Wednesday, July 20, 2005

   Chapter34:Demonvs Kentaio

Hello ieveryone this is Akayos Fangirl updating for Akayo/kaisen..he got into a fight today and it was because he was defending me if you want full details just pm on akayos account or pm on Gaia i am Tainaa on there well here is the story.

Demon arises from the rubble

Kentaio:haaaaaaaaaaaaa if i have to tejin i will break every bone in your body if thats will get you to come back.

Demon:who the hell is Tejin..people better stop calling me that!

kentaio:GRRRRR well make me*grins*

Demon:lets go then ...demon appears behind Kentaio and tries to kick him.Kentaio turns and catches his foot and spins him around sending him soaring.

Demon:laughs

Kentaio:your toying with me...mistake!!!!!

Kentaio appears infront of him and blast him,Demon flys higher into the air with cuts and bruises over my body.

Demon:ahhhhhhh,falls down to the ground and hits hard

Kentaio:appears and throws multiple punches to his face..haaaaaaa,Demon takes multiple hits as his face starts bleeding,Kentaio picks him up by his neck and lets him drop kicking him in his neck as he crashes into the ground hard.

Kentaio:i told you im not playing.

Demon stands up coughing up blood.

Kentaio:haaaaaaaaaaa i wont let you take Tejins body he still has people who love him Demon so if that means i have to harm Tejin then i will.

Demon:so that is the boys name whos body im using thats why i keep being called that well maybe that wouldve hurt tejin and that attack even hurt me but .....that is no where near enough to beat me.

Lienan running to the scene:hey that feels like Kentaio's power!I gotta hurry

Demon:grahhhh,eyes start glowing red and he shoots a beam at kentaio from hs eyes

Kentaio:dont even think ABOUT .....

Demon quickly appeas behind him and grabs him and the beam hits and goes threw them both!

Kentaio:your are a merciless fighter demon,you new i would dodge so you let it hit you too!as Kentaio coughs up blood.

Demon:your right about me being merciless and my own attacks dont hurt me..fool!

Kentaio leans over:i cant afford to lose this battle

Demon:you wont lose your gonna die in this battle.
evil grin

Demon picks Kentaio up and and brutally beats him with his fist as Kentaio screams.

Demon:i commend you on this fight kentaio you actually hurt me with your atack but not that bad .

Kentaio almost out cold:im sorry friends i tried to save him but he is too strong Toklem its up to you.

Lienan:KENTAIO!!!!..GRRRRRRRR HEAVES SWORDS!!!!!!!

explosion appears everywhere under Demon and Kentaio is freed...she grabs kentaioo and dashes back to the castle.

Demon:you insulent little ...grrrrrrrr YOU WILL NOT GET AWAY.he appears infront of her.

Lienan:..Tejin is that you .

Kentaio:no lienan he isnt himself run.

Demon:there will be no escape you attack me...now you d.i.e ahhhhhhhhh

Kentaio:what is wrong with him

Demon/Tejin:Lioenan please get outta here he has control over my body and i cant hold him much longer please!

Lienan with Tears:but Tejin

Demon/Tejin:ina demonic voice GO AWAY!!!!! AHHHHHHHHH..this lil brat is holding me back

Kentaio:lets go lienan he is trying to buy us time.

Lienan:.....turns head and runs away holding Kenataio.

Demon talking top Tejin in his mind:you stupid brat you actually can hold me back...Tejin:i wont letyou harm my friends..your a devil and dont worry i have a way to kill you you will see soon enough.

Demon regains control but Lienan and Kentaio are long gone.

Demon teleports to where sinsai is.

Lienan returns to the castle and Kentaio is out cold.

Takako:what happened?

Katema:sis where is he?Is he alive?

Lienan:he is alive but he is not himself..the full demon inside him is awaken and he is in complete control.

Takako:oh no!

Toklem:so tejin couldnt control thats okay im gonna finish my training then i will bring him back.

Katema:eyes tear up.

Lienan:im sorry sis but it would be best if you just forgot about him i dont think he can change back.

Jinta:....like i told you once a demon always a demon.

Katema:THIS IS YOUR FAULT FATHER!

Katema:i must go tell his mother and father.

