Saturday, December 2, 2006

   Here it is the whole chapter 1

Chapter 1(Ancient Trance)
Ok im about to start a new story which will most likely be my best and most concentrated one yet so here goes.

Welcome to a world where nothing is at all what it seems.People live there everyday lives as everything has a certain cycle but little do you know the cycle is about to be broken as all worlds collide and and there must be a winner but which world will win? "The demonic,the angelic,earth,or a world of a new breed of humans? These new humans would be almost powered up version of humans or what they call Aura controllers.The Aura controllers are little in number,there only like 5 left that i know of but they are only kids but we will soon see who has the advantage in this battle and dont cunt the humans out yet because with there advance technology they have been able to tap into there spirit power so they are also cocky and a forced to be reckoned with. The war among the races begins but who is the strongest?

Noahsa:Ok well another day of training for me just like always.I wish i would just get a real mission sometimes! Im good and im sure the government has realized it by now so why do the push aside my abilities. I know i have a temper problem but sheesh!!!!! I CANT TAKE THE BOREDOM!

strange voice:Well maybe if you had patience and concentraiton then you would achieve better standards such as i instead of complaining why dont you go and train. Your lowlevel of concentration makes me look bad.

Noahsa turned and looked at Rin.

Noahsa:Why is it that everytime i begin to think to myself then you come outta no where to give your ignorant input. What makes you think that my training cant compare to yours because your a hybrid! You know your really full of yourself and i would love to teach a person like you a lesson!

Rin: well whenever you achieve the power to do so then let me know. Ha ha ha ha ha. You might be a aura controller(new breed human) but you lack the intlligence to be one. There are only five of you left so i pity your race.

Noahsa gave Rin a angry look and charged at him.

Noahsa:dont you insult us like we are not suppose to be here because of what you are! We breath and live just like any other being!

Rin with ease begin to dodge Noahsa flurry of punches and sent a knee to his gut as Noahsa's eyes widened and he fell to the ground coughing up spit.

Rin:Never attack someone if you have no chance of winning. Or if you do,

Rin stared at noahsa with a cold look on his face.

Rin:BE PREPARED TO DIE!

Rin left the room and Noahsa layed there on the floor.

Noahsa:I read that movement just now but he was to fast for me to even react. I will beat you RIN!

"THIS JUST IN A ANNOUNCEMENT HAS BEEN MADE! ALL AURA GAURDIANS PREPARE TO LEAVE NOW! THERE IS A ARMY OF DEMONS MARCHING TOWARDS THE EAST TO THE PRINCESS LEAVE AT ONCE!"

Noahsa eyes widened brightly.He ran to the office yelling.

Noahsa:GENERAL PLEASE LET ME GO!PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!

General:NO! your to reckless!

Noahsa:you have to let me go please! she is one of my kind! it will be my first time seeing another like myself please! I will be with the gaurdians and you know im capable of taking care of myself please!

General: I SAID NO NOAHSA!

Noahsa:this is a bunch of bullshit! I have been training here for a damn year and you have not given me not real assignment! Do you not trust my abilities! If not then just say so because ill leave and as far as i am concerned i have no problems with leaving and ill go help the princess myself!

General:OK NOAHSA IF YOUR THAT CONFIDENT ABOUT YOUR ABILITIES THEN GO WITH THEM TOMORROW BUT ANY SCREW UPS AND YOU WILL BE SENTENCED TO DEATH! GOT THAT!?

Noahsa:FINE BY ME!*GRINS* ITS EITHER PROVE MYSELF OR DIE! WHAT WARRIOR WOULD HAVE A PROBLEM WITH THAT!?

Noahsa walked outta the office and and into his room.He needed to get rest for his big debut tomorrow. He would be with the 5 guardians tomorrow so he had to be prepared.

Noahsa:Its finally my turn to show what i can do!

Later that night Noahsa dreamed.

*dream taking place*

Strange voice:Noahsa when you come tomorrow tell your people to stay outfront because thats where they will attack.Me and my people will take care of the front you just dont allow any demons to get in from the back.

Noahsa:Wait who are you? How do you know my name?

