Friday, August 12, 2005

   My first Fanfic.
I havent gavei it a title yet, but this is just the first chapter. soooo..... its not gonna be as great as chapter 5 or something like that.....-.-zZ

"Edward Elric!" shouted the tall, dark-skinned man,"Ya mean Fullmetal Alchemist, Edward Elric!? Alchemist of the people!?" Every one in the store turned to see the prodigy in real life. He was short with blonde long, braided hair, black clothes and a red coat.
"YUP! I'm the Fullmetal Alchemist, Edward Elric!" the boy, named Ed, was smirking and bragging to all te people he could in the store.
Just then, a 7 foot armoured man came out of the Auto Parts aisle, and looked at ed.
"Edward..." the armour sighed, "Are you bragging, again!?" The armoured man sighed again and grabbed ed's arm and hauled him to the register.
"Alphonse!" ed called the armour, "I was just having fun! why did you drag me away?!" Alphonse glaired at edfor a second.
"....I..uh...needed help carrying the grocerys..." Al stated.
Ed staired at the grocerys, then back at Al.
"There is one bag, Al..." Edward had a "No duh" kinda look on his face. Al squeled a little as he looked at the single bag of grocerys.
Al slowly turned his head back at ed. "Well i maybe armour but id still like help!" Al cried.
Ed looked at him with pity and decided that he might as well carry the single grocery bag.
On their way out of the store, they noticed a girl on the other side of the street. she was alone and she looked kind of scared.
Al looked at her, then at Ed. "Should we see if she needs help?" Al questioned.
Ed looked up at the hulking armour. "I guess." Ed put his habds on his waist,"besides, I want to keep my name of Alchmist of the People!" Ed grinned.
Alphonse and Edward ran Across the street to meet up with the girl. when the were on the other side of the street, they noticed she was crying.
"What happened!?" Al gasped,"Why are you crying?!"
The girl kept her face in her arms, "my family left me for death!" She started crying harder.
Edward started whlking to the left side of her. "it'll be alright." he comforted "Now, why dont you tell us what happened."
The girl looked up at Ed and Al. "okay. I will"
Just then , when Al looked at Ed, He noticed something that suprized him. Edward had the same conforting look in his eyes as thier mother, who passed away.

please tell me if i should spend some time on another chapter. I dont want to continue a story noone likes. ^^'
-IZU
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