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Birthday
• 1990-02-12
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Location
• in my own little universe, the entrance to which is somewhere in inkster michigan
Member Since
• 2005-03-25
Occupation
• slacker/writer/brooding mystic/spaz/idiot/confused wandering lost soul/puppy [in joke] Straight, brown haired Eiri Yuki
Real Name
• J-D, Got it memorized?
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Achievements
• i've managed to spend 10 years in school and never had a girlfriend, thats an achievment in its sadness. but i've been in school 12 years now...
Anime Fan Since
• i first saw Gundam Wing
Favorite Anime
• Chobits, Gundam Seed,excel saga, Bleach, Naruto, Ergo Proxy, Blood +, Myhthical Dectective Loki Ragnarok, Makai Senki Disgaea, Tokko, Pucca, Gravitation, Ikki Tousen, Full Metal Panic, Kare Kano, Blue Gender, GITS, Cromartie High, inuyasha,.hack,kenshin,
Goals
• to gain good friends and to meet up with "someone" over the summer.
Hobbies
• writing my Flamer Fic, surfin' the net, training with various weapons
Talents
• annoying people, being crafty in times of trouble
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Wednesday, March 29, 2006
assorted fun.
well for creative writing we have to invent a product.
so picked Mobile Suits, and i brought in a couple of my action figures, for reference, and many a beautiful babe enjoyed playing with them, and knew all the series very well, boy i love that class.
Ky;ie really liked Strike Rouge.
well, Bev finished ch.14, so i will now send it to all of you, by pm, or e-mail, just tell me how and i'll send it.
Bev pointed out the fact that aveian changed too fast, and i agree, sorta, i think his changes aren't as well planned out, do any of you readers agree?
i mean i think i did a good job, but Aveian's change does seem to be the weakest part.
did any of you notice it was crappy-ish, or bad.
basically did any of you dislike the way i handled Aveian's change?
well i gotta get KH II, i must buy it, for i'm stuck on everything else! plus i love the franchise! i must play the game!
1600 hits!
boy am i sorta popular!
go acceptable me!
damnit, i just can't get over my story's flaws.
i mean i really screwed up the whole Aveian thing.
and Kit and Allenby's relationship up to ch.9 was kinda crappy too.
maybre i'm over thinking it, but Bev knows this stuff, she's quite wise, yet pretty dumb. she knows the ways of life, just not much else.
i really trust her critisisms, because she knows how much it means to me. so i guess i'll just have to revise.
i must fix Aveian's suckiness!
other than thaqt i'm proud of my work. Foxxy, Kit, Draco, Sylven, Sora, all playing out nicely, i just slipped up on Aveian.
i think i had him shoot too many people in the beginning, i think he'll have to randomly shoot more people. its just i made two parts of him, and i never joined the two, because the main part was focusing on Foxxy x Sylven and Kit x Allenby, Aveian sort of lost his space to develope.
well maybe ch.5 is that space, he does change in that, so i think i just need morte random shootings now.
still really need those lyrics! i must know them, for i love the song!
i watched "Princess Mononoke" today, it was on my DVR, its a really great movie! and Billy Bob Thorton does great VO. i guess he just ACTS like an inbred hick.
well please give me your input on any flaws in my story.
or blue gender lyrics.
HAIL ZEON!!!!!
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