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Tuesday, January 24, 2006


   poetic?
decided to put this up cuz i haven't done much here lately (and i need someone to critisize this... it doesn't even look poetic, i just wrote it just cuz i love looking out my window..)

the first we saw the sunrise,
the cherry blossoms, falling for me and you
you skipped a beat for me,
i let my mind go in tune with yours.
the blinding sunlight gleamed,
magnifying those brilliant orbs of light
in your eyes.
we merged together, danced between
the cloudless sky.
your crystal clear laugh will not be
forgotten in my memory
as the maple leaves descended to earth
your mind drifted to an unknown galaxy
leaving me behind, under the
cruel sunset.
and as the cold moonlight gently inks
the four walls of myself,
i watch the frosted window
to wait for the next season to
pass my soul
and waiting for your shadow to pass
the door once more...

well, a nin HAS to be poetic sometimes. well, that's all i really wanted to say (other than the fact that i REALLY need to fix this site up...)
cyas, if y'all care
tanuki-san

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