I hope you all like this chapter and what do you think akayo is gonna do when he finds what has become of his son .

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Tuesday, July 19, 2005

Chapter33:D Tejin the real evil awakens

Devil Tejin:so you want to see my real power.

Sinsai:yes because i think you may have a potential opponent..Dark toklem when i sensed his power it was stronger then yours thats how i know you were hidfing it.

D Tejin:ok if thatys what you want but i tell you now your generaals arew going to die.

General leader:yeah right!

D tejin:here goes!*evil grin*

red aura goes around Tejin as his eyes turn blood red and his hair turns red.His wings return to his back and his hair covers oneof his eyes and he looks up with fangs.

General:he looks meaner in his last form.

Devil Tejin:In a deep evil voice that sounds like a devil:THIS IS MY REAL FORM!

Sinsai:impressive now Tejin kill them.

Devil Tejin:lets gety something staright do i look like Tejin to you?!That isnt my name,my name is the name that i have long forgotten but you can call me ..DEMON!

Sinsai:ok Demon kill them

Demon smiles:you got it...he gets into his fighting stance.

Generals:does this boy thank he can beat us?

Demon appears infront of him and punches his fist right threw his eye!

General screaming:ahhhhhhh oh god help me!!!!!

Demon:you claim to be a demon but you call for god..you are not worthy...takes his fist out of his face and blows him up

Sinsai in shock:Tejin you just killed the strongest general easy

Demon:my name is demon!

Sinsai:yes please forgive me i see your power you dont have to fight anymore.

Demon:no you have got it mistaken..they will die!

Generals in shock

Demon:they dare to approach the demon god and not prove themselves there will be no escape,*evil grin*

Generals try to run

Demon:cowards!!*summons a sword*

and says DEATH BY WIND and it doesnt look like he moves and all of them dropped to there knees and fall apart.

Demon:pathetic

Sinsai:thats what i wanted to see now your training shall begin.

Kentaio appears

Kentaio:oh no!

demon looks at him

Kentaio:you must leave from here do you miss Katema!

Demon holds his head:ka.te.ma!

Kentaio:yes she misses you,dont side with this bastard!

Sinsai:Demon he killed Katema!

Demon:what?!

Kentaio:he is lying!

Demon:eyes start glowing.

Jinta:come toklem your stronger then this

Toklem speed keeps growing as he attempts to hit Jinta

Takako watches silently as Lienan trains and Katema looks out of the window thinking about tejin.

Demon:you killed Katema!

Kentaio:your blinding b rage and fury,i guess the only is for us to fight!

Demon smirks..you wont win.

Kentaio:you underestimate..if i am not mistaken arent you demon?!

Demon:....you your the one who avtually wounded me back then..i fought you years ago...you will die for what you did to me back then.

Kentaio:then lets go but i warn you im much stronger./..Kentaio powers up and charges and swings

Demon catches his punch..

Kenatio:what the?!

Demon:this body that im using is stronger then the last body i had..laughs demonicly

Kentaio thinking:im gonna have to fight with everything i have.He kicks demon in his face and watches him crash into a mountain.

Sinsai:once your threw playing with him demon you know where to find me...disappears.

Toklem senses:WHAT IS THAT!..Its Tejin...i gotta go Jinta.

Jinta:you musnt leave your training isnt finish yet.

Toklem:grrrrrrrr

Lienan:dont worry Toklem i will go.

Takako stay here and watch Katema

Takako:you got it

Katema:sis please bring Tejin back

Lienan:you got it.

Lienan dashes out of the castle.

Jinta thinking:if he was able to withstand that attack i gave him then he really is dangerous i must train toklem harder


I ghope you all ike this chapter and Tejin isnt himself anymore so who knows what will happen i will ttyl bye byehugs and kisses to you all

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Monday, July 18, 2005

chapter32:Devil Tejins devotion

Sinsai:well if your ready come with me .

D Tejin:well lead the way

Kentaio out searching for tejin

Kentaio:i hope he doesnt fall into the wrong persons hands because if he does and he learns to harness that destructive power in his evil form we are all gonna be in serious trouble.

Over to Jinta

Jinta:hey there Toklem are you ready?

Toklem:yeah im ready.

Lienan:so you plan on making Toklem be Te angels warrior?!