Princess Tsukiko:Its because i am the princess and i am like you but i take it you havent learn how to use the concentrated part of your powers tomorrow but you will be forced to tomorrow. Bye.

Noahsa woke up as he saw it was morning.

Noahsa:was that a dream or was it real?

He heard the hrons go off as the aura guardians were about to leave.

Noahsa:WAIT!!!!!! IM COMMING!

Noahsa got ready as quickly as possible and jumped out the window and ran after the carrage.The towns peoiple laughed as he chased it dwon and hopped on.

Noahsa:Thats ok, You all laugh now because
when i return im gonna be hero!!!!

Noahsa said that proudly with his eyes closed smiling.A apple was thrown as it hit him directly in his face and he fell back into the carrage.Everyone laughed and Noahsa heard a voice as someone with a napkin wiped his face off. Noahsa looked up and saw that it was one of the Aura Guardians,she was a female.

Katema:Hey little one you should be careful when you say things like that.Everyone might not take a liking to it.

Sosai:Hey Katema dont cater to that brat! He shouldnt even be here.

NOahsa smiled at Katema then heard Sosai's remark.

Noahsa:Thank you Katema! Hey jerk! I got here because of my skills so dont underestimate who or what i am! That will be your only warning.

The others grinned.

Sosai:You got a big mouth kid!

Katema smiled and chuckeled.

Katema:Hey from now Noahsa I will dubb you as my little brother. If you see me in trouble then i will help you and vice versa.How about it?

Noahsa:Its a deal sis!

Katema smiled.:Were here everyone lets go!

Noahsa:ALRIGHT!!!!!

Everyone:JUST STAY OUTTA OUR WAY KID!

Katema:Just follow me Noahsa.

Noahsa:ok.

They allwalked out as the demon army was approaching already.

Sosai:THERE HER NOW! GET READY! LETS GO INSIDE!

Noahsa:Just like the dream Noahsa whispered.EVERYONE PLEASE LISTEN TO ME! WE HAVE TO PROTECT THE FRONT BECAUSE THERE IS ANOTHER ARMY COMING FROM HTE BACK BUT THE PRINCESS CAN HANDLE HERSELF! SHE WAS NOIT ABLE TO BRIEF US ON THE

Sosai:SHUT UP!!!!!!! IM GIVING THE ORDERS!

Noahsa:sheesh! Ok ill protect the front i promise i will let no one get to the princess.

After Noahsa said this then the demons were visible.

Sosai:Kill thenm all!

Noahsa looked around waitinf or a opponent as a demon jumped from behind him and he turned quickly as he held out his hand yelled.

Noahsa:yahhhhhhhh

A crystalized sword appeared from his hand and he sliced the demon as the demons blood spilled on his face.He was in shock this was his first time killing anything and another demon approached.Katema looked up.

Katema:OH no!!!!!! Noahsa!!!! she threw her sword and it pirced the demon right before he attacked Noahsa.

Katema:Noahsa focus! Im here you have nothing to be worried about.

Noahsa:Ye....yes sis! Then everything before Noahsa eyes turned black

Princess Tsukiko:Noahsa its me why arent they listening to what you said.

Noahsa:There jerks!

Princess Tsukiko:Ok well dont let them approach us from the front.

Noahsa:How can i see you and how come i can here you? Your...your...beautiful!!!!

Princess Tsukiko:*blush* focus on the fight!

Noahsa:Right!!!!

Katema had been calling out at Noahsa for the last 5 min.

Katema:Noahsa look out!!!

NOahsa:Im on it sis!

Noahsa looked up as four demons approach from all sides.He flipped back also kicking one demon and before his hand hit the ground he made his sword appear again as he bounced himself off the ground away from the others.

Noahsa:COME AND GET ME!*GRINS*

Katema: *smiles* there you go! I knew you were good!

Noahsa and the others were protecting the front but what was happeneing in the back where the princess was.From what we understand it was another army in the back. Noahsa and Princess Tsukiko can communicate but he loses sight of whats hes doing.A new enemy was approaching.Lets see what happens next and what are the powers of the Noahsa and Princess Tsukiko?*Aura controllers* I hope you all like this chapter because the next one has alot of action.Tomorrow chapter 2 and character descriptions

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