Monday, January 29, 2007

   Part 1

now this is a work in progress so bear with me as i give you part 1 of a story i going to write,i having a hard time with coming up with a name,so if you think of one tell me....it's about a man who wakes up in a hospital and has no idead where he is,or who is is for that matter,but then weird stuff starts to happen,so now i give you part 1..... Beep....beep....beep...."What the hell is that?!?"...I started to come to..."Ahhhh...",That's all I could think, the pain in my head was killing me. I reached up to rub my eyes, as I did I realized my head was bandged, and not just my forehead, but my whole head, all that was exsposed were my eyes.Blurry,everything was blurry, I could tell the lights were on, but I couldn't make out where I was. I blinked my eyes repeatedly as I sat up. Then everything became clear. It looked like a hospital room, everything was white, all that was in the room besides my bed and the heart monitor, was a small food tray on one of those tables with wheels, and in the corner was old rusty heater , but the pipe wasn't connected, so there was no reason for it to be there.There was also a window, but it was painted black, it looked like someone had just thrwn a can of paint on there. "Can I get up?" was my main thought at the moment, I could of cared less about how the room was decorated. As i pulled the stained covers off of me, i saw that i was wearing nothing but a hospital gown and socks, "What happened to me?" I couldn't remember a thing, my name,where I was or anything, all I could remember was that it was the year 2012 and that...AHHHHHHH.....it hurt to try and remember anything. I'll worry about everything else later,but for now I have to find out where I am and why i'm here...,I placed my feet on the cold tile floor and liftted myself up, which was hard by the way. I held my breath and took a step....one....two....floorOW,i hit the ground so hard I thought my head would pop off. I picked myself up using the bed and started to walk again, this timew suceeding. I reached for the door...turned the knob....Damn!...locked........No...I turned a bit harder, I took a sigh of relief,it was just old and rusty, just about like everything else around here. I stepped out into the cold, dark hallway, most of the lights were on, but dim, and the ones that were not on just flickered. Some of the floor tiles were missing and some cracked. There was an over turned wheelchair in the far end of the hall and a gurney in the middle.Moaning......that awful moaning...."Where is that coming from?"I thought. I walked to the nearest open door and walked in.Inside was a room just like mine...also there was a man in the bed with bandages covering his head...i walked over and looking down,i hoped that i didn't look this helpless,there was an awful smell, so bad i wanted to vomit, i reached up to cover my mouth, but there was no use,my mouth was bandaged too....so i just placed my hand on his shoulder, then too fast for me realize, he reached up and grabbed my wrist, so hard I thought he'd scweeze it off....his hand turned from a pale yellow colr to a nasty green and orangr color.His head was moving under the bandages like it was changing....the bandages started to rip,and what stared back at me was so horrible all I colud do was scream....... End of part 1 Be looking for Part 2 coming soon..... -Lynn

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