legs. He is tattooed all over his body in triangular stripes. He has two on each upper arm parallel pointing in towards the body, two on each arm the same way, and on the back of each hand. He has two on each pec diagonally moving up, each one just missing the areolas and two starting at the hip bones and moving up diagonally towards the ribs. He has one each cheek, taking up most of each cheek. He paints his nails black.
Clothes: Beige cloak. Under it are baggy black pants, with a thin black belt hung diagonally left, holding up nothing, black Sleeveless Turtle-neck and a black leather choker with a metal clip and baggy dark grey leather gloves.
Face: Deep red eyes, long Hyper-glow blonde hair, past his eyes in the front, same on the sides and sloped down in the back to the end of his neck, its parted in the back and often falls over his eyes, so he either moves fast to move it or does it by hand.
Personality: Ra is power obsessed, he wants that, and will do anything for it, killing is no problem, being a mercenary, he does it by trade. But he is very self-serving and only does what he wants, if he doesn’t like something, he changes it, he doesn’t take orders well.

Ra takes off his cloak and his shirt. He pulls out a long heavy spear (like Krim from .Hack) his is all gold, the blade has a black Egyptian eye and is colored in black to look like a wing, fanned feathers at the end by the tip.

Ra: So Sylven, you ready to face me?

Sylven: If I must, just don’t cry in hell when I kill you.

Ra: Very cute.

Sylven sends a lash at him.

Sylven: Interesting.

Ra easily knocks his whip away and swings at him, Sylven jumps back.

Ra: Nice try, but you’ll have to do better!

Ra rushes him.

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Soldier: Ra has appeared in the hall, he’s engaged Sylven!

Zeru: I can’t take this shit anymore! I’m going to end this once and for all!

Soldier: Where are you going sir!? Come back!

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Foxxy and Allenby get ready in Sora’s room, loading explosives into back backs.

Foxxy: I say we split up to cover more ground.

Allenby: Good idea; now let’s move out!

The two of them run out of the room in different directions.

Foxxy: (thinking) Sylven!

Allenby: (thinking) Kit!

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Back in the hangar, Kit and Aveian keep working while Sora and Draco cover.

Draco: You two done yet?

Kit: Almost!

Aveian: Its not like we’re trying to drag this out, we want these ready too!

Sora: we just have to trust them! And hope nothing bad happens while we do our jobs.

Draco: You sure are optimistic, especially for someone who’s a traitor, with your skills I’m sure they want you dead even worse.

Sora: Why do you think I’m fighting so hard? I have to make sure they don’t capture me, if they do a fate infinitely times worse that death occurs.

Draco: I know all about those fates woman.

Sora: Good for you!

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Ra: You’ll have to do better than that!

Sylven sends the whip at him again, Ra deflects it, but Sylven pulls back and it wraps around the spears staff, Sylven pulls back and lunges forward for a drop kick. Ra steps to the side, Sylven lands and goes for a straight side kick with the other leg, Ra catches it and Sylven goes for an insegury, Ra lets go and sends him spinning in the air. Sylven lands and throws a hard right punch, hitting Ra in the stomach, sending him into the wall, but Ra counters with a knee to the chin and knocks Sylven’s head straight back. Sylven unravels his whip and jumps back.

Ra: Nice, no one ever hit me like that before, sure you don’t wanna back down, I’ll let you live if you just walk away, how about it.

Sylven: Sorry, I have to beat you; I only wish to be the strongest in the world and colonies, if I go backing out of fights that will never happen.

Ra: Oh well, (rushes Sylven again) don’t blame me if you lose!!

Sylven sends another whip lash at him, Ra tries to defect it, but the whip moves around his spear, heading for his neck.

Ra: Shit!

Ra quick ducks and moves to the side, put the whip gashes his cheek, Ra lands in a three point stance, looking focused.

Ra: This is the first time anyone ever drew blood on me, congratulations, but ( really motors at Sylven this time) I must say it will be the last thing you ever do!!!

Sylven: Not so fast, now my ultimate technique, Whip strike: Lash of a million blades!

Sylven lets loose a barrage of whip strikes, probably as many as the name suggests.

Ra: Nice try! But too slow!

Ra deflects each one, spear moving at light speed, double handed stance, strikes hit it, sparks fly, each man swings fast and hard, then silence, and blood drips on the floor.

