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Tuesday, November 8, 2005


   'nother poem
this one came into being when we had to write an extended metaphor poem in school last year. I entered it in an art contest that our English teacher made us enter, but it didn't win any prizes. oh well. here it is:

Thunderstorm


He shows his anger and might
Through his growling and roaring.
Glaring daggers at the sea,
But never truly scoring.
A boat scrambles from his power,
Oarsmen strongly rowing.

Winds whirling wildly,
His breath pummels the ocean.
The water cowers away,
The surface whipped to motion.
He revels in his massive strength
And releases pent up emotion.

He saddens as the sun returns
And pelts the sea with tears.
His short reign is ended
By the appearance of what he fears.
The sun reclaims the sky as hers
And the clouds, banished, clear.


well? what do you think? oh, yeah, would you please give me a hug? I'll be very happy every time I get one!

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