Jinta:yes

Lienan:so did you ever think about if Tejin is still alive?If he is what makes you think he wont come back for Katema?

Jinta:i dont care if he does or if he doesnt

Lienan:Father!,you underestimate the greatest evil there is that lies within that boy but its okay you will learn soon enough seeing as how the evil in him loves Katema too.

Jinta:yeah yeah come toklem.

Auska:i dont beleve you Jinta!

Jinta:i am doing this to protect my daughters

Auska:if this is what you call protecting them then they were better off staying away from here the only thing you have done was cost them pain and anger!

Jinta:just stay out of this...

Auska:i am there mother how do you expect me to just sit downmn and look at them while they feel like this.

Jinta and toklem walk away.

Over to sinsai.

Sinsai:now what puzzels me is ,Tejin is this your full evil form

D Tejin:why do you ask that *evil grin*

Sinsai:because i sense more power in you then what this evil form shows.

D TejinL:well if you must know no it isnt i can power up even more if i had too.

Sinsai:GREAT!...now here is the plan if you lead my army then katema is all yours!

D Tejin:i dont need help from your army because i am a army myself!

Sinsai:i like that!well lets see you take on my four generals and if you can beat them then i wont let them accompany you.

D tejin:fine!,but its there funeral lol.

General 1:you talk big for a little boy!

D Tejin:well if you feel that way why dont you come shut me up matterfact not one on one i will take you all on.

Generals:fine!

D tejin gets into his fighter stance.

Kentaio:what power is that ,that im sensing!oh no its too late maybe i can bring him back.

Toklem:so let me get this straight you wont me to lead your army!

Jinta:thats right i will teacjh you everything i know then you will fight the bad side.

Takako:.......

Toklem:fine but afterwards just know that i will avenge Tejin!

Jinta:fine i wont mind dieing afterwards as long as my family is safe.Now i wanna show you hhow to harness your full power and become the legendary dark angel.

Toklem:im ready!

Katema in her room.

Auska:im sorry my dear im sure he is still alive,

Katema:why does bad things always happent to him mom he doesnt deserve any of this if you knew the life he went threw then you would understand.

Auska:i think i understand perfectly he had a hard life and then when you two got together things just seem to be better for him and you^^ dont worry he will come back

Katema:i hope your right.

Sensai:show me what you can do Tejin bring the real devil out.

Tejins eyes light up red.

Kentaio:i must get there and stop Tejin

i hope you all like this chapter sorry i have been gone for a while but i will ttyl bye bye ^^hugs and kisses to you all and i will try to get on alot more often

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Wednesday, July 13, 2005

   hello

hey everyone i will update the story tomorrow i will ttyl bye bye

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Friday, July 8, 2005

   Chapter31:Toklems Rage

Toklem wakes up:what was that energy i just felt!Why can i not sense tejin!

Lienan ,kentaio,and Takako wake up.

They all meet in the halls.

Toklem with scared look:do any of you sense Tejin:

The all shake there heads no.

Toklem runs into the main hall where everyone is and he sees Katema crying on her mother.

Toklem:what happened!

Jinta:it is none of your concern go back to your room!

Toklem:where is Tejin,Where is my little cousin!

Auska:Jinta has killed him!

Lienan:father this better not be true he was a little 13 year old boy!

Kentaio:you havent changed at all

Takako:how could you and you knocked us out so we couldnt interfere!She looks over at Toklem as his eyes start turning red!

Toklem with tears coming out of his glowing red eyes.

Toklem:you killed my little cousin,i will have revenge for him grrrrrrrrrrr!

Jinta in shock:.....YOUR THE DARK ANGEL!,this is perfect i have someone to lead my army!

Katema:Toklem no calm down.

Kentaio:this isnt good!

Guards:what in the world is happening to him.

Toklem long straight black hair turns into a wild hairstyle and his eyes turn red.He grows claws and fangs and bolts of lighting surge around his body and the smoke disappears!

Jinta:i guess i will have to deal with another one but i wont kill you i need you.

Dark Toklem:you talk as if im the same person!

Takako:toklem please calm down.

