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Saturday, March 31, 2007


The Suspence Story is Here!!!
i now have the first chapter of the suspence story. this story may be a little fritening so i have to put this PG-13 rating for scary bloody scenes and minor cusing (later in the story). well then, here it is,hope your heart stats to pound.

To Not See

By: keitaro-fan



Chapter 1
The eyes to see dark


Clouds, my favorite things to see. The dark clouds are always the best to watch, to see if they will cry over you in hard, or soft tears. These dark clouds hung above my head as I began to walk home. I wished that it’ll rain, maybe it will make my hair flat. My name is Satomi and I have grayish color hair with blue tips. I’m a guy with about ear long hair and I have blue eyes, which sort of get on my nerves. Well I’m walking home after a long day at school, in which I’m not very good at. I walk home thinking to myself , wouldn’t it be cool to be a hero for once, not be called a bad guy. Wouldn’t I do any thing for that, and if you could of guessed, I have no friends. Not one, no one wants to be near me, and all I want is a person who will stand by my side throughout my whole life.
I get closer to my house, the rain coming down in sprinkles on my face. I stop to admire my poor looking house which is very cheaply made. It has pieces of paint peeling off the walls and the roof tiles are slowly falling off, leading to leaks in the house (I always say that everyone’s favorite thing has a bad side). I open the door to my home, hear the door creak, and walk inside.
I walk further into my house, but something felt different about it.
“Mom,” I called into the house. No answer. I thought to myself, she probably had to stay at work longer. I throw my stuff on the couch and walk to my room forgetting about the 100 point assignment that’s due tomorrow. I walk further until I heard a squishing sound under my foot. It felt wet and fresh.
“Water, it must be water,” I talk to myself a lot (another reason I have no friends). I continue to walk, and as I do, the squishy sound gets louder. I finally turn on the light to find that it wasn’t water, it was blood! I freaked out! I stumbled and fell on my butt, feeling the moist blood against my back. My head hit the wall which made me look up. I wish didn’t because what I saw next was much worse. A bloody body hung there on my ceiling, then the most frightening thing happened, it talked.
“ Satomi, Satomi,” it’s voice was weak, but then I knew who it was. It was my mother. I screamed and ran to my room trying to forget what I had just seen. I looked into my mirror and seen that my had turned red! My eyes went wide and the second after that, the same figure from my ceiling appeared behind me in the mirror. I closed my eyes and when I opened them the moist feeling from before was gone and I heard the front door open.
“Satomi, are you home?!” It was my mom.

To be continued…

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