Ra is standing, legs spread, his right hand half-way down the staff, left stretched out behind him, the point of his spear is through Sylven’s left chest, it’s pierced his heart.

Sylven coughs blood, Ra pulls his spear out and Sylven hits the ground.

Ra: Sorry about that, I’ll leave you alone so you can say you last testaments.

Ra walks back off into the shadows. Sylven lays on the ground, a quite sizeable puddle of blood forming around him.

Sylven: (voice weak and raspy) So I lost? Well I guess that could be expected. I guess I wasn’t strong enough. I knew this would happen, why else would I have pushed Foxxy so far away. It was to protect her, but, I know that she’ll no less knowing I died, nothing I could do could sully my place in that girl’s heart. I wonder who the bigger fool is, me or her? And Kit, her brother. I spent my whole life trying to be better than him, trying to beat him, to be the strongest so I could defeat him. I was supposed to be the pilot, I was supposed to be on top! What happened?! Why did Aveian and the other choose him over me! Why is he the better choose? Why is he my superior? What did he do that I didn’t? what does he have that I don’t? But laying here, dying, can I really blame them for their decision? Kit, Foxxy, Aveian, even Ra, don’t die out there, I don’t blame a single one of you for what you did.

Sylven’s body goes limp, his chest no longer moves up or down. All his life is gone.

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Aveian: It’s done!

Kit: Good now let’s get out of here!

Zeru: (cocks gun) Not so fast Kit Sune! I can’t lrt you escape, I’m going to kill you, sorry if that ruins your plans.

Kit: Who the hell are you?

Zeru: The name is Zeru Onchina, I’m in charge here, I control everything, I’m the Man!

A gunshot goes off, blood and brain sprays out of Zeru’s head. His body falls of the cat walk onto the ground.
A man steps out from the back.

(ending music)

Man: Good help is so hard to find now a days, right Kit?

Kit: (draws Kodachi) (snarling, eyes red, fangs) Zeru!!

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Foxxy finds a large puddle of blood in the hall-way.

Foxxy: (shivers) what is this feeling, can’t be!


Ja Ne

(Slow quiet, sad music)

Foxxy: (sadly, crying softly) It can’t be… it can’t be him, why is this all happening, why do I keep losing things, why can’t my life ever get easier?! Please don’t die, I never got to tell you how I feel. So you can’t die yet, you’re not allowed to die until you’re mine. so come back… please comeback.

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Friday, June 23, 2006

it can only get better.
yep, once again i feel very lonely.
i'm getting used to it, i guess its good i'm learning to deal with this, i just wish i never had to. yeah, i feel alone now. but its fine, i can handle it. once again i must call upon my inner strength to deal with this.

so i guess things can only get better, actually i know things could get worse, but being as right now i have a mental stability akin to Shinji Ikari or Asuka Langley Soryu, so i'm not going to journey into such a sad place. yeah, i'm pretty screwed up right now, but oh well, i'll deal.

at least i have my weeny dog, i can't be unhappy laying next to my weeny dog, she has always been there for me [not so much by choice but by the fact she is portable and not strong enough to escape my arms until i fall asleep] so i'm not completly alone. yay, i have my dog, its like a year ago all over again. i really hope things get better, i really hope i find strength again soon.

i actually have found comfort in false hopes, i know they're not true, but its nice to imagine them being true, i knida don't want to dispell them, but to not to would require me not going to bed, so i guess i just have to subscribe to reality again eventually.

lets see, i'm still trying to draw, and this latest thing came out pretty good. i wish i had a scanner, its of chibi Sylven and Foxxy, Sylven has Fairy wings, and Foxxy has Fox ears and a tail, she's pointing to Sylven all cute going "♥ He's so damn cute! ♥" and Sylven going "i hate you all."

i can't start ch.17, it just doesn't feel right. i think i need clearification, so i guess i'll just wait for it.

tommorrow there will be new Anime on demand, so i guess i have something to look forward to, but somehow i don't think it will be enough to distract me.

yes my Peoplezez, times are bleak, but your great Leader is still optimistic, for one reason or another.

well at least i will basically go to bed after i'm done with this, so at least i made it through today.

Read Absolute Power it would make me feel better.

quote:

"its impossible to be sad if you're holding a puppy."