Dark Toklem:dont worry i am full control of this form but he still will pay for what he did to Tejin!He has gone threw too many hardships and then someone like him comes and takes his life INFRONT OF HIS OWN DAUGHTER AND SOILDERS!,WHERE IS THE HONOR IN THAT!I wont hurt anyone else but he will suffer until i dont have any power left and then he will die!

Over To tejin.

Tejin dreaming:i couldnt beat him to save Katema!Maybe i really am stupid and worthless.Maybe he can do it if i call him out maybe Devil Tejin can save her.

Tejin eyes open but he cant move and he sees Sinsai above him.

Sinsai:i told you i would have yopu didnt i!

Tejin:its you *tejins looks surprised*Get away from me i hate you too.

Sinsai:good i want you to hate because it will make your power much greater after im done with you.

Sinsai reaches his hands towards Tejin head.

Tejin:no dont touch me!!!!!NO,NO,NOOOOOO

Sinsai grabs Tejins head and starts to brainwash him saying:they never liked you,Where were your friends when you were fighting jinta,how come you get hurt the worst in your battle and your own cousin Toklem almost let you die ,but i wouldnt release your demon side and let me train you then you will have your revenge.

Tejin screams out in pain:ahhhhhhhhhh and ghis transformation is forced out of him.

Devil tejin stands up and says:I WILL HAVE MY REVENGE ON THEM ALL!!!

Sinsai:has a sinister smile and they disapear.

Over to Toklem and the others.

Dark toklem:YOUR GONNA DIE!!!!!

Jinta:come at me you will get the same thing your dead cousin got!

Dark Toklem charges at lightspeed and hits Jinta twenty times and none of the others could follow him.

Jinta:your fast ,very fast but you lack strength,i can teach you how to acquire it.But first you must learn some respect.Jinta runs and not even dark Toklem can see him and he hits Toklem in his stomach sending him to his knees in terrible pain.

Dark Toklem:ugh!

Takako:Toklem!!!!!!

Jinta:so i take it that is your girlfriend!well lets makes this quicker if you dont fight for me then i will kill her!!!!!

Dark Toklem:WHAT!!!!!

Lienan:FATHER WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS?!

Kentaio:i can tell you why because he will do anything to win the war against sinsai,so he will do anything possible he hasnt changed at all!!!!!

Jinta grabs Takako by her neck

Jinta:so what will it be your devotion for her death or your fight with me and she dies.

Dark Toklem:WAIT,wait ok please dont hurt her i will fight for you.

Takako:no baby fight him!

Dark Toklem:i dont know if i could when so i wont put oyur life on the line.

Katema:Father i hate you!!!!! she runs into her room.

Jinta:yes my daughter i know but i do this for my family and the people of this city!Toklem your training begins tomorrow.

Asuka:lienan go check on your sister.

Lienan:yes mother.

Jinta unhands takako.

Dark Toklem:grrrrrrrr ahhhhhhhhhh Jinta you will die soon!

Takako:calm down toklem *sad look*

Kentaio:i will search for Tejin he night not be dead but i fear something that is far greater than death.

Sinsai:are you ready to begin?

Devil Tejin:I WAS BORN THAT WAY!

i hope you all like this chapter Devil tejin and dark Toklem are soon gonna have to fight and sinsai has brainwashed Tejin so we will have to see what happens well i will ttyl have a good day hugs and kisses

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Thursday, July 7, 2005

Chapter30:Tejins great Lost!

Tejin:hey have i done something to affend you sir?

King jinta:YES YOU HAVE!

Katema:DADDY WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT!

Queen Asuka:Jinta what are you talking about.

Jinta:i shall explain.My daughter will not be allowed to date a half demon nor be alone in the same room with her.He is prophesized to kill us all therefor you must leave,Besides a demon was the one who destroyed our castle the first time!

Tejin:WHAT! but i would never hurt katema! I love her!

Jinta:say what you say is a LIE!Do you have full control over your demon nature

Tejin:no but im almost there but katema is the one who helps me with it ^^ so it wouldnt be smart to split us p.

Jinta:YOU SMILE AS IF I WERE JOKING BUT THIS ISNT A GAME GET HIM OUTTA HERE GUARDS!

Katema:Daddy you cant!

Guards grab Tejin and drag him out of the castle.

