Sunday, April 22, 2007

My Naruto Fanfic- .:C.H.I.T.O.S.E:. part 3
“K-Kakashi-Sensei!!” Naruto puffed as he staggered through the door.

“Ah! Naruto,” Kakashi exclaimed. “Take Kuma here over to Ichiraku’s and get her some ramen.”

“WHAT?!?!” Naruto yelled angrily. “Why me?! That girl wants to kill me!!”

“Well, she’s got a good reason to” And so do I.

“Fine…” Naruto grumbled. “Let’s go.”


Naruto was fine with getting ramen, but with this freak?! She protested herself that someone else could take her there, but Kakashi insisted on Naruto taking her. Kakashi was ever so curious on who ‘the ninja’ would be. Like the Hokage said: It’s someone you wouldn’t expect. In Kakashi’s mind, maybe it was Naruto. And it had better be a good thing that was in store for that ninja.

As they headed on their way to Ichiraku’s, Naruto sensed that someone was close by. He quickly turned around with his guard up. Chitose stared at Naruto wondering what the retard would do next.

“What are you—“

“Shhhh!!!” Naruto flicked a throwing star at some bushes. Before it even got close, a handful of sand shot at it, knocking it to the ground. “Aw, CRAP!” He stepped back a little. “It better not be Gaara!”

“Gaara?” Suddenly a huge blast of sand came crashing through the bush. Gaara walked out of the bushes toward Chitose and Naruto.

“Uzumaki Naruto,” Gaara spoke in his scary, low voice he always spoke in. Chitose scanned the odd ninja before her. He had reddish, orangish hair and the symbol for love tattooed on his forehead. He had no eyebrows and light blue eyes with black lining around them making them pop out like they were searching your soul or something creepy like that. From what she saw, he looked like he was always angry. Chitose walked over to him and glared at him right in the face.

“Kuma,” she said, sticking out her hand. Gaara gave her an annoyed, ‘No-thanks’ look so she put her hand down. “What’s your name again?” Gaara stared at her for a moment.

“Gaara,” he said. “Gaara of the Sand.” Chitose’s heart skipped a beat. Her hands quivered. Gaara… of the Sand. She lifted her fist as she took a step back and swung it at Gaara. The sand blocked it and threw it back.

“DANG YOU!!” Chitose yelled. She tried to punch Gaara again. And again, the sand blocked her fist and threw it back. She flicked out a kunai and tried to stab him with it. The sand stopped it again, but this time it took hold of her arm and threw her against a tree. Blood trickled down Chitose’s cheek. She struggled to stand up. She glared at the sand ninja.

“You deserve to DIE!!!” Chitose picked up her kunai and threw it at Gaara. The sand shot it back at her.

“That’s enough,” Gaara said, turning around. “I guess following you was a waste of time.” Chitose fell to her knees in pain from being smacked at a tree.

“I-I’ll… I’ll kill you…” she groaned while sputtering blood. Gaara was already gone. While he was walking he stopped and thought… Who was that Kuma girl? Maybe she was…rrgh! I don’t know… He thought a while more and soon red started to rise to his cheeks. He covered his face in embarrassment.

Once Naruto and Chitose got to Ichiraku’s, Naruto noticed someone walking by.

“Hi-Hinata?!” Hinata spun around.

“Ah? Oh!—Hi N-Naruto-kun.” Hinata’s face was all red. So was Naruto’s.

“Uh, you don’t have to say kun.”

“Oh! Sorry N-N-N-Naruto.”

“Y-you want some ramen? I mean—do you want to get some ramen… with me?

“Mm.” Hinata nodded. Chitose sighed and rolled her eyes.

“I’ll see ya lovebirds later!” She walked over to the bar, ordered some oriental ramen, and sat on a corner stool.

After Hinata and Naruto ordered their ramen Hinata suggested they sit in the shade of the forest trees. (probably because it was kind of hot that day.) Naruto was nice and said okay. Hinata was flushed while they ate, twiddling her chopsticks that she had in her fingers that she would usually twiddle instead. Everyone knew that Hinata was totally crushing on Naruto. It wasn’t that hard to miss. So there they were, sitting on tree stumps, eating ramen. Naruto glanced over at Hinata. She was just sitting quietly on a stump and eating her ramen… cutely.

“Wha?!” She shrieked. Naruto was staring right at her.

“Huh? OH! Sorry.” They both blushed and went back to eating their ramen. Suddenly Hinata’s grasp on her bowl loosened.

“Ah? Ah—AAH!!” Hinata’s bowl of ramen slipped out of her hand and started to fall. Naruto, with his ninja–like reflexes, tried to catch the bowl but only his fingertips touched it. Hinata tried to catch it, too, but she also missed. The ramen fell with an echoing splat on the dirt covered ground.

“Hi-Hi-H-inata?!” They were one inch apart. Elbow to elbow, cheek to cheek. At first, Naruto thought to pull away, quickly, but instead he slowly wrapped his hand around hers. He straightened up and so did Hinata, blushing redder as she did. Naruto smiled.


well theres three. there will be a lot more and u've probably figured it out that its mostly about gaara n chitose. i just like the blood... ^^ ok... thanx for reading! check back soon for part 4!!!!!

-jinimae01 ♥
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