-me

-AP Comments-

Draka: Or a kitty!

Foxxy: so cuddly!!!

Kit: This is so wrong... but feels so right!

HAIL ZEON!!!!!!
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Thursday, June 22, 2006

inner strength.
a lot of you are right, love does bring a lot of pain, but i still think is worth it, there are some times when it brings me so much pain i just want to go crazy, and i can't find a thing to make it go away. but even if that is because of love, the few precious moments of happiness are worth it.

nothing happened today, i really did nothing, its kinda sad, i mean usually i do something i can talk about that i did, but i did nothing to talk about today.

so i guess i'll ramble, anything to distract me from this feeling of desperate loneliness and pain. there's not even anything on TV.

you ever get the feeling that every force in the universe wants you to be sad?

damn, i bit off loose lip skin, and i guess i took off some living stuff too.

i can't even write AP, still haven't got the proof reading done. i can't blame my number one fan, its not her fault, but still i really wish i had something to distract me from my heart's constant pain.

i suppose i should learn to be more of a man, to be able withstand pain, and not always bitch, but its just i'm so used to telling people i'm hurt, so they can tell me how to heal, but i know i cannot do this forever, i have to learn to be self reliant, to be able to stand on my own. i mean i used to be able to, nay was forced to stand on my own and rely on myself for happiness, but after all that has happened, i've learned to find my happiness from others.

so i suppose you guys see me as weak, being so reliant on love to be happy, but i guess i aquired this weakness. i guess i'd rather have this weakness than be without its cause. infact, that exact situation scares me more than anything else, its the main source of my pain, why i sometimes lose sleep, and why i go somewhat crazy just trying to keep my mind from poking at the wounds in my heart.

i guess i could write more of AP, it seems i always get busy when i try, so i guess either way i'm good huh?

yeah, i guess i just have to buck the fuck up and just move along, no use in being a mopey little emo.

i really don't know what the future will bring, i only hope i am strong enough to handle it.

once again i will try to write Absolute Power though i wonder if anyone will try to read it.

quote:

"lipstick commercials make me feel more shy and turned on than porn or underwear adds."

-me

sorry couldn't come up with anything else.

-AP Comments-

Kit: You can tell that from your damn story numb nuts!

Aveian: You are a terrible writer.

Foxxy: i have fun at least.

me: She likes it, thats all that matters.

Foxxy: [sticks tongue out] haha!

HAIL ZEON!!!!!

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Wednesday, June 21, 2006

move along.
yeah, life sucks.
so you gotta suck it up and keep going.
take the support of those close you and allow yourself to heal.
i'm feeling better everyday
Sunday i felt like shit, hell, you Peoplezez read my rant, i basically was just letting it all out, sometimes you just need to vent, but because of that venting i caused myself even more pain. so yeah Sunday sucked.
from Sunday into Monday i didn't sleep well, but i got support from the usual place and felt a lot better. so Monday i was just kinda emotional, like when i used to watch Chobits and Elfen lied in the same day, or during "Dafina-gate," but i had my support, and i slept well, Tuesday, today [even though you guys read this Wednesday, remember i consider it tommorrow when i wake up for good.] i feel a little pain, but its mostly gone, i'm back to normal. which may or may not be a good thing -^_^-

i still believe all life is is the search for love, because love is still all i care about. sure it may bring pain at times, but its worth it. and its good to know that you can endure such pain, that you found something worth anything to protect. and to all you haters i know one thing, that i was once like you, you say you don't need love, that its all fake, that its not for you. then one day you realize that you're alone, cold, and you want to be loved. you don't have to believe me, but i know that the ones that fight it fall the hardest! ♥3♥

yes, i may be a "bit" insane. but hell thats why i have some many readers [well my posts do, AP...] so i'll contunue being the same me, i may change a little, but its all moving along, we have to adjust, and some adjustments are easier than others.

and now i've grown used to not being able to say every thought on my mind. the reasons have been explained already, i'm sorry that i cannot say them again, but i can't.

my drawing is still pretty rocky, but hell, Rome wasn't built in a day, so i just have to keep going, and eventually it will get easier, like everything else in life.

i may have a relapse later, so keep reading, and you may just get a treat!

wow, i guess i'm still getting used to this new life, but fuck it, thats what learning is for. the amount of adjustment i'm showing is amazing, i must be a Coordinator, New Type, or an Angel [not the 18th, then i wouldn't be speacial]

i'm going to start writing ch.17 of Absolute Power tonight maybe, technically difficulties are stopping the proof reading, and i need something to distract me, and because i'm Irish, its this or Drinking.

quote:

'i'm such a happy puppy, because this puppy has an owner who lover him very very much!"

