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Friday, June 3, 2005


HERES THE CONTESTANTS
LAST CALL FOR ALL POETRY SUBMISSIONS!!!!

Ok guys well you heard right, i posted the poetry contestants and here they are:

SESHOMARU ;)
(her poem was untitled)

Have you ever felt like there was more?
Like what you want most is not what you were looking for?
Like everything you have is'nt yours?
Some days its like i have no mind.
Some days i think i'm out of time.
Some days, the things i want are the things i cannot find.
Have you ever cried yourself to sleep?
Lie awake in bed and weep?
Because the one you treasure, you cannot keep?
Some days i have no mind.
Some days i know im out of time.
Some days, the things i want are the one's i cannot find.
Have you ever wanted to try again?
Erase what you've done and try again?
Take back the horrible things you've done and said, and then...


LADYLENAJADE
with her poem 'Eternal Something or Other'

When I want to describe
the way that I feel for you,
How I care for you,
What you mean to me,
words fail me
and back into the
hellish pit of darkness
I fall to.
Old wounds throb
as new ones take their place,
the tears I cry
can no longer express the pain
that I will be going through,
they're just a reaction
something that always happenes
the smell of fresh blood
fills the small dark room,
my eyes close
and I think of you
right before I fall
into eternal slumber.

BURNING DEAMON
With her poem 'Cant Fade'

Years of being obsessed in such a love
I could never forgot the memories of me and you
Offering my love to you
Having the feeling you would open you heart to me
Believing you had feelings for me
In Moon's reflection I knew we weren't for each other
You only loved me as a friend
Wind blowing told me it was a risk I had to take
Now I can't believe, live and survive because destiny didn't accept me
All I can do in life is forget the past because it will only bring more tears
Even though your away you will always be in my dreams
Forever will I hold our memories in my heart because nothing like this will ever fade
Am I suppose to follow the road I'm ordered to
Now there is no hope
After all what happened is suffering
Death will be my escape from madness
My life with out you will forever be nothing but empitness

SANGO18
With her poem 'Time'

Time by sango18
The raindrops fall,
To the earth,
Far or near,
They are heard,
We remember the raindrops in our minds,
Because we have blessed time,
They come when all is calm,
And piece of mind,
The raindrops fall at this time

Those are the contestants so far and you can still enter. The deadline is midnight tonight (june 3). I would love if you guys could give feedback on your favorites to help with judgeing ^_^
GOODLUCK TO YA!
Toki

PLEASE VISIT PEIBU'S SITE (no 's') CAUSE SHES FEELING KINDA DOWN RIGHT NOW SO IM SURE SHE WOULD APPRECIATE IT....THANKS GUYS

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