Tejin:hey what are you doing get your paws off of me!!!!

Thety drag him out of the castle.

Katema:mom say something

Asuka:Jinta release that boy!Guards release

Jinta:they only take orders from there king.

Tejin:NOOOOOOOO PLEASE I LOVE HER..KATEMA,KATEMA

Katema:TEJIN!!!!

the guards drag him out of the castle

Tejin:KATEMA!!!!!,GRRRRRRRRRRR and in a high pitch scream Tejin knocks all the guards off of him yahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Jinta:WHAT THE!

tejin breaks the castle doors down!

Tejin:so your just like all the others.For some reason i thought we would actually be able to relax here and be amongst real friends but i was wrong once again.You dont like me because of what i am well i happen to like what i am i can protect the ones i love and care about especially Katema and you think im gonna let you take her away from methen youve got another thing coming!!!!!!!!I might be goofy and kinda stupid but there is one thing that i am not,and thats a COWARD!

Jinta:i commend your braveness but i cannot allow it!

Tejin:well wheather you like it or not im coming to get Katema even if i have to go threw the king.

Katema:NO TEJIN DONT FIGHT HIM I WILL COME WITH YOU WILLINGLY I DONT WANT TO STAY HERE EITHER.

tejin:see she loves me i ont want to fight but i will if have too.

Asuka:yes go with him ^^

Jinta:you will sit and be quiet!

Tejin:for a father who hasnt been around katemas whole life you sure do give alot of orders.

Jinta:ENOUGH YOU FOOL!I WILL ESCORT YOU OUT MYSELF!

Tejin:over my dead body haaaaaaaaaaaa

tejin powers up to his full half demon alf human power!

Jinta:your not strong enough and dead it shall become!!!!!grrrrrrrr HAAAAAAAAAAAA.

jinta powers up shaking the whole castle.

Tejin:i cant lose KITOSA!!!!!!

TEJIN MOVES INTO HIS FIGHTING STANCE.

Jinta;come at me

tejin charges and attempts to sweep Jinta jumps over but Tejin flips up with his hand and kicks the king in his face!

Guards:he actually hit him!

asuka:.......

Katema:no!!!!

Jinta:your good kid but your no where near strong enough.He grabs tejins neck.

Tejin:let go of me

Jinta:now you shall learn your place demonchild he rapidly punches tejin in the stomach.

tejin begins to cough up bllod and lose conciusnous.

Katema:daddy stop it!!!!!!!!!

tejin grabs Jinta arms and his eyes begin to blink red

Jinta:just as i thought his real nature how dare you show those eyes to me grrrrrrr tosses tejin in the air and powers up and shoots his mighteiest blast at him

Tejin:Katema..im...s.o.r.r.y the blast hits him sending tejin screaming and flying back faster then a meteor ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Katema:Tejin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

She attempts to run out of the castle but her father steps infront of her

Jinta:im sorry

Katema crying:nooooooooooo!!!

tejin flying bach:ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh he flys about 500 miles back and crahses into the ground and immediately unconcious covered in blood.

Sinsai appears beside:do you see how they treat you tejin.

Toklem and the other begn to wake up.

I hope you all like this chapter and what do you think Toklem is gonna do when he finds out what happened to his little cousin and how will Katema handel thios situation well i hope you all like i will ttyl bye bye hugs and kisses to all ^^

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Wednesday, July 6, 2005

Chapter29:Kentaio's Past

well remeber that Devil tejin defeated shadow then sinsai came down and tried to provoke Devil Tejin to attack him but Kentaio transported them away from there and Tejin turned back now they all want to know who Kentaio is and Toklem has a evil side too now it continues.

Lienan:so who exactly are you?

Kentaio:well i am just a person who happened to stop by.

Lienan:where have i seen you before?

Kentaio:well i use to train under your father and he got md when i disobeyed his orders and he kicked me out of town.

Lienan:yes i remeber you now you used to be so little but you have grown alot.

Kentaio:yes you have grown into a stunning beauty yourself.

Lienan:blushes

Kentaio:so where are you headed?

Lienan:we have to go to my fathers astle and speak with him we have been on a long and hard journey.