-Anonymous

-AP COMMENTS-

Kit: Pussy!

draka puts a collar and leash on him, then yanks him down.

Draka: Bad boy! no you lay down and be a good boy, i wanna play!

Draco: I hate my family.

Aveian: i'm lucky not to be realted by blood, my luck ended there.

HAIL ZEON!!!!!!


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Tuesday, June 20, 2006

Emotions.
right now, i have a lot of emotions.
i feel a lot.
i always said i wanted to feel, back when i was numb, after Dafina rejected me
i said i wanted to feel, even if it hurt
i thought at this point i'd say that me was wrong
but, i can't say that.

my lab Binkie is dead, i watched her be put to sleep, i carried her to the van, because she could no longer walk, she had sores from not being able to move, and was wet from repeatedly knocking over her water dish trying to move. but she didn't struggle, she let me carry her, she looked happy. my weeny dog tried to stop me, she stood behind the van and wouldn't move, too bad for her she's portable. so i took my first ever pet to the humane society, i watched two people to happy to be human, let alone exicutioners carry Binky off, wrapped in a blanket on a stretcher into the death room, i saw them give her the shot, and she just layed her head down, and never brought it back up. she looked so happy, she knew the pain was over ever since i picked her up. i'm glad she wanted this too.

my weeny dog has been depressed ever since, and my mom cried a lot, i guess i was the only one who stayed composed, i cried when Binkie was there, but i left my tears with her, i cannot cry anymore.

whats sad is that i keep thinking of better ways i could have done it, i could have given her a loaf of bread, it was her favorite food, or let her chew on her favorite toy. but i can't change it, and if i could, i wouldn't want to see her die all over again.

its sad knowing i''l never see her again, or trip over her, brush off all her excess fur, pull out tufts of loose fur, or hear her pant. but i let her die peacefully. i know it was what was for the best.

i have my one thing to keep me happy. all i need is that. as long as i have it i will never be alone. i saw ep.25 of SuperGALS today, that scene at the end with Miyu and Yamato was so touching. very fitting too, for later occurences that i will not discuss here, but i may in a much later post, or pms.

i realized now, that i said i would grow stronger, to earn and deserve love, i believe now is my chance to do that, and i will embrace it. i must do what is hardest to protect what is dearest. thats the best i can put it.

"my speacial one," is from Chobits, guess she does know it better...

yeah, another reason for my emotions, Chobits, damn awesome anime that is the best i ever watched, i curse you for being so right on love, stupid touching love stories. at least Kare Kano was pointless. Asuba is kickass though!

then i watched some crap on TLC, Shalom in the home. this family hated eachother, the father undermined his wife infront of the kid, she was a pussy, the wife, and the kid was satan incarnet.

mom: quit acting like a brat.

girl: did you call me a brat?! *climbs onto her mothers lap, staring her in the eyes* CARE TO CALL ME THAT AGAIN!!!?

mom: *laughs* what if i do?

girl: *hits her in the face* DON"T EVER CALL ME A BRAT AGAIN!!!!!!

but the problem is if you looked at this girls eyes, or talked to her like a human, she was so broken, her voice was a constant whimper.

someone so broken, like a little female me...

i got no sleep last night, afraid to lose my only happiness, so tonight i don't make the same mistake.

the next chapter of Absolute Power will be done as soon as my proof reader helps me with it.

quote:

"i want more than anything to see the smiling faces of those i care most about, but i always just seem to make them cry..."

-Manager Ueda
Chobits

-AP Quotes-

Kit: i do the same thing.

Foxxy; I'm the one that cries.

Aveian: and i'm the one who has to bring them both back to reality.

HAIL ZEON!!!!!!
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Monday, June 19, 2006

the last post was terminated.
for personal reasons, today's post was terminated.
sorry for the inconvience.

HAIL ZEON!!!!!!
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