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Sunday, June 25, 2006


i love Flamers.
this a recent " review i got, i'll post it and my reply.

YOU SUCK! you have a horriable writing style!! your "jokes" arent even clost to
funny!! you make the queer and all the other people to strong! and you make the
original characters to weak! to put it simple you stuck at writing and should
never write a story again and if were lucky you will kill your self! so no one
ever has to read another one of you crappy ass storys!! now go fuck your self
you gay fag! and burn in hell!!

and my reply...

Hello flamer person, i would like you to thank you for your horribly misspelled hate mail, it makes me feel good that the people who dislike my story are so obviously morons. To write this, I used a magical device called “Spell Check,” so that my message would not sound like I failed 1st grade English. I would suggest you invest in such a device; it will probably make your insane rants seem slightly more credible.

Now my writing may be “horriable,” and my jokes may not be “clost,” to funny, I may even “stuck,” at writing, but at least I have the courtesy to not be so rude to random people.

Also there is an apostrophe in “We’re,” you said “were.” And I don’t understand where the “we’re,” comes in, are you suffering from multiple personality disorder?

Unfortunately for you random Flamer, I will not kill myself, I will write more of Absolute Power, because it is beloved by many, at I like to serve my Fans.

And my characters are stronger than the characters from G Gundam on purpose, because I hate that series and I only used it so that I could make several racially insensitive jokes, so I used my characters to beat the living crap out of the ones from the original series. And I would like to note that Allenby is the strongest pilot in the story, so that kinda ruins that little rant doesn’t it? In fact Domon, George and Argo are extremely strong too in my story, and every fight involving them is epic and hard-fought.

If you wanted to mock my treatment of the characters, you should note that I mock them relentlessly through out the story, so maybe you should look into that before you write poorly spelled reviews.

Also “gay fag,” is redundant, “gay,” or “fag,” would suffice, but both just shows a lack of speech control on your part. I also have a beautiful and sexy Girl Friend, who I met, may I add, in writing this story, I also have several female fans of this story, and of my romantic and poetic speaking on my Blog.

I would also like to point out this statement.

“to put it simple you stuck at writing and should
never write a story again and if were lucky you will kill your self! so no one
ever has to read another one of you crappy ass storys!!”

The correct way would be…

“To put it simple you suck at writing and should never write a story again, and if we’re lucky you will kill yourself, so no one ever has to read another one of your crappy ass stories!”

See the difference?

Also, who is the character you refer to as “The Queer?” I have no gay characters until ch.9, and I doubt any of them could be called strong. If you are referring to Kit, my main character, he is quite straight, in fact he is quite the letch, so “queer,” does not describe him. Well actually “queer,” means “strange,” not homosexual, as you used it, and if you were saying Kit, or any of my other characters are strange, you are correct, they all are, quite strange.

In conclusion, I would like to say you idiocy and poor grammar offended me more than your comments, which I actually found quite comical and amusing. I do not want fans of your mental quality to anyway, so I sincerely want to thank you for not reading my story, so I will no longer have to deal with your dumb ass.

Thank you once more for entertaining me.

Sincerely,

J. Daniel Moore.

Also known as, The Great Fox Boy.

If you’d like to read my blog, its JD Person at TheOtaku.com

I hope this was simple enough for you to understand, maybe if you come back in a year, after studying under a wise Tutor or Philosopher, you will under stand my story, Absolute Power.

I will leave you with your message to me, because your writing embarrasses and insults you more than I ever could. I did enjoy trying though, so thanks for the help.


so do you think i was right in my actions?


either way i'm really happy today, so worries.

i can't wait to write more of Absolute Power being as it gets such beautiful reviews -^_^-

quote:

more of me and my dad

Dad: most atheletes say the don't play soccer because it is too simple and a waste of their time.

Me: let them say that face to face with a soccer fan, -^_^-

-AP Comments-

Kit: wow, people love us!

Aveian: Idiots do hate us.

Foxxy: Fuck them, i know the real fans will love us, and morons like that are better to get away from anyway.

HAIL ZEON!!!!!

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