Kentaio:hey is that girl your sister?because if so then i know the prophecy and it states that the second daughter of the king of angel,The half demon who is uncontroled,and the dark angel will be the key of destruction.

Lienan:that is her ^^

Kentaio:she looks like her mother.^^okay well i have decided i will acompany you on journey.

Tejin:cool a new friend!^^

Tensin wakes up:what the, where am i?

Tejin:uncle Tensin whats sup^^

Toklem:hey there uncle^^

tensin:hey there yout two where am i?

Lienan:you were being controled by sinsai.

Tensin:yes i remeber i was heading over to Akayos house and i was attacked from behind and nw im here.I gotta get back to inform your parents hey remeber you can do it.

Tensin disappears.

Katema:well i got my bluehaired boy back so im happy.

Takako:toklem i was worried when i thought you were hurt.

Toklem:i thought you were dead and my anger was growing with rage id ont know what i would do without you.

Takako:^^*blushes*

Tejin:Takako and Toklem sitting in the tree k.i.s.s.i.n.g......BOOM!

Toklem kicks tejin in his head ...stupid!

Tejin with tears:you didnt have to kick me Toklem i was just playing.

They all laugh at Tejin.

Katema:awwww puts hand on Tejins head and heals^^

Tejin:^^ thank you baby.

Katema:your welcome hugs Tejin and her cheeks rubs up against his

Tejin:face turns red and he melts like putty!

Katema:giggels.

Lienan:well the castle isnt that far away so lets hurry and get there.

They walk and talk for about a hour and then Tejin screams out

tejin:there it is!!!!!!!!!!!

Katema:whoa thats big!

Toklem:huge

Takako:amazing

Kentaio:just as i remeber it

Lienan:home sweet home.

they walk up to the castle doors and see guards.

guards:welcome home princess Lienan and finally we get to meet princess Katema!hello there ^^

Katema:hi

Guards:your beautiful just like your mother and sister^^

Katema:thank you.

Guards:OMG kentaio you have come back to us welcome.

kentaio:thank you ^^

they walk in.

Queen auska:OMG there here Jinta come quick yur daughter are here and Kenaio is with them!

Lienan:hey there mom

Katema:mom?

Queen auska:OMG its my baby girl holds out her arms

katema:MOM!!!! Runs over and hugs her tight as she kisses all over her.

Queen auska:its so good to see you.

Jinta:hello my two daughters seems like you made i back ^^

Katema:Daddy! runs over to him

Jinta:there is the babygirl *hugs her*.how i have misses you.Kentaio your back i see i must thank you for helping my daughters^^

kentaio:its nothing ^^

Queen asuka:so who are they are they the phrophsized ones?

Lienan:yes thats them.

Katema:mom well i would like to introduce them.This one is Toklem

Toklem:hello maam ^^

Queen asuka:hello there^^

Lienan:you already know Takako mom

Queen asuka:welcome back Takako

Takako:thank you.

Katema:and he is special to me he is my boyfriend mom and dad

Queen Asuka:boyfriend you say well come up here so i can have a look.

Tejin:ok ^^

he walks up close to her.

Queen Asuka:well arent you cute^^

tejin:blushes thank you.

Jinta:^^ take the others to the chambers to get cleaned up but i would like to have a word with tejin and Katema.

Guards show Toklem to his room and while his back is turned they knock him out and do the same to the others(lienan,and kenataio)

Jinta:THIS WILL NOT HAPPEN IM SORRY KATEMA!YOUR ARE NOT ALLOWED TO TRAVEL WITH THIS HALF DEMON HE IS NOT WELCOME HERE!

Queen Asuka:WHAT?!

Katema:huh...but daddy!

Tejin:WHY?,Have i affendedd you in any way?


wait to see what happens in the next chapter it seems like jinta is not as nice as he seems i hope you like this chaper well i will ttyl bye bye

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Tuesday, July 5, 2005

   hey there

SHE IS CUTE! I LIKE ANIME GIRLS WITH BLUE HAIR^^

wassup everyone i will continue the story tomorrow just still trying to readd friends thats all ^^well how is everyones day going i am still Akayo so you all can still call me that

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Sunday, July 3, 2005

I am The demon ninja who has returned

hello wassup people if you look deep down inside yourselves you know how i am lol

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