Monday, September 19, 2005

   OK It begins^^

Ok the name of my new story is ANCIENT PHASE ^^,now before i start the story i will have to explain that this is a futuristic world so things are pretty high tech^^.The charcters in this story have the same names but you might see that there personalities are different all except for two(my favorite characters tejin and Katema)Now here is the story to Ancient Phasee.

Prolouge:Tejin a boy who is very oofy and outcasted by them all only takening in by one,and the girl of his dreams,a sweet,beautiful,warmhearted girl named Katema.Tejin is not your ordinary kid he isnt afraid of anything,hes not afraid to stand up to anyone,and is one of the nicest ,gofiest people you will ever meet but what peole dont like about him is when he was a little boy he was transported to the phase world which makes him basically a alien ventho he looks like them.he isnt very smart but what he lacks in brains he makes up for in his fighting abilities.now each person has the phase in them which is a force that sleeps within the body allowing them to change itno super humnas or what i like to call (Ki warriors)So basically there whole appearnce change but there is something different about the one boy Tejin ,two phase powers lie within him so they dont like him so now that you know the backround ,here are the character descriptions.

Tejin
appearnce:red eyes ,white crazy,long hair with red streaks going threw all of them even tho his eyes are red they are very gentle ^^.

personality:very goofy but brave and also has a smart mouth form time to time ,but loves Katema.

age:16

Katema
apperance:white greenish eyes,with pink long hair that drapes over her shoulders,loved by all^^

personality:very kind to all especially Tejin,gentle but also will fight if she has too and if she ever gets mad that personis in for a world of hurt.

age:16

Ok more descriptions will come these are just the two that are in this chapter now it begins ANCIENT PHASE

Chapter:The Phase inside him awakenings^^

tejin walks down the street thinking

Tejin:"i dont really wanna catch those hi teck buses i get more exercise like this ^^

store owner:goodmorning tejin^^

tejin:"hello there how are you this morning?

Store owner:im fine you better hurray and get to school or you will b late.

Tejin:well i have to go see my view firstthen i will get there and i dont really care if im late ^^,see yah.

Store owner:that boy has such a sacred soul ^^

tejin walks to the top of a old building:wow look at this city it seems to amaze me everytime i look at it.i mean the building are so high and there are hovering cars,sky pools,i mean i can never get tired of this but i wonder what its like where im from.Well i better get going.

*goes down the steps and begins to walk on the street.

Bulies messing with a kid:hey there stupid you have to pay to walk around here.

katema:Why does he have to pay?

Bullies:well arent you just the prettiest little girl

katema:dont touch me!

Kid:leave her alone*kicks one of the bullies in the shin*

Bullies:got d*** it you stupid brat!*picks him up by the collar,you will learn your lesson.

Tejin:you wanna put the kid down and let the girl go.

bullies:who the hell are you?!

Katema:tejin^^

Bullies drop the kid:So your the outcast ,and wassup with your hair how long is it gonna grow you girl!

Tejin:its funny how the dumbest jocks find a way to pick on the smallest people ,never pick on someone there sizes*gives a slight grin*

Bullies:maybe we outta pick on you!*sinister smiles*

tejin:by all means please try!

the four bullies surround him and they all charge at once

Tejin throws his bookbag in the air then he flips backwards and kicks two of them,then puts his hands down and bounces back off of his hands and kicks the other two.

tejin thinks:that had to look good infront of Katema,holds up his hand to catch the bookbag and it hits him in the head.

katema:giggels

Tejin thinks:nooooooooooo how embarassing^^*lowers head*

kid:wow mister thank you for saving me ^^

tejin:no problem kid ^^

katema:that was a very nice thing you did tejin^^*hugs him,thank you and im off for school*

tejin blushes:she hugged me *face turnes red woooohoooooooo*

Kid screams!

tejin and Katema turn quickly!

Bully:you may have won the battle but you just lost the war!the bully throws the kid into oncoming traffic

Tejin:oh nooooooo!!!!!!!!!! tejin runs for the kid

katema:OMG Tejin hurry up!!!!!

tejin runs and grabs the kid and tosses him back too katema

The a giant truck is 5 feet away from tejin

Katema:OMG TEJIN NOOOOOOO

Tejin:Is this how its gonna end *starts yelling haaaaaaaaaaa*

A white glow comes around tejin and everything in his path is forced back!

SWOOSH!!!!!!!!!

Tejin stops and looks around

Katema:wow!!!!!!!!!

Old man:taht kid just use the ancient phase

tejin:whoa i had no idea i could do that!

Katema:tejin are you ok

Kids mother:OMg my bay thank you so much Katema

Katema:it wasnt me ,tejin saved him

people of the city:but he also destroyed this entire block!

Tejin:im sorry i didnt mean too i didnt know that i could....

people of the city:Just like we al thought you are a outcast

Tejin:im sorry i really didnt mean to.*sad lok*

People:get out of this city you outcast ,people liek you dont belong here

tejin:.........*runs away*

katema:tejin wait! she turns and looks at all of them,"HOW DARE YOU ALL SAY THAT TO HIM,I DIDNT SEE ANY OF YOU TRY TO HELP THAT KID!,YOU COWARDS HE PUT HIS LIFE ON THE LINE FOR ONE OF YOUR OWN AND TREAT HIM WITH DISRESPECT ALL OF YOU TO ME ARE OUTCAST!!!!!!!!.,sHE WALKS AWAY.

katema enters school:Has anyone seen Tejin?

Student:he hasnt even been here this morning we heard what happend it sucks but thats what happens when your a outcast.

katema gives them a cold glare

Katema thinks:i hope he is ok.

Tejin on the old building:I CANT BELIEVE I DID THAT,WHAT IS WRONG WITH ME,LIFE WAS ALREADY HARD ENOUGH AN NOW THAT EVERYONE HATES ME it will jsut make it tougher.*tears form in his eyes*I wish i could go back to where im from*punches the top of the building.

BOOM!!!!!!!!!

THE BUILDING FALLS FROM UNDER HIM

Tejin:oh noooooooo AHHHHHHHH!

tejin begins to fall from 100,000 feet up towards the ground

I hope you all like this chapter this is the first so tell me what you think about tejin and his situation ^^ ttyl hugs and kisses


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