Tuesday, May 17, 2005

Hey!
Ok I finally finished part of my fanfic! It's for Pretear ok here it is...

*Leafenia*


‘Himeno’ ‘Yea, what is it Hayate?’ ‘Himeno, I…I…’ ‘HAYATE!’ Himeno turned and pointed ‘Wha…demon larva?!?!’ Himeno has a confused look ‘What’s a demon larva doing in Leafenia?’ ‘Damnit Shin! He must’ve left the Road of Light open again.’ ‘But I thought all the demon larva were gone.’ ‘MOMMY! DADDY!’ Himeno and Hayate look to see were the noise is coming from. In unison both yell ‘What the hell?!?!’ ‘Oooo Mommy and Daddy are bad.’ Himeno and Hayate turn there backs to Sasame. ‘Just when exactly did we become his parents?’ Hayate jabs his thumb at Sasame. ‘I guess since that day…’

*Flashback to Human World 5 years ago*

‘No Sasame don’t do it!’ Takako jumps in to protect Sasame. ‘Takako, you idiot! Stay back!’ –Thwack- ‘NO!! TAKAKO!!’ ‘Sasame! Look out!’ ‘Huh? AHHH!!!’ ‘No!! SASAME!!!’ – Himeno! The demon larva! - ‘Right! KAZE NO SWORD!!’ As the demon larva disengages, Himeno (as the Wind Pretear) runs over to Sasame and Takako. ‘Hayate, can we save them if we give them leafe?’ – Yes, but they’ll be reborn and you might even die- ‘I don’t care! Here goes!’

*Leafenia*

‘Yea, that’s right. So it’s all your fault’ ‘HOW IS IT MY FAULT?!?!’ ‘You’re the one that said –let’s give them leafe’ ‘But you never…’ ‘AHHH!! HELP!!’ ‘Himeno!’ ‘Right’ Himeno and Hayate prêt. ‘Ooooo pretty colors…’ ‘Kaze no sword!’ Himeno flies back to watch the demon larva disappear. Seconds go by and it’s still there. ‘Uh…Hayate, what’s going on?’ –I don’t know…unless…- ‘What?’ –It couldn’t be. That probably wasn’t the core you idiot- ‘Ok…if you say so.’ Himeno starts attacking the demon larva all over. Soon she steps back yet again. The same thing happens. ‘That wasn’t the core huh?’ –Never mind! Let’s just get outta here! - ‘Right. Sasame!’ Himeno grabs Sasame and teleports back to her world.

*Human World*

‘KEI, GOH, MANNEN, HAJIME, SHIN!!! COME HERE NOW!!!’ ‘Yo Hayate, don’t get so angry. Learn to keep your cool’ ‘Shut up Mannen this is no time to play’ ‘Hayate, what’s wrong?’ Kei asked in a serious voice. ‘We’ve got trouble. Come with me.’ Everyone follows Hayate. ‘Himeno, stay here.’ ‘Why should I have to? I’m part of this team to!’ ‘Just stay here ok?!?’ ‘I see how it is!’ Himeno storms off. ‘Nice Hayate’ ‘Shut up Goh!’ ‘He, whatever, it’s fun teasing you about Himeno.’ ‘O shut up.’

*Himeno’s House*

‘Man, why didn’t he want me to come? It’s not fair!’ ‘Himeno? Is that you?’ ‘Huh? O, Takako.’ ‘You were talking to yourself. Is everything ok?’ ‘O yea every things fine. No need to worry about me!’ ‘Weres Sasame?’ ‘O…um… he’s with Hayate and the others. Look I gotta go. See you later Takako.’ ‘Bye Himeno!’


*Some old abandoned building*

‘So Hayate, what’s up?’ Everyone was curios now because Hayate hadn’t said a word. ‘We’ve got trouble in Leafeina’ ‘Yea…we already know that’ Goh said sarcastically. Kei elbowed him in the stomach. ‘Ow, what was that for?!’ ‘You know what it was for you idiot. Go on Hayate.’ ‘Thanks Kei. Himeno and I were walking in Leafenia…’ ‘Ooo like a date?’ ‘NO WAY! SHUT UP MANNEN!!’ as Hayate blushes ‘Hey just let Hayate talk!’ ‘We were walking through Leafenia and a demon larva showed up.’ ‘That’s a problem?!? You could’ve just preted with Himeno and kicked that things ass!’ ‘We did. It wasn’t a normal demon larva Mannen. She attacked every where. Yet nothing happened.’ ‘Hmmm. It couldn’t be could it’ Kei had asked. ‘That’s what I thought’ ‘If that’s the case, then we need all the help we need.’ Hajime stated. ‘Yea, 7 Pretear’s. That’s a lot.’ Mannen said. ‘No! We have Himeno and Takako! That’s enough!’ ‘But that only suits two knights. What about the other 5 of us?’ ‘We can’t stress out Himeno or Takako. Himeno’s already stressed with exams and Takako’s still young.’ ‘HAYATE! YOU DUMBASS! YOU KNOW THAT WE NEED ALL & PRETEARS!!! WITHOUT THEM THE WHOLE WORLD WILL DIE!!’ Goh was pissed now. ‘FINE YOU GUYS WHAT YOU WANT! I DON”T CARE ANYMORE!!!!!’ Hayate leave’s and slams the door behind him, making parts of the roof fall.


*Park*

‘Is that you Himeno?’ ‘O Hayate. What’s up?’ ‘Look. We need to find 5 more Pretears.’ ‘So weed have one for every knight?’ ‘Yea. Without every knight having a Pretear to prêt with…’ ‘To prêt with what?’ ‘…The world may be destroyed.’ ‘THAT WOULD BE HORRIBLE! Hayate, is there anything I can do to help?’ ‘Yea, choose the knight you want to be with, that way no one else can prêt with him.’ ‘You know how that is Hayate.’ ‘What? Who? O I know, Goh. You’ve been hanging around him a lot lately.’ ‘NO! You idiot! The knight I’m gonna choose is you!’ Hayate turns and blushes. ‘Are you sure? You can’t change once all the other Pretear’s are chosen.’ ‘Hayate, of course I’d choose you because…because…’ ‘Himeno…’ Both look at each other. ‘Yea go for it Hayate!’ ‘Mannen?! What the hell are you doing here?!?!’ ‘Hey chill out I followed you here. I thought you were against telling Himeno?’ ‘She’s part of the team to. She has the right to know.’ ‘Ok. But I know she’s gonna pick me, right Himeno?’ ‘Uh…’ ‘Leave alone Mannen. She already chose.’ ‘Yea and that’s me.’ ‘No, Mannen. I chose Hayate.’ ‘WHY WOULD YOU CHOOSE HIM?!?!’ ‘She has her reasons Mannen. Just go look for the others. Takako has to be with Sasame, so we need to find a Pretear for the rest of you.’


Let me know what you think of it! ok later!
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