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Wednesday, May 19, 2004


   Angel: Lost Memories (Part 1)
Iya Ein! It's finally up! Yes! Here is the first part of my manga script!

Mia: Look it's raining.
Richi: Yeah, so?
Mia: The rain...it washes and purifies our souls...bit by bit...little by little. So maybe, where it rains a lot, people have the purist souls.
Richi: Where'd that come from?
Mia: I dunno...I probably read it somewhere. I guess I'm in one of my moods...
Richi: You've been acting really weird lately, Mia.
Mia: Hmm...yeah I guess...
Lyn: Hey guys!
Mia: Hey Lyn, hey Todd.
Todd: What's for lunch? Mom made us grilled cheese.
Mia: Take out. Dad had to work late at the hospital and Grandma wasn't feeling good last night. So I'm stuck with leftovers. What about you Richi?
Richi: Meatball sub.
Lyn: Lucky. I'll trade you my pudding for your cookies Mia.
Mia: Sure! (thinking)"When he looks like that something's got to be wrong." Richi you ok?
Richi: My mom isn't doing too well again.
Lyn: Oh no! Did I get her sick?! I had that cold a couple of weeks ago.
Richi: No I don't think so...
Todd: Well she gave birth to you right?
Richi: Umm...yeah...?
Todd: And she's put up with you for fourteen years.
Mia: Yeah! She'll pull through!
(in front of school/still raining)
Mia: Oh great. Where is he?
Richi: Why is he always late on rainy days?
Todd: Look! There he is.
Lyn: Yay! I was beginning to get worried.
Mia: That's just because you like him.
Todd: She loves him. Not like. Right sis?
Mia: I wouldn't say "love". Maybe seriously like.
Lyn: No comment.
(van pulls up/door opens)
Chris: Hey guys. Sorry I'm late.
Lyn: Oh Chris! I thought you'd never come! But I knew you would come for me!
Chris: Umm...yeah...
Mia: I stand corrected.
Angel: Lost Memories Part 1-End

Yeah so that's the first part. I'd like some comments on it please. But now I have to go get ready for school. See you sapce cowboy...

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