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Thursday, February 7, 2008
story(wanring this is probably the most dark thing I ever written)
The most dark thing I have ever written oh well I am sticking to it!
Chapter one
It was a normal Sunday morning in December. Jeffery went out to grab the paper. The asphalt was cold on his feet. He looked at the headlines. Apparently someone from this part of town was killed. This did not come as a surprise to him.
For as long as he could remember this town has been separated to two sides. One side was for the richer high classed folks. Then the middle to lower classed folks like Jeff. The high class students were allowed to do anything. The low classed can’t even try out for sports. They would be punished. Why has the police kept a blind eye to this this you may ask they think that the low classed people were responsible for everything.
So lately some low classed people have been doing ‘forbidden’ things. Going to ‘sacred’ places. So the high class kids are starting to make a statement of the low class.
Jeffery brings in the paper his older brother Mathew who Jeff admires and would die for is sitting there. “another killed huh?” he said
“Yup,”
“Dang it this isn’t right, someone should do something!”
“What can we do? Nothing”
“Or can we?” behind that long blond shaggy bed head hair he saw a look of interest he rarely sees. “What do you mean?” Jeff asks
“What I mean is that we could actually fight back!” he said with a lust in his eyes.
“Oh no what good would that do??’ Jeff asks.
“Aww don’t wuss out on me Jeff,” he pauses then gets up and put his hand on Jeff’s shoulder, “Just think… these guys were murdered by the same person or group. We can at least show that we are not afraid and make them think twice about coming here and terrorizing us!”
“Yeah, but what happens if they out power us which they will!”
“I have a few… friends who will join us a…” Mathew is interrupted.
“wow a small group.” Jeff says sarcastically.
“AND! There is a way of justice that is a shoo-in!” Jeff shoves the hand off him.
“Shut up! I am not going to be apart of this suicide mission your thinking of doing! You should think twice about this… this whatever you’re going to do!” Jeff settles down. “Now excuse me I am going to meet Maria at the park. Later!” Jeff walks out when Mathew stops him. “By the end of the day your going to beg me for info of my ‘suicide mission’. Oh and tell your girlfriend I said hi!” Jeff walks out.
“Jeff walks to the park he notices a red El Camino. “huh? I don’t usually see one of these in such nice condition in this…” He freezes. “Riches are in the area!” He shuts up and hides behind a tree. His heart is pounding really hard really fast. Then he realizes Maria may be in the park. So he runs past the jungle gyms, swings, slides, and monkey bars he sees her… and riches. Then one of them pulls out a knife the following fifteen seconds are the longest in his life the sight of her being shoved around and the worst with the knife makes him fall on his knees.
They walk past him. One of them with blood on his pants gives him such a horrible look of success. Jeff mutters, “you’ll pay for…th… this!” He runs to her and checks if she’s alive, she was thank god she was alive. She said but a few words , “love you,” She falls unconscious. He calls 911. At the hospital he sees her in the bed. It pains him to see her like that. He walks out. He sees his brother , “Alright I’ll fallow you on this thing.”
“alright lets go,” They walk out the hospital.
Even though I walk
through the valley of the shadow of death,
I will fear no evil,
for you are with me;
your rod and your staff,
they comfort me.
Psalm